2014年雅思大作文总汇

2014年雅思大作文总汇ByJasonCHENG•2014年1月9日A类大作文题目：•Thebestwayforthegovernmenttosolvethetrafficcongestionproblemsincitiesistoprovidefreetransport24hoursaday,7daysaweek.•Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?•第一段：社会背景描述+正向/反向观点+自己观点•社会背景：government,trafficcongestion+正向观点：理想策略---完全免费交通+自己观点：1提升基础设施2优化公共交通•Theincreasinglycongestedtrafficinmetropoliseshasperplexedthegovernmentforlong.Someindividualsdeemthattheidealstrategytotacklesuchissueistoprovidecompletelyfreepublictransportation.Onthecontrary,Ideemthattheavailableapproachestocopewithsuchissueshouldincludeinfrastructureupgradingandpublictransportationenhancement.=52•第二段：论点+论据+例证+结论•论点：合理规划道路与城市建设的布局+论据：合理长期规划---起根本作用+例证：北京交通现状+结论：此做法优势凸显•Firstandforemost,thekeysolutionisthereasonableplanningofroadsandlayoutofurbanconstruction.Inotherwords,withoutrationalandlong-rangeplanningespeciallyinconurbations,overcrowdedtransportationwouldfailtobeworkedoutfundamentally.Forinstance,duringtherapiddevelopmentofurbanization,Beijinglacksrationalandimpeccableinfrastructureofroadwaysandscientificroaddesign,whichgiverisetoserioustrafficcongestion,especiallyduringrushhours.Hence,thesuperiorityofsuchpracticeisprominent.•第三段：论点+论据+例证+结论•论点：提升公共交通+论据：公交不便---驾驶私家车---交通拥挤+例证：等车+拥挤状况----浪费时间+丧失舒适度•结论：改善现有交通状况是必要的•Secondly,toupgradepublictransportationservicesisanothervalidapproach.Conspicuously,theinconvenienceofthepublictrafficsystemcompelspeopletodriveprivatecars,whichcannotshirkitsresponsibilityofescalatingtrafficjams.Forinstance,thelongwaittimeforbusesormetrosandthethrongingsituationsonthemmeanahugewasteoftimeandsacrificeofcomforttocommuters,pushingsomeofthemtocommuteintheirownvehicles,akeyfactortotheformationofsuchstatus.Therefore,itisessentialtoimprovethecurrenttransportationsystem.=90•第四段：让步段：另一种观点合理性+对此观点反驳•另一种观点：全天候免费公交---合理1节省人们日常交通费用2便利公益服务•反驳观点：此做法不切合实际1造成政府财政负担2阻碍交通运营的维护以及监管•Admittedly,round-the-clockfreechargeofpublictransportationhasitsownrationality.Notonlywillitsavethetrafficexpensesofpeopleintheirdailylife,butitwillalsobecomeaconvenientpublicservice.However,suchpracticeisimpractical,inviewofaggravatingthefinancialburdenontheauthorityandduetotheshortageoffundshinderingthemaintenanceandsupervisionoftransportationoperationswhichcaninducethetrafficaccidence.=70•第五段总结段：总结观点+提出建议•总结观点：支持观点1道路基础设施改善2交通系统改进+提出建议：政府与市民积极合作•Inbrief,theupgradingofroadinfrastructuresandimprovementofthetrafficsystemarethekeytosettlingcongestioninroads.Meanwhile,vigorouscoordinationbetweenthegovernmentandcitizensisalsoconducivetoalleviatingdeterioratingroadsituations.•2014年01月11日雅思A类大作文题目：•Moreyoungpeopleintheworkforcechangetheirjobsorcareerseveryfewyears.Whatarethereasonsforthis?Dodisadvantagesoutweighadvantages?•第一段：社会背景+(正向/反向观点)+自己观点•社会背景：更换工作+年轻人自己观点：1优点大于缺点2原因：1自身发展2更好的就业机会•FrequentJob-hoppingamongyoungpeoplehasbecomeanincreasinglywidespreadsocialphenomenon.Iamconvincedthatthebenefitsofsuchpracticefaroutweighitsrisks.Thereasoncanbeascribedtoyoungpeople’sconsiderationofself-developmentandtheavailabilityofmoresuitableandbetterjobopportunities.•第二段：论点+论据+例证+结论•论点：换工作—职业规划的一部分+论据：职业选择—根据自身的性格以及喜好+例证：年轻人—工作往往是盲目的，缺乏考虑+结论：跳槽是正确的•Firstandforemost,changingjobsorcareersmaybepartofone’scareerplan.Inotherwords,onlyafteryoungpeopleworkforaperiodoftimecantheymakeadvisablecareerchoicesaccordingtotheirpersonalityandpreferences.Forinstance,agreatnumberofyoungpeoplehavenoideaaboutwhatsortofjobissuitableforthemaftergraduationbuttocarryonwiththejobstheytakewithoutcautiousconsideration.Hence,selectingjob-hoppingisacorrectchoice.•第三段：论点+论据+例证•论点：换工作—更好的发展+论据：互联网上的大量的工作机会+例证：就业网站提供机会—导致年轻人换工作•Secondly,youngpeopleoftenchangejobsforbetterdevelopmentinothercompanies.Meanwhile,abundantworkingopportunitiesarewellpresentedandpromotedontheinternet,makingitpossibleforyoungpeopletobeconstantlyinformedofgoodopportunities.Forexample,onsomejobpostingwebsitessuchas•让步段：另一种观点的合理性+对此观点反驳•另一种观点：换工作—原来公司人才外流+信息泄露对此观点反驳：鉴于自身职业规划+更好的薪金发展空间•Admittedly,aseriesofconflictsandissuescanarisefromfrequentjobchanging.Theconflictsincludebraindrainsoforiginalcorporationsandtheoutflowofcoreinformation,whichcanexertirreversibleandnegativeconsequencesonthedevelopmentofcorporations.However,talentflowhasturnedouttobeaninevitabletrend,inviewofpeople’scareerplanningandduetobettersalariesanddevelopmentalspace.•结论段：总结观点+提出建议•1总结观点：支持观点：职业生涯规划+更好工作机会=换工作2建议：公司个人携手规避由此导致不利影响•Inbrief,occupationalplanningofyoungstersandbetterjobopportunitiesaretherootcausetojobhopping.Meanwhile,boththeenterprisesandindividualsshouldevadeunfavorableconsequencesevokedbysuchpracticetothegreatestextent.•2014年1月18日雅思A类大作文题目：•Childrenfinditdifficulttoconcentrateorpayattentioninclass.Whatarethereasons?Howcanwesolvetheseproblems?•Schools,whichhavebeensupposedtobeimpartingknowledgeandshapingcharacters,havebeenlessofafocus,ifnottotallyignoredbychildren.Thereasonsaremultipleandacco