《高考写作讲解》PPT课件

高考作文第一节：阅卷老师的五大敏感点1、卷面2、分段3、句子（单词、语法）4、过渡——过渡词5、内容——“内容定档，语言定分”1课时一、内容三大高分秘诀：1、coverallthepointsgiven；2、expandsomedetails；3、aseasyaspossible.二、过渡利用过渡词对主题句进行拓展1、First，....;second，...2、Foronething,...Foranother,...3、Ontheonehand,...Ontheotherhand,...三、句子1、单词：避免重复！2、语法：复杂、高级！黄金圣衣句型：清：Itisclearthat...明：Itisobviousthat...疑：Thereisnodoubtthat...否：Noonecandeny（否认）that...不用：Needlesstosay,...走：Itgoeswithoutsayingthat...四、分段分段：每种题型有其分段方法，基本规律是：一个要点写成一个自然段段落：依据“TEEC法则”来写T:TopicE:ExplanationE:ExampleC:Conclusion例题分析写一个书信的自然段，告诉对方要理解母亲。（注意：应先写主题句，再利用“过渡词”进行段落拓展）Thereisnodoubtthatyouaresupposedtounderstandyourmother.Firstandforemost,itisobviousthatyourmomgavebirthtoyouandhasbroughtyouup.Additionally,noonecandenythatshelovesyoumorethananythingelseintheworld.Lastbutnotleast,thereisnodoubtthatyouaretooyoungtoliveallbyyourself.五、卷面1、书写：唯一要求：clean&clear；三种建议：、大小一致，、落在线上，、避免毛刺。2、修改：最好只画一横，严禁涂成黑蛋！第二节：写作步骤一、读题——明确文体、时态、人称，边读题边写出核心单词二、写作1、列出中文提纲：文章分几段？每段写什么主题句？用哪些“具体内容”进行扩展？2、造句：主题句怎么造？扩展句怎么造？3、升级：句型能否升级？单词能否替换？如果有的地方不会写，能否换个句子？2课时例题分析仿真一一、读题：1、求职信；2、第一人称I；3、一般现在时；4、post;teachChinese;oralChinese；payfor;beinterested;comprehensivequalities;beaccepted.二、写作（3步骤）1、中文提纲第一段：（1）问候，（2）自我介绍，（3）写信背景：听说对方需要一个中国人教汉语并陪伴练习口语，愿意为此支付费用，我很感兴趣，（4）写信目的：应聘第二段：我有几个优势。第一...第二...第三...第四....第三段：我的愿望、表示感谢、期待回信。2、文章框架DearEditor,Howareyoudoing?IamLiHua,ahighschoolstudentfromXinhuamiddleschool.IreadinthenewspaperthatyouneedaparttimeEnglishjournalist.Iamquietinterestedinit.NowI'mwritingtoapplyforthisposition.Ihaveseveraladvantages.I'msureIamfitforthejob.TherearefourmainreasonswhyI'mthebestchoiceforyou.Tobeginwith,.....Moreover,......What'smore,.....Finally,......Hopefullythechancewouldbegiventome.Thanksforyourtimeandpatience.Lookingforwardtoyourreplyatyourearliestconvenience.Bestwishes!问候自我介绍写信背景写信目的应聘优势愿望、感谢，期待回信3、填充内容DearEditor,Ihaveseveraladvantages.I'msureIamfitforthejob.TherearefourmainreasonswhyI'mthebestchoiceforyou.Tobeginwith,peopleoftensayIamaknowledgeablepersonwhoiscrazyaboutreading.Moreover,livingintheUSAforoneandahalfyears,IamgoodatEnglishcommunication.What'smore,asthevicechairmanofthestudents'union,Idowellinteamworkandthusgetalongwithpeopleeasily.Finally,workingintheschoolbroadcastingstationfor6month,itiseasyformetohandlethejobinyourcompany.