2016届高考英语二轮复习专题五短文改错课件3解读

29Weallknowthathealthyisveryimportanttous.Bothstudyandworkdependbystrongbodies.Doingsportsandgameshelpuskeepstrongandhealthy.Ifwedon’ttakeanyexercise，wemayfeeltiredbutgetsickeasily.Therearemanydifferentkindsofsportswecandothem，suchasplayingballgames，running，walkingandswim.However，wehavetoomuchhomeworktodoineveryday.Wehopethatwewillbegivinglesshomeworkandhavemoretimetakepartinsports.Wealsohopewhatourschoolcanholdthesportmeetingeveryterm.【答案及解析】Weallknowthathealthyhealthisveryimportanttous.Bothstudyandworkdependbyon/uponstrongbodies.Doingsportsandgameshelphelpsuskeepstrongandhealthy.Ifwedon’ttakeanyexercise，wemayfeeltiredbutandgetsickeasily.Therearemanydifferentkindsofsportswecandothem，suchasplayingballgames，running，walkingandswimswimming.However，wehavetoomuchhomeworktodoineveryday.Wehopethatwewillbegivinggivenlesshomeworkandhavemoretime∧totakepartinsports.Wealsohopewhatthatourschoolcanholdthesportmeetingeveryterm.第一处错误：考查名词。此处health做主语，所以用名词。第二处错误：考查介词。dependon/upon是固定搭配，所以用on/upon。第三处错误：考查动词。在这里是第三人称单数形式，所以用helps。第四处错误：考查连词。此处是并列关系，所以用and。第五处错误：考查代词。本句可以变为wecandomanydifferentkindsofsports，所以不需要代词。第六处错误：考查名词。由running，walking可知用swimming。第七处错误：考查介词。every前不加具体介词，所以去掉。第八处错误：考查被动。由前文的be可知此处是被动。故应用过去分词given。第九处错误：考查不定式。此处不定式作目的状语。第十处错误：考查宾语从句。宾语从句中不缺成份，故把what改为that。30Mymotherisateacherworkinakeyhighschool.Sheistoobusythatsheoftenhastogetupearlyandstayuplate.Inadditiontothis，shehardlyhasanytimestotakeexercise.Shehasbeenonpoorhealthforsometime.MyfatherandIareworriedthatshemayfallillifsheworkstoohard.ThesedaysI’mthinkingwhytodevelopmymother’sinterestinplayingsports.ConsideringthattodayisMother’sDay，Idecidedbuyapairofjoggingshoesforhim.Isecretputthemonthedeskinherstudy.Whenmymotherenteredintoherstudythisevening，shelookedsurprised，butsheimmediatelyrealizedmyintention.Shepromisesthatshewouldgojoggingeveryevening.【答案及解析】Mymotherisateacherworkworkinginakeyhighschool.Sheistoosobusythatsheoftenhastogetupearlyandstayuplate.Inadditiontothis，shehardlyhasanytimestimetotakeexercise.Shehasbeenoninpoorhealthforsometime.MyfatherandIareworriedthatshemayfallillifsheworkstoohard.ThesedaysI’mthinkingwhyhowtodevelopmymother’sinterestinplayingsports.ConsideringthattodayisMother’sDay，Idecided∧tobuyapairofjoggingshoesforhimher.Isecretsecretlyputthemonthedeskinherstudy.Whenmymotherenteredintoherstudythisevening，shelookedsurprised，butsheimmediatelyrealizedmyintention.Shepromisespromisedthatshewouldgojoggingeveryevening.【语篇导读】我的妈妈是一个重点高中的老师，她的工作很辛苦，我在母亲节那天给她买了一双运动鞋作为礼物，她很开心。