9年级Writing practice

WritingpracticeSmallthingscanmakeabigdifferencezhanghong作文评分标准（上）书面表达:15分。考生应根据题目要求，采用适当的时态、语态、句式和词语完整准确地表达所提示的内容。分四档评分。第一档：基本符合题目要求，内容完整，层次结构清晰，表达清楚，语言无误。13-15分。第二档：基本符合题目要求，内容较完整，层次结构较清晰，表达较清楚，语言有少量错误。9-12分。第三档：部分内容符合题目要求，内容不够完整，层次结构不够清晰，表达不够清楚,语言有较多错误。4-8分。第四档：不符合题目要求，整篇表达不清楚，或只照抄，拼凑几个提示词语。0-3分作文评分标准（下）注意：1、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分2、字数少于60，从总分中减去2分3、评分时，应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性，上下文的连贯性及语言的得体性。4、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面，评分时，应使其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。5、如书写较差，以至影响交际，将分数降低一个档次6、如果时态出错较多，从得分中扣除1-3分7用铅笔答题，不给分1.Readthesearticlesandfindwhatthebestarticleis.(accordingtothestandard)2.Givemarks3.Giveyouropinionsaboutthem.DiscussionExample1Therearemanybeautifulthingsinourlife,butwealwaysleavesmallthingsout.Smallthingscanalsomakeabigdifferencetoourlife.“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway”,thismeansasmallappleadaycanmakeyouhealthy,Andifweallgooutbybikeoronfoot,ourenvironmentwillbebeautifulagain.Ifwecutdownthewasteofwateronedayforeveryone,thenwecansavewaterthatisenoughforfamilytousetilltheydie.Soit'simportantforustodothesesmallthingstomakeourlifemoreandmorewonderful.Don'tforgetthatsmallthingscanalsoplayanimportantpartinourlife.Example1SmallthingscanmakeabigdifferenceTherearemanybeautifulthingsinourlife,butwealwaysleavesmallthingsout.Smallthingscanalsomakeabigdifferencetoourlife.“Anappleadaykeepsthedoctoraway”,thismeansasmallappleadaycanmakeyouhealthy,Andifweallgooutbybikeoronfoot,ourenvironmentwillbebeautifulagain.Ifwecutdownthewasteofwateronedayforeveryone,thenwecansavewaterthatisenoughforfamilytousetilltheydie.Soit'simportantforustodothesesmallthingstomakeourlifemoreandmorewonderful.Don'tforgetthatsmallthingscanalsoplayanimportantpartinourlife.SmallthingscanmakeabigdifferenceInourlife,smallthingscanmakeabigdifference,Forexample,Whenwethrowrubbishintobin,ourenvironmentwillbecomegood.Inourclass,Thereweretwopeoplefindsomeproblems,Buttheybelievetheyareright,sotheybecameangryandtheydidn'tsayanythingeachother.Atthattime,iftheycansaysomethingandaskforhelp,theymaybegoodfriends.Atparkthereistoomuchrubbish,ifeveryonehaveabag,andthrowrubbishintothebag,theparkisclean.So,pleasedomoresmallthings,Becausesmallthingscanmakeabigdifference.Example2Example2SmallthingscanmakeabigdifferenceInourlife,smallthingscanmakeabigdifference,Forexample,Whenwethrowrubbishintobin,ourenvironmentwillbecomegood.Inourclass,Thereweretwopeoplefindsomeproblems,Buttheybelievetheyareright,sotheybecameangryandtheydidn'tsayanythingeachother.Atthattime,iftheycansaysomethingandaskforhelp,theymaybegoodfriends.Atparkthereistoomuchrubbish,ifeveryonehaveabag,andthrowrubbishintothebag,theparkisclean.So,pleasedomoresmallthings,Becausesmallthingscanmakeabigdifference.Example3SmallthingscanmakeabigdifferenceLastweekend,Ourfamilymovedtoanewhouse,ThehousehasabiggardenandIcanplayonthereattheafternoon,Iplayedwithmybrotherinthegardenminuteslater,Ifoundthatagirlwasseeingus,Irealizedthatshewantedtoplaywithus,SoIbroughtherasweetsmileandsaid:''CanIplaywithnow?beautifulgirl.''Shesmiltatusandcame.Atnightwhenwehaddinner,Iheardsomeonewasknockingourdoor.Tomysurprise,thegirlandhermothergaveussomefoodthen,Weatetogetherandhadagoodtime.Sometimesjustasmilewillliveuswarmth!Example3SmallthingscanmakeabigdifferenceLastweekend,Ourfamilymovedtoanewhouse,ThehousehasabiggardenandIcanplayonthereattheafternoon,Iplayedwithmybrotherinthegardenminuteslater,Ifoundthatagirlwasseeingus,Irealizedthatshewantedtoplaywithus,SoIbroughtherasweetsmileandsaid:''CanIplaywithnow?beautifulgirl.''Shesmiltatusandcame.Atnightwhenwehaddinner,Iheardsomeonewasknockingourdoor.Tomysurprise,thegirlandhermothergaveussomefoodthen,Weatetogetherandhadagoodtime.Sometimesjustasmilewillliveuswarmth!pollution(throwlitters...)experiencehelpothersinventionssmallthingsmakeabigdifferencesmallthings:1.goodthingsorbadthings2.goodbehaviourorbadbehaviour...3.experiences(helpful,unforgetable,movedyou...)makeabigdifference:changealot,correction时态用错1.Ourairbecomeworseandworse.2.Everyonedon'tcutdownthetreesandsaveswateritmakesabigdifference.3.Eventhoughthisthingsisverysmall.4.Wecandon'tthrewrubbishintheriver.5.Myteachersareusuallytalkwithme.6.Thirdly,don'tusetheplasticbagswhenweshopped.becomesdoesn’tshopthingcan'tthrow×correction：动词用错1.Ilikeeatjunkfood.2.Junkfoodarenotgoodforourhealth.3.Protectenvironmentcanmakeabigdifference.4.Weoftentodosomthingathome.5.Stopthefactiesdirtywaterintotheriver.6.Theynotallowmetodance.7.Iwasbelateforclass.8.smilingmakeabigdifference.9.Whenourparentsdon'tathome.10.Wecantakeafterourselves.eatingProtectingdofrompouringisdo×makeslookstaycorrection代词用错1.Wecanuseourselfbags.2.Itshowsmeshouldhelppeople.ourownIcorrection词性用错1.Ibelieveableyoucandoit.2.Youcanfindoutsomewords'mean.3.Thisbehavemovedme.4.Idisagreethisthink.5.Polluteairisharmfultouslives.6.Istartedtoeathealthfood.believemeaningbehaviourPollutedidea.healthycorrection语法错误：1.Itisahappythingmakesmeimpressive.2.IfeltIhaveabigproblem.3.IfoundthatIhavenomoneytopayforit.4.Ifeveryonehaveabag,andthrowrubbishintothebag,th