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1欢迎使用新东方在线电子教材第一节一、考试题型1、应用文（7考）：口头作文（2考）、书信作文（5考）2、论说文（25考）：提纲作文（23考）、图表作文（2考）3、段首句作文：4考4、课程安排：1）考试题型、考试要求、评卷实例2）口头作文、书信总论3）书信详解4）论说文、翻译5、学习方法：实力（高分策略）＋技巧（万能框架）二、考试要求《大学英语考试大纲》中明确规定：四级大学英语写作考试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文；写作命题源于日常生活和有关科技、社会文化等方面的一般常识，不涉及知识面过广、专业性太强的内容。其命题方式有：给出题目、或规定情景、或给出段首句续写、或给出关键词写短文、或看图作文。要求内容切题，文理通顺，表达正确，语义连贯，无重大语言错误。6、时间要求：30分钟1）审题（3分钟）：2）写作（25分钟）：3）检查（2分钟）：语法（时态、冠词、主谓一致）、拼写、标点【2005.06】Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteashortessay[INhonourofteachersontheoccasionofTeacher'sDay].Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsfollowingtheoutlinegivenbelow:1.向老师表达节日祝贺22.从一件小事来回忆老师的教诲和无私的奉献3.我如何回报老师的关爱7、字数要求：120－150词8、写作主题：大学校园生活（学习、生活、工作）9、命题方式：段首句、提纲、命题、关键词、情景、图表作文10、具体要求：1）语言第一位：表达通顺、无重大语言错误（1）基础一般：简单原则、安全第一（2）基础较好：句子结构词多变2）结构第二位：（1）逻辑性：A.并列：and/or/butB.因果：because/inthat,since/as,forC.转折：but/however（2）关联词：3）内容第三位：Lastnight,Iwaskickedbymygirlfriend.Sheranawaywithasmallwhiteface.Sheismygreenplumandbamboohorse.NowIknowthatloveisblind.Beautyisbutskin-deep.Moneyistherootofevil.However,IonlyregretthatIhavebutonelifetoloseformycountry.Couldyoupleasetellmywhytheinjuredisalwaysme.Itishightimethatyouteachersdevotedyourlovetome.Ifyoudonotgivemefullmark,Iwillcommitsuicideimmediately.三、评卷实例11、教材第5页第1篇：中英思维差异1）中式思维：情感分段、读者领会、迂回模式、归纳式思维2）英式思维：逻辑分段、作者交代、直线模式、演绎式思维Mostpeoplethoughtthatreadbooksshouldhavebeenselectived.Butothersbelivedreadingextentivelywascorrection.Selectivebooksorreadingextensively?Sure,youcanchoiceonefrompreviousideas,ononehand,Therearetoobooktoreadforus.Weshouldchoosethosewhichweintrested,anditwouldbehelpfulforus.onanotherhand.Someone'sintrestingwaswide.Eachbookcouldbringyouspecificcontainwecouldn'treadingatonlyonelevel.Iconfirmedalloftheseideasweregoodbutweren'twise.Asareader,themaintaskistodiscovermoreandmorebooksthesecondtaskistoheldsomewhichwonderfulandhelpfulforus.Don'ttreatthesebookswithracklessabandon.Thebesttechnologyofreadingisconnect.12、教材第4页第2篇：3Ithinkreadingnotonlyselectivelybutalsoextensively.Becausethetwosidesarenotcontradict.Ourtimeislimited.Sowecannotreadeverybookintheworld.However,wewillnotbeinterestedineverybook.Weshouldreadthosebooksmaybeusefultoours,readthosebookswhichwelike.Butthosebookswhichwechoosemustbeextensivelysoitcangiveoursallkindsofknowledge,newsandsoon,italsomakeoursbecomeawiseman.Ontheonehandreadingselectivelyletoursnotwasteourtimewhichitislimitted.Moreoveritcanemphasisamongallbooksthatwecanread.Ontheotherhandreadingextensivelycandealwithallkindsofneedinourlife.Theyareallusefultoours.13、教材第5页第3篇：Somepeoplethinkreadingshallbechoosed.Becausesomebooksaregoodtohummenbeingsandsomebooksareharmfultopeople.Somepeoplethinkthatmenshoudreadbookswidely.Becausewidereadingcanhelpmangetmuchknowledge.Andmancanuseittochangetheworld.Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.Becausereadingisimportanttoman.Somebookscanhelpmanbutsomebookscanleadsomepeopletocrime.ItcanbeseeninthenewspapersandwatchedonTV.Wecanmakefulluseofsomegoodbooksandgainmoreusefulknowledge.Itcanmakeourlifemorebeautiful.wemustgiveupthoseunhelpfulbooks.Theyarenotgoodtous.Readingthemiswastingtimeandmoney.Soreadingselectivelyisanimportantpartinreading.14、教材第5页第2篇：Howshouldweread?Shouldwereadselectivelyorextensively?Everyonehashisownview.Somepeoplethinkweshouldreadselectively.Theyarguethatwiththedevelopmentofmodernscienceandtechnology,moreandmorebooksarepublished.Itisimpossibleforustoreadallthebooks.What'smore,therearemanybadbooksthatarepoisonoustoourmind,andweshouldn'treadthem.Sincewecan'treadallthebooksandweshouldn'treadbadbooks,wemustreadselectively.Butothersmaynotagree.Theyemphasizethattoday'ssocietyisnotwhatitwas.Ifonemanhasmanykindsofknowledgehe'llhavemorechancestosucceed.Ifamanknowsmuchinonefieldbutknowsnothinginotherfields,hemaybeuseless.Sincewemusthavemanykindsofknowledge,wemustreadextensively.Who'sright?Ithinkbothofthemhavesomethingright.ButIthinkweshouldreadextensivelyfirst.Weshouldreadbooksinmanyfields,andreadselectivelyinonefield.15、教材第4页第1篇：Whenitcomestoreading,somepeoplethinkthatreadingselectivelyisagoodway,butsomeotherpeopledonotagreewiththem,theythinkthatreadingextensivelyisbetter.Thosepeople,whothinkthatreadingselectivelyisbetter,believethatgoodbooksareasmanyasbadbooks.Thosegoodbookscangiveuspleasureandknowledge,whilethosebadbookscanonlyleadustothewrongway.So,theysuggestthatweshouldonlychoosethegoodbookstoreadandnevertouchthebadbooks.But,theotherpeople,whoholdthatreadingextensivelyisbetter,thinkthatonekindofbookscanonlygiveusoneaspectofknowledge.Eventhebestbookonlycontainsonefieldofinformation.So,theycaneasilycometotheconclusionthattoknowmore,toreadmore.Sotheybelievethatreadingextensivelyisbetter.4Tomypoint,weshouldchoosegoodbookstoreadandreadgoodbooksasmanyaspossible.Bythisway,wecanincreasethequalityandquantityofreading.题目：BicyclesAnImportantMeansofTransportinChina.提纲：（1）为什么自行车在中国这样普及（2）和汽车的比较（3）自行车在中国的前途Score:14BicyclesareverypopularinChina.Almosteveryfamilyinthecityhastwoorthreebicycles.Duringtherushhour,youcanseethatthousandsofpeople-manandwoman,oldandyoung-ridetheirbicyclestoworkandstudy.Thatiswhy