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中考作文集锦1.作文写作思路中考常考问题及形式:1.中考作文常见文体:夹叙夹议2.中考作文常见形式:写回信;中英提示写作,话题类作文。写作原则:1231原则(1句问候,2句概括来信中的问题,3条建议及建议原因,1句祝福)3.写作能力之外的得分因素:字迹、分段4.写作注意以下几点:避免使用汉语式英语,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。注意长短句交错,几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板长短句交错使用(注意:应突出主题句;长句子并非越长越好)。【阅卷关注】阅卷关注哪几点——一、要点:全部图片或问题(要点决定分/语言准确);二、单词:提示词语全用上+单词拼写(字数达标/标点符号和大小写/fourteen等数字);三、语法:高级(多用句型/适当加点谚语)+语法出错(三单、时态、避免Chinglish);四、卷面:书写规范(过渡词可使上下文连贯)+不要求漂亮但要求工整。作文分类击破【一、写人记事类】(感恩/感谢朋友老师父母、难忘经历、微笑、鼓励、毕业感想、暑期计划等)【01参考范文----适用于感恩/感谢、难忘经历、最喜欢的老师/朋友等:】Mylifeinmiddleschoolwillcometotheendsoon.Duringthepastthreeyears,myEnglishteachergavemesomuchhelpthatIwillneverforgether.IwasnotgoodatEnglish,ItriedmybesttolearnitbutIcouldn’tgetgoodgrades,soIdecidedtogiveitup.MyEnglishteacherknewthat,shenotonlyencouragedmetogoonlearningbutalsohelpedmewithmyEnglishafterclass.Withherhelp,Imadegreatprogress.IwasmovedbyherandIwasreallythankfultoher.NowIfeelmoreconfidentthanbefore.I’msureIcanlearnEnglishverywellinthefuture.【02参考范文----适用于难忘的学校活动,、鼓励、合作、坚持不懈的精神等:】Duringthethreeyears,ourschoolhasheldvariousactivities,amongwhichtheactivityofclimbingXiangshanleavesmethedeepestmemory.Lastterm,myclassmatesandIhadaschooltriptoXiangshanPark.There,weweredividedintogroupsandthefirstgroupthattoppedthemountainwouldwinabigprize.Ourgrouptriedourbesttoclimbasquicklyaspossible.ButsoonIfeltdizzyandwasoutofbreath.Noticingthis,myteammatescametomeimmediately.SomeofthemgavemecandiessothatIcouldgetmoreenergy.OtherscarriedthebagformesothatIcouldclimbthemountaineasily…“Youcandoit!”everyoneencouragedme.Atthatmoment,Ifeltdeeplymovedandreallypowerful.Atlast,wewerethefirsttotopthemountain.Thisactivitynotonlygaveusachancetokeepourbodyfitandenjoythebeautifulscenery,butalsoletmefeelthepowerofteamwork.Aunitedgroupcanbringuswarmthandstrengthandcanleadustosuccess.【03参考范文----感恩父母:】There’snodoubtthatparentshavegivenmealotsinceIwasborn.Withtheircare,Igrowuphappily.SoIthinkitisnecessarytodosomethingspecialforthemtoshowmygratitude.Bothofmyparentslovemusic.SoitwouldbeagreatideatobuyawonderfulCDforthem.LastSunday,Iwenttoabookstoreandchoseoneamongthetop10.Whilewewerehavingdinnertogether,IplayedtheCD.Itwasbeautiful.Withgreatjoy,theygavemeawarmhugandabigsmile.Ifeltverysweet.IwasreallyproudthatIdidsomethingformyparents.Theirsmileswerethebestencouragementforme.Imadeupmymindtodothingslikethismoreoften.【04参考范文----帮助他人、志愿活动:】Ithinkhelpingothersisimportantandnecessary.Takingpartinvolunteerworkisoneofthegreatestwaystogiveahandtothosewhoneedhelp.AndIlikeitverymuch.IrememberIhelpedtheoldpeopleintheoldpeople’shomelastSaturday.First,Icleanedtheroomandthewindowsforthembecauseitwasnotconvienientforthemtodosuchthins.What’smore,Itoldthemsomeinterestingstories,sangsomeEnglishsongsforthemandtheymovedtotears.Whenitwastimetosaygoodbye,Ihuggedthemandpromisedtoseethemagain.Everyonemayhavetroubleinlifeandourlittlekindactcanmakeabigdifferenceintheirlife.Infact,helpingothersishelpingourselves.Iwilldothesameinthefuturebecauseitcanbringmeandotherpeoplehappiness.【05参考范文----喜欢的hobby、活动:】Itisgoodtolearnaboutyourschoolactivities.NowI’lltellyouaboutmine.Atmyschoolwehavemanyfunactivitiestotakepartin.Wehaveswimming,basketball,badminton,andpingpong.Myfavoriteactivityisbasketball.Iplaywithmyfriendseverydayafterschool.Basketballisateamsportwhereteam-matespasstheballtoeachothertothrowitintoahoopforpoints.Theteamwiththemostpointsattheendofthegamewins.Inbasketballitisgoodtobetallbecauseitiseasiertoscorepoints.Iliketoplaybasketballbecauseitisateamsportanditisalsoagoodwaytogetexercise.Basketballisalsoagoodgametolearnhowtoworkwellwithothers.【06参考范文----Hobby、读书类:】IhavegreatinterestinreadingmagazinesbecauseIlikereadingmanykindsofarticlesinthem,suchstories,news,science,jokesandsoon.Thestoriesgivemelifelessons,thejokesmakemelaughandthenewskeepmeknowingwhathapensaroundme.Icangetlotsofinformationaswellasenjoyalotofbeautifulpicturesinthemagazines.Ienjoyreadingmagazinesbecausetheycannotonlyhelpmestudybetterandbutalsomakemerelaxedandhappyeveryday.【二、给予建议类】(一句问候、两句问题)第一段:很高兴收到来信针对问题回答或体谅别人的感受主动提出给别人建议第二段:3条具体建议及原因第三段:提出希望和祝愿开头句:表达同情理解+主动提建议IunderstandyourfeelingsbecauseIoncehadthesimilarproblemasyoudonow.It’sverycommonforstudentstodosth.andmanystudentshavethesameproblemlikeyou.Letmeofferyousomeusefuladvice.Here’smyadvice.Mysuggestionsareasfollows.建议类句型:•Youaresupposedtodo....•You'dbetterdo....•Whynot/don'tyoudo....•It'sagoodideatodo....•IfIwereyou,Iwoulddo...结尾句:•IhopewhatIsaidcanbeofsomehelptoyou.•Justhaveatry.I’mlookingforwardtohearinggoodnewsfromyou!•Tryyourbest,andyou'llmakegreatprogress!建议类作文写作思路(1231)【07学习类----参考范文:】DearLucy,I’mveryhappytohearfromyou.Don’tworrytoomuch.It’sverycommonforstudentstodislikememorizingandmanystudentshavethesameproblemlikeyou.Here’smyadvice.Firstofall,youhadbetterpreviewthenewlessonsandwritedownthedifficultpointsbeforelessons,whichcanmakeyoubecomeinterestedinwhattheteacherssayinclass.What’smore(Besides),youshouldlistencarefullyandtrytotakepartintheclassactivities.You’llfindthatEnglishandhistoryarenotasboringasyouthink.Lastbutnotleast,youalsoneedtoreviewthelessonsregularlyafterclass.I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