八年级英语写作(教学课件)

安子岭总校上课老师：袁亮初中英语作文写作精讲作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇字：工整、清楚；词：不拼写错误；能适当掌握高级词汇；句：不出现语法错误；句子要逐渐使用复杂的从句句型，为文章添彩；段：段落内容有逻辑性；篇：合理安排文章布局；要有逻辑与联接；绝对好用的替换词Good–wonderful,excellent,gorgeous,fabulous,amazing,magnificent;Important–significant,essential,necessary,carryalotofweight;But—However,So—therefore,hence,Primarily,Firstly,oneofthemostessentialreasons,tostressfirstSecondly,abovefromthefirstpoint,InadditionThirdly,Lastbutnoleast,Inconclusion,tomakeaconclusion,tosummarize…举例Forexample—Forinstance,totake….asanexample,tostateafactasanvividexample,经典句型：1、It’ssaidthat…2、Nomatterwhat/which/who/where/when/whose+从句3、Itis/was+被强调部分+that(who)+剩余部分4、Ithappened(chanced)that+从句=sb.Happened/chancedtodosth.=sb.didsthbychance5、由as引导的非限制性定句从句/由where,when引导的定语从句6、It+谓语+时间段+before+主语+谓语(before引导的是时间状语从句）7、When/Solongas/Aslongas/Once+从句，+主句（从句也可放在主句之后）8、Nosooner+had+主语+done…than+主语+did9、倍数表达句型倍数+morethan,倍数+asmuchas..10、形容词、副词、名词+as/though+主语+谓语+主句句式多变化要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点”,就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇这两道关。（1）句式要有变化。改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语放在句首，或用分词作状语等。[原文]Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.[修正]Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.(2)在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语从句等。①强调句[原文]MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.Ithadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.[修正]MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.②由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中文中的“所……”，有很强的概括，如：[原文]Wehadtostandheretocatchoffender.[修正]Whatwehadtodowas(to)standthere,tryingtocatchtheoffender.③由with或without引导的短语。如：Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.④分词短语．如：Satisfiedwiththeresult,hedicidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.⑤倒装句Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.⑥省略句Ifso,victorywillbeours.Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary.⑦对比，这在中文中也是常使用的方法．如Failureisnotacrime,butfailuretolearnfromfailureis.WhenIplay,Ifeelexcited,andafteritIfeelrelaxed.(3)通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。[原文]Hestoppedusanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.[修正]Hestoppedusanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.[原文]Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.[修正]Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess.2012年河北省中考写作题：Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AStoryaboutMyParent(s)”.(以“爸爸/妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）我的父亲母亲先中文构思尽量避免复杂的词句将中文翻译成英文加入适当的连词，组成文章注意全文用过去式写作关于职业的单词scientist科学家detective侦探fisherman渔夫firefighter消防员journalist新闻记者lawyer律师barber理发师singer歌手engineer工程师worker工人painter画家writer/author作家businessman商人pilot飞行员dentist牙医nurse护士accountant会计waiter/waitess服务员librarian图书管理员surgeon外科医生pharmacist药剂师anesthetist麻醉师manager经理governor政府官员President总统policeman警察policewoman女警察waiter服务员waitress女服务员driver司机，驾驶员真题举例1）AStoryaboutMyParent;2)Inmum’sfamily,thereweresevenpeople:mum’sparents,mum’stwobrothersandtwosistersandmum.Whenmumwasyoung,herfatherwasadoctorinthesmallvillageandhermotherwasjustaworker;3)Atthattime,forlackofTVandcomputer,everydayafterschoolmumalongwithherbrothersandsisterswouldgohometohelptheirmotherwiththehousework.Forexample,theyhelpedtomakesupperorwashclothes.Mumtoldmethatthoughthelifeatthattimewasveryhard,shefelthappy.Mymumwasborninasmallvillage.Inherfamily,thereweresevenpeople:mum’sparents,mum’stwobrothersandtwosistersandmum.Whenmumwasyoung,herfatherwasadoctorinthesmallvillageandhermotherwasjustaworker.Atthattime,forlackofTVandcomputer,everydayafterschoolmumalongwithherbrothersandsisterswouldgohometohelpedtheirmotherwiththehousework.Forexample,theyhelptomakesupperorwashclothes.Mumtoldmethatthoughthelifeatthattimewasveryhard,shefelthappy.比较型作文写作常用词组:PreferAtoBIshowmystrongpreferencetoA.ComparedwithA,IshedmorelightonB.IncomparisonwithA,IfindthatBismore..文章层次1、开启段落，指出自己的选择结果。2、列出原因，将一些可比项进行比较。横向与纵向。3、总结开启段落Infacingthehighschoolentranceexamination,wehavetomakechoicesaboutwhichschooltoattend.Betweenthetwochoices,Iwillchoose…..Thereasonforthatisareasfollowing.学会对比南方大学:学费8000/年招生20人无优惠政策北方大学:学费5000/年招生10人加20分优惠选择南方：1、虽然学费贵，但是招生人数比北方的多；2、自己是南方人，适合南方的生活，离家近。选择北方：1、学费便宜；2、有加分政策；3、可以体验不同的学习生活，学会独立。如何转折ThoughthetuitionishigherinthesouthernUniversity,yetIpreferthewaysoflivinghereinthesouth.TheNorthernUniversityoffersanadditional20scores.However,IstillhaveastronginclinationtotheSouthernUniversity.如何结尾Concerningthereasonsabove,Iwouldnothesitatetochoose….Inconclusion,concerningtheconvenience,thetuitionandtheotherreasons,Iwillchoose..Inall,toconclude,toputallthereasontogether,上海2012年的中考英语作文根据英文提示，以“我的心爱之物”为题写话，不少于50个词。内容必须包括英文提示中的3项要求，标点符号不占格：题目：MyFavoriteThing(s)Whatthething(s)is(are)Whenand/orwhere,andhowyougotif(them)Whyyoulikeit(them)andwhyitis(theyare)specialtoyouMyFavoriteThingIhavemanysmallthingsinmyhomesuchasstamps,toys.Butamongthosethings,myfavoritethingisagreenwatch.Itisadigitalwatchwithaduckonthebottomofit.Anditismybirth