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1、1Withthepurposeofgivingyouageneralideaofourproduct,wedecidetoencloseacompletesetofleaflets.Youcanseeit.(conciseness)2Shypeoplearelikelytobepassiveandeasilyinfluencedbyothers;theyhavelow-esteemofthemselves.)(toachievegreateremphasisoncertainparts)3Mr.SmithusuallylikestodrinkallkindsofwinesthatareproducedinFrance.(concise)4.Hehadwonseveralprizesinthecompetition,andwedon’tlikethewayhetreatedotherpeople.(toachieveunity)1.(Togiveyouageneralideaofourproducts,weencloseacompletesetofleaflets)(conc。
2、iseness)2.(Shypeople,havinglow-esteemofthemselves,arelikelytobepassiveandeasilyinfluencedbyothers)(toachievegreateremphasisoncertainparts)3.(Mr.SmithusuallyprefersFrenchwines.)(concise)4.(Althoughhehadwonseveralprizesinthecompetition,wedon’tlikethewayhetreatedotherpeople.)(toachieveunity(1)Wecanimaginethebeautifulsurroundings.(2)Therearemanytreesalongthestreets.(3)Thereisacleanriverinthecity.(4)Therearemanyfishesintheriver.(5)Therearewillowtreesontheoneside.(6)Therearesomepiecesofgrasslandon。
3、theotherside.(7)Therearemanyflowersonthem.Justimaginethebeautifulsurroundingsifwehavemadeourcitiesgreener.(2)Greentreeslinethestreet.(3)Acleanriverwindsthroughthecity,inwhichalotoffishesabound.(4)Ononesidestandrowsofwillowtrees.(5)Ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslandsprinkledwithmanyyellowandredflowers.Imaginethebeautifulsurroundingsheretenyearslater.Greentreeslinealongthestreetwithstraighttrunksandbranches,likethepoliceguardsthewholecity.Acleanriver,withawidevarietyoffishes,wines/goes/flows/。
4、runsthroughthecityfromwesttoeast.Ononesidestandrowsofwillowtrees,wavingtousinthewind;Ontheothersideliesastretchofgrasslandsprinkledwithmanyyellowandredflowers.IgotupalittlelaterthanusualonSundaymorning.Iwashedandhadaquickbreakfast.ThenIstartedgoingtotowntobuythedictionaryrecommendedbytheteacher.AttheschoolgateIsawLiPing.Iaskedhimifhewasgoingtotowntoo,andhesaidthathewas.Sowedecidedtogotogether.Allthebuseswerecrowded.Wehadtowaitforalongtimeatthebusstopbeforewecouldgetonabus.Anhourlaterwegotofftheb。
5、usatabusystreet.Therewerethreebookstoresthere.Wewenttothefirstoneanddidn’tfindthedictionary.Thenwewenttothesecondoneandtheshopassistantsaidthatthedictionarywassoldout.Ifinallyboughtthedictionaryatthethirdbookstore.AfterthatLiPingandIwenttootherstoresandboughtvariousthings.Wereturnedtoschooljustintimeforlunch.IgotupalittlelaterthanusualonSundaymorning.Afterwashingandhavingaquickbreakfast,Istartedgoingtotowntobuythedictionaryrecommendedbytheteacher.AttheschoolgateIsawLiPingandaskedhimifhewasgoingt。
6、otownaswell.Wedecidedtogotogetherwhenhesaidhewas.Asallthebuseswerecrowded,Wehadtowaitforalongtimeatthebusstopbeforewecouldgetonone.Anhourlaterwegotoffthebusatabusystreet,wherethreebookstoreswereavailable.Wewenttothefirstoneanddidn'tfindthedictionary.Thenatthesecondone,theshopassistantsaidthatthedictionarywassoldout.Ifinallygotthedictionaryatthethirdbookstore.AfterthatLiPingandIwenttootherstoresandboughtvariousthings.Wereturnedtoschooljustintimeforlunch.IgotupalittlelaterthanusualonSundaymorning。
7、.Afterwashingandhavingaquickbreakfast,Iwenttobuythedictionaryrecommendedbytheteacherinthetown.AttheschoolgateIsawLiPingandaskedhimifhewasgoingtotownwithme.Withoutanyhesitation,herepliedyes,andwedecidedtogotogether.Afterwaitingforalongtimeatthebusstop,wesuccessfullygotonacrowedbus.Anhourlaterwegotoffthebusatabusystreetwherethreebookstoreswereavailable.Wewenttothefirstonewithoutfindingthedictionary.Thenwewenttothesecondone,onlytofindthatthedictionarywassoldout.Fortunately,wefinallygotthedictionary。
8、atthethirdbookstore.Paragraphwriting1.Whatisaparagraph?Aparagraphisacollectionofrelatedsentencesdealingwithasingle,completetopic.TopicsentenceSupportingsentencesClosingsentenceStructureofaParagraphreadParagraphAandParagraphB,thentellmewhichisbetter,AorB?Ihaveanoldbicyclewhichmyfathergavemeformy12thbirthday.Ireceivedalotofpresentsthatday,butthebicyclewasmyfavoriteone.Wehadcakeandicecreamattheparty.Thenwerodeourbicyclestothepark.Jimhadanaccidentonhisbicycleandhadtoseeadoctor.Thenitstartedtora。
9、in.Irodemybicyclebackhomeanddidmyhomework.AfterdinnerItookmybicycleoutagainandrodearoundtheneighborhood.Allmyfriendswantedtotrymynewbike.Itwasmyfavoritepresentthatday.WhatabusybirthdayIhad!Mybicycleisold,butitisn'tuseless.ManyofmyfriendsandfamilymemberstellmethatIshouldbuyanewbicycle,butmyoldonestillworkswell.Icanrideittothestores,tothepark,andtoschool.Itissooldthatnoonewillstealit.Someonemightstealanewbicycle,butnotanoldone.Lastweekmymother'smotorcyclehadaproblem,sosheborrowedmybicycletovisith。
10、erfriend.Sometimesabicycleisevenmoreusefulthanamotorcycle!Weshouldnotthrowthingsawayjustbecausetheyareold.Weshouldusethingstilltheybecomeuseless.2)Whatmakesagoodparagraph?Tobeaseffectiveaspossible,aparagraphshouldcontaineachofthefollowingtraitsorelements:unity,coherence,atopicsentence,adequatedevelopment,abriefconclusion(dispensable).TherearethreereasonswhyCanadaisoneofthebestcountriesintheworld.First,Canadahasanexcellenthealthcaresystem.AllCanadianshaveaccesstomedicalservicesatareasonable。
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