第一处错误：考查非谓语动词的用法。此处work和teacher之间是主动关系，所以用现在分词working作定语，修饰teacher。第二处错误：考查固定搭配。so...that...如此……以至于……。第三处错误：考查名词词义辨析。根据文章的意思可知，此处指时间，是不可数名词，用time，times意为：时代，倍数。第四处错误：考查介词的用法。此处inpoorhealth意为：健康状况不好。用介词in。第五处错误：考查疑问副词的用法。此处意为：我在想如何培养母亲的运动兴趣，故用how。第六处错误：考查不定式的用法。此处是不定式作宾语，加to。第七处错误：考查代词的用法。此处her指母亲。第八处错误：考查副词的用法。此处修饰动词put用副词secretly。第九处错误：考查动词的用法。此处enter是及物动词，其后直接带宾语，去掉into。第十处错误：考查动词时态。根据文章内容可知，文章后半部分叙述在母亲节给妈送鞋的事发生在过去，故此处用一般过去时，用promised。31DearSir，ThankyouforinvitemetothesummerEnglishcoursesinyourschool.Asforyourchoicebetweenthetwocourses，Ipreferthefour­weekcoursebecauseofitwillallowmemoretimetodotravelingandmakealittlenewfriends.OfallthesubjectI’mlearningatschool，IlikeEnglishbest.IhadbeenlearningEnglishforelevenyearsbutmyspokenEnglishremainspoorly.SoIreallyhopetotakethischancetoimprovethem.Ifpossible，I’dliketostaywithafamilyforacoupleofdaysinorderthatIcanknowsomecustomsinEngland，thatI’mparticularlyinterestedin.IbelieveIwillhavewonderfultimethissummer.Yourstruly，LiHua【答案及解析】DearSir，ThankyouforinviteinvitingmetothesummerEnglishcoursesinyourschool.Asforyourmychoicebetweenthetwocourses，Ipreferthefour­weekcoursebecauseofitwillallowmemoretimetodotravelingandmakealittlefewnewfriends.OfallthesubjectsubjectsI’mlearningatschool，IlikeEnglishbest.IhadhavebeenlearningEnglishforelevenyearsbutmyspokenEnglishremainspoorlypoor.SoIreallyhopetotakethischancetoimprovethemit.Ifpossible，I’dliketostaywithafamilyforacoupleofdaysinorderthatIcanknowsomecustomsinEngland，thatwhichI’mparticularlyinterestedin.IbelieveIwillhave∧awonderfultimethissummer.Yourstruly，LiHua第一处错误：非谓语动词用法错误。介词for后面接动名词。句意：谢谢你邀请我参加你们学校的暑假英语课程。第二处错误：代词用法错误。从下文的：Ipreferthefour­weekcourse可知是我的选择。第三处错误：连词用法错误。因为这可以给我更多时间来旅游。becauseof后面接名词或动名词，because后面接从句。第四处错误：形容词用法错误。可数名词friends前用few修饰。第五处错误：名词用法错误。在学校所有的科目中我最喜欢英语。all后面接subject的复数形式。第六处错误：时态用法错误。根据时间状语forelevenyears可知这里用现在完成进行时。第七处错误：词性用法错误。我的英语口语仍然很差。remain是连系动词，后面接形容词。第八处错误：代词用法错误。代词it代指前面名词spokenEnglish。第九处错误：连词用法错误。我可以学习英国的风俗，这是我非常感兴趣的。这里是非限制性定语从句，不能用that，改成which。第十处错误：冠词用法错误。我相信这个暑假我会玩得很愉快。haveawonderfultime玩得愉快。32Tom’sparentsareverydiligent.Hisfatheristhekindofpersonwhonevergetsboring.Heisalwaysdoingrepairjobsaroundthehouse.It’sneverbeentheproblemforhimtorepairabrokenhairdryerandtomakewoodenshelves.Hespendsalottimeinhisworkshop，wherehe’sgotalatheandallhistoolsthere.Hismotherlikestoworkinthegarden.Herflowergardenisthemorebeautifuloneinourstreet.Italwaysmadeherhappytoharvestthefruitandvegetables，thatsheoftenusesforhersecondpassion：cooking.Sheenjoystrynewrecipes，andshelikestob