仿真一范文DearJason,I'mLiHua,...I'veseenyourpostontheInternetthatyouwanttofindaChinesetolearnChineseandpracticeoralChineseandyou'dliketopayforit.I'mquiteinterestedinit.Foronething,I'manativeChinese,bornandbroughtupinBeijing.Foranother,Chineseeducationhappenstobemymajoratuniversity,soIknowwhat'sthebestwaytoteachothersandhelpthemlearnChinesewell.Besides,myEnglishisquitegood,whichcansurelybenefitourcommunication.I'dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutit.First,whendoIhavetopractisespeakingChinesewithyouandhowlongdoesthepracticelasteachtime?Besides,howmuchcanIgetpaid?Consideringmycomprehensivequalities,IbelieveI'myourbestchoice.IdohopeIcanbeaccepted.第三节：句型设计三大理念一、细节丰富一个句子多写些内容，使句子生动、形象，这需要使用一些语法技巧对句中的名词、动词进行修饰，常见的方法是增加定语从句和状语从句。二、避免重复1、连续两个句子不重复使用相同单词；2、连续两个句子不重复使用相同句式。三、化繁为简1、将多套主谓结构的复杂句变成一个主谓结构的简单句；2、写作高手应尽力减少“无内容”、“无意义”的表达，如“黄金圣衣句型”等只能适当使用以增强语气3课时一：如何在句中加细节？如何造句子？1.把中文说清楚；2.套句型；3.添修饰。（九大绝招）（重点3绝招）绝招之一、抽象变具体尽力选择表意明确的单词，并适当增添细节成分。【例句1】1.Igotoschooleveryday.2.Withtherisingfromtheeast,I,togetherwithTomandJerry,ridetoschoolat6:00everymorning.【例句2】1.MrSmithisagoodteacher.2.MrSmithisakind,patientandknowledgeableEnglishteacher.绝招二、加词用于修饰名词和动词在一些“光秃秃”的名词和动词上面加上修饰成分。Youshouldunderstandyourmom.这是一个苍白无力的句子,我们可以利用下面总结的方法，给you、mom、understand等词加上修饰成分，将这个句子变得加“形象生动”。（一）名词的修饰手段1、在名词后面加上一个同位语：如：Ray,adropoffallingsun.Me,anameIcallmyself.常用的同位语技巧：将代词具体化We---Wehighschoolstudents...我们高中生...WeChinese...我们中国人...Weteenagers....我们青少年...WeChineseyounggeneration...我们中国年轻的一代...Youshouldunderstandyourmom.加上这样的同位语：You,ateenageboywhocannotliveallbyyourself,shouldunderstandyourmom.2、在名词前面加上一个或多个形容词：Youshouldunderstandyourkind,dearandhard-workingmom.3、在名词后面添加定语从句：Youshouldunderstandyourmomwholovesyoumostintheworld.4、在名词前面或后面加上非谓语动词作定语Standingthere,Lilylookssad.例题广一模：调查寒假生活：时长约20天thewintervacationisabouttwentydayslong.InChina,thewintervacationisabouttwentydayslong.InChina,thewintervacationinwhichwecandomanyinterestingthingsisabouttwentydayslong.（二）动词的修饰手段一、在适当的位置加上副词、时间状语、地点状语：时间、地点通常放在：句前、句尾：句前：Everymorning,IreadEnglish.句尾：IreadEnglisheverymorning.副词常放在动词前或句尾：1.Youshoulddeeplyunderstandyourmom.2.Ilookedathimhappily.3.Idon'treallyknowhim.常用副词：surely、certainly、extremely、badly、surprisingly（令人惊讶的）、unfortunately、amazingly（褒）、unexpectedly(出人意料地)二、将几个意思接近的动词并列使用：1.Youshouldunderstandyourmom.2.Youshouldunderstand,loveandappreciateyourmom.3.Youshouldunderstandandloveyourmomaswellasappreciateeverythingshehasdoneforyou.绝招三、巧加“从句”写完一个简单句子，在后面追加一个“从句“（4种）。（一）加“原因”从句：because...，for..，consideringthat...【例句】1.ItgoeswithoutsayingthatyoushouldlearnEnglishwellconsideringthatitisamustinthefuturesociety.2.Youcanchatmorewithyourclassmates,consideringthatwehaven'tknownyoudeeply.4课时（