Persuasive Writing 英语写作――劝说建议

PersuasiveWritingSomeQuestions:Canyouimaginesomecaseswherewepersuadeothersorgetpersuaded?SomeExamples:TVShoppingFake“Babaka”Sarah’sspeechonthefuneralofDianaTheLayersofPersuasion（劝说的层次）Attitudethesis(论点)Reason/goalargument（论据）ClosingConclusion(结论)Self-introThesis:WhyyouneedaBabaka?Argument:HealthArgument:PriceArgument:Anmp4Conclusion:YoudoneedthisTheFlowofPersuasion（劝说的流程）Writingtask假设你是某大学天文系的一名学生，请你写一封建议信，劝说哥白尼发表他的理论。你可以从以下几点阐明理由：(1)现存理论存在的问题；(2)哥白尼为证实自己的新理论多年来所做的努力；(3)科学的发展需要新理论的提出。请注意书写工整，标点正确，层次分明，表达清晰。1.Attitude我非常想阅读你的关于太阳系的新理论。我希望你能发表它。Iwouldverymuchliketoreadyournewtheoryaboutthesolarsystem.Ihopeyouwillpublishit.2.Reason/goal(1)我明白现在的理论所存在的问题。Iunderstandtheproblemswiththepresenttheory.2.Reason/goal(1)如果地球是宇宙的中心，那么行星的运行方式不是你所预料的那样。提示：Theway….isnotwhat…if…Thewaytheplanetsmoveisnotwhatyouexpectediftheearthwasthecentreoftheuniverse.2.Reason/goal(2)我了解你的观察已经认真地进行了多年。Iknowyourobservationshavebeenverycarefullycarriedoutovermanyyears.我理解你担心自己的理论发表后会发生什么事。Iknowyouworryaboutwhatwillhappenifyoupublishyournewtheory.2.Reason/goal(2)不管人们怎么反对这个新理论，时间会证明你的理论正确与否。2.Reason/goal(2)Nomatterhowpeopleareagainstit,timewillprovewhetheryourideasarerightorwrong.3.Conclusion因此我希望你能认真地思考我的建议。SoIhopeyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsiderationseriously.•IamacollegestudentmajoringinAstronomy.I’mwritingtoyouwiththehopethatyoucanpublishyourtheory.Thereasonsareasfollows:The1stParagraph－Intro&AttitudeTostartwith,Iunderstandtheproblemswiththepresenttheory.Thewaytheplanetsmoveisnotwhatyouwouldexpectiftheearthwasthecentreoftheuniverse.SoIagreewithyouthatweneedanewtheory.The2ndParagraph－PresentArgument•Inaddition,Iknowyourobservationshavebeenverycarefullycarriedoutovermanyyears.Nowyoumusthavethecouragetopublishthem.Sciencecanneveradvanceunlesspeoplehavethecourageoftheirbeliefs.Lastbutnotleast,Iknowyouworryaboutwhatwillhappenifyoupublishyournewtheory.Buthoweverpeopleopposeit,timewillshowifyourideasarerightorwrong.The3rdParagraph－PresentAugument•SoIhopeyoucantakemyadviceintoconsiderationseriously.The4thParagraph－ClosingThankyou!