2010_英语_高考满分作文

2010英语高考满分作文作文题目假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Bob将于九月到你所在城市的建新华文学校学中文，来信请你在学校附近为他找一套住房。请根据图画提供的信息，写信介绍住房的情况，并告知住房面积为25平方米，月租500元。注意：1.词数：100左右：2.参考词汇：房租—Tent(n.).I’mveryhappytoreceiveyourletter,andI’mgladtohearthatyouwillgotoChinatolearnChinesehere.Ihavealreadyfoundafiatforyou.ItisonFangcaoStreet,whichisnotfarfromJianxinChineseSchool.BusNo.11cantakeyouthere,anditisonestopbeforetheChineseSchool.Theflatisonthethirdfloorwith3rooms,oneofwhichisbedroom,theothertwoarebathroomandkitchen.Thereareabed,asofa,adeskandsomechairsinthis25square-metressmallfiat,andtherentis500yuanpermonth.Maybethisfiatisnotasgoodasyourwish,butI’lltrymybesttomeetyourneeds.Ifitisnotsuitableenough,writetomeandIwilllookforanotherbetterplace.Hopeyouwillcomeheresoon!Allthebest!Yours,LiHua满分理由本文格式正确，意思表述完整，行文流畅自然。作者在写作过程中注意长短句并用，还使用了以‘which，’引导的非限定性定语从句，从而使文章层次分明，富于变化，不愧为考场佳作。===========================================DearBob,WelcometoChina!Youwrotetometofindaplaceforyou.IhavefoundanapartmentonFangcaoStreetnearJianxinChineseSchool.Itisonthethirdfloorandthere’rethreeroomsinit:abedroom,akitchen,andabathroom.Thereisabed,asofa,adeskandachairinthebedroom.Thehouseis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanpermonth.Alsofromthishouseyoucangettoyourschooleasily.JusttaketheNo.11busatthebus-stopinfrontofthebuilding.Itisonlyonestop.Atlast,willyoupleasetellmethetimeyouarrive?ThenI’Ubeabletomeetyouattheairport,seeyou.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua满分理由本文格式正确，内容完整，表述清楚，衔接紧密流畅，时态语态使用准确，特别是结尾末段适度的发挥，既充实了内容，又符合逻辑，成为本文与众不同的亮点。===========================================DearBob,Howareyouthesedays?I’msogladtoknowthatyou’llcometoourcitytolearnChinese.Youaskedmetofindaplaceforyou.NowI’vefoundonewhichIthinkisprettygood.TheplaceisonFangCaoStreetwhichisneartheNo.11busstop.It’sjustonestopawayfromJianxinChineseSchool.Therearethreerooms,akitchen,abathroomandabedroom.Thoughitisnotverybig,only25squaremetres,Ithinkitissuitable.Bytheway,therentis500yuanpermonth.Ihopeyou’lllikeit.Ifnot,I’lltrytofindanotherplaceforyou.Yours,LiHua满分理由本文内在逻辑性很强，由远及近。由外及内，层次分明，错落有致。同时让步状语从句运用得恰到好处，很出彩，再则结构完整，从开头的问候语到结尾都很完备。===========================================作文：DearBob,I’mgladtohearfromyou.Welcometoourcityinseptember.I’vefoundasuitablehouseforyou.ThehouseisonFangCaoStreet,notfarfromtheJianxinChineseSchool.IfyoutaketheNo.11bus,itisjustonestop.Itisaflatonthethirdfloorofabuilding.Ithasthreerooms,aliving-room,abathroomandakitchen.Youcancookyourself.Themirror,thebasinandthebathtubareveryconvenientforyou.Intheliving-room,thereisabed,asofaandadeskwithchair.Thedeskisnexttothewindow.Itwillbegoodforstudy.Thetotalsizeis25squaremetresandtherentis500yuanamonth.Willyoubesatisfiedwiththisflat,oryouwantanotherone?Justletmeknow.I’lltrymybesttohelpyou.Yours,LiHua满分理由本文内容详实，描述具体细腻，用词适当准确，如“suitablehouse”、“notfarfrom’’等，另外文中的选择疑问句也很有新意。=========================================2009年5月1日世博会志愿者招募仪式正式启动，志愿者是办好世博会的一支重要的工作力量。另外，志愿者或做家教，教小孩子阅读、算术，或打扫公园与街道，或到医院或疗养院帮忙。你愿意做志愿者吗?请陈述理由写一篇100字左右的短文。OnepossibleversionIwouldliketobeavolunteerinmysparetime.Myreasonsareasfollows:Firstofall,itisagoodvirtuetohelpothers,eveninmodernsociety.Weallneedothers’helpincasewegetintotrouble.Secondly,weareabletobetterourselvesbyhelpingothersbecausewegainvaluableexperienceandbuildupourconfidencewhileservingothers.What’smore,volunteeringmakesusfeelbetteraboutourselves,thusmakingourlifemoreenjoyable.Moreimportantly,wecanmaketheworldabetterplacetoliveinbyvolunteeringtoimproveit.Insummary,volunteeringcanmakeadifferencetoourlife,soIthinkitisveryrewardingtobeavolunteer.=========================================不同人都有着不同的习惯，个人习惯直接关系着公共卫生。请根据下列要求，写一篇120字的英语短文，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。1.介绍有些人不同的好习惯和坏习惯。2.习惯与卫生的关系：习惯是卫生基础;不好的习惯，会导致一些传染疾病传播，如AIDS，SARS，H1N1流感等。3.你的看法……。OnepossibleversionItisgenerallybelievedthatdifferentpeoplehavedifferenthabits.Somepeopleareaddictedtohabitslikedrinkingandsmoking,whileotherspayspecialattentiontohealthydietandnevertastethingslikealcoholandcigarettes.Itgoeswithoutsayingthatthereiscloserelationshipbetweenpersonalhabitsandpublichealth.Ontheonehand,goodhabitsserveasthenecessarybasisofpublichealth,thatistosay,withoutgoodhabits,publichealthcan’tbeguaranteed.Ontheotherhand,infectiousdiseaseisthenaturalresultbroughtbydirtyhabits,likeAIDS,SARS,H1N1fluandsoon.Personally,Ithinkitishightimeweplacedemphasisonimprovingpersonalhabitsandpublichealth.Ifwemindourmannersandbehaveourselveswell,theremustbeabrightandencouragingfuture.========================================假如你是李华，你学校内有人得了猪流感，正在接受治疗，你校学生非常害怕，请你写一篇短文谈谈如何预防猪流感?1.平时外出戴口罩，少去人群集中的公共场所,避免接触病人等。2.勤洗手，保证充足睡眠，多锻炼多运动等。3.词数:120字左右4.文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数参考词汇:猪流感swineflu;口罩facemask.SwinefluhascometoourSchool!However,thereisnovaccinetoprotectitsvirus.Howdoweprotectusfromit?OnepossibleversionWeadvisethatyoushouldwearfacemaskandavoidgoingtothecrowdedplacewhenyougoout.Weremembernottobeinclosecontactwiththepatientsinfectedwithswineflu.Ontheotherhand,thebestwaytostayawayfromthisvirusistowashyourhandsoften,andmakesurethatyouhaveenoughsleep.Atthesametime,weshoulddomoreexercisesothatwecanbuildupourbody.Wearesurethatwemustovercomethethreatagainstswin