作文及新四级冲刺需牢记的700核心词

【审题】本文是一篇现象评述类作文。提纲所给框架十分清晰：开篇引出该现象，并简单评论；第二段陈述选择老师时所考虑的因素（两到三点即可），注意条理清楚；最后一段指出该做法的好处以及可能的问题，注意内容和语言的概括性（好处和问题分别阐述一至两点即可）。范文点评第一段：引出大学允许学生自由选择任课教师的现象，并简单评述其影响，结尾引出下文。第二段：分三点陈述选择教师时所考虑的主要因素，采用从主到次的顺序。StudentsSelectingTheirLecturersNowadaysmanyuniversities（1）entitlethestudentstochoosefreelytheteachersforsomecourses,（2）whichiswelcomedbymoststudents,andisbecomingthefocusofthestudentsandteachers'concern.（3）Therearemanyfactorswhichwillinfluencethestudents'choosingateacher.（4）Firstofall,（5）itisgenerallyacceptedthatateacher'sprofessionalknowledgeandabilityisthemostimportantfactor,sincestudentschoosehiscoursetolearnknowledge.（4）Moreover,（5）quiteafewstudentsthinkteachingmethodsandskillsareessentialtoagoodteacher.Hemustknowhowtoteach.（4）Inaddition,ateacher'shumorsenseisalsooftenanimportantfactormanystudentswillconsider.Undoubtedly,freechoosingofteachers（6）areverybeneficialtobothteachersandstudents.（7）Ononehand,itcanprovideagoodchanceforateachertoproveandshowhisability.（7）Ontheotherhand,bythisway,studentscanchooseteacherstheylikeand（1）使...有权利做某事（2）引导非限制性定语从句（3）承上起下（4）条理清楚（5）注意变换句式第三段：首先指出这种做法分别给教师和学生带来的好处；然后简要阐述可能出现的问题。obtainmoreinitiativeinlearning.（8）However,sinceitisafreechoice,fewexcellentteacherswillbecomethefocusofmoststudents'choosing,（9）whichwillleadtoanunreasonableclasssizeandinfluenceteachingeffectseriously.（6）对...有益（7）条理清楚（8）表转折：注意关系副词的使用（9）引导非限制性定语从作文是各类英语考试中得分率最低的题型之一。同学们在掌握了一定的作文模板，和基本的语法、词汇、句型用法之后，如果能在作文中创造一些词汇和句型的闪光点，必定会使你的作文如虎添翼！高分作文标志:1：是否长短句交叉；沪江四六级、是否会使用插入语；3、用词是否多样，准确，形象，尽量使用能够吸引阅卷老师眼球的闪光词；4、关键词是否换用，切勿老用重复词；5、句型使用是否准确、地道。下面给出写好一篇作文的注意事项：1.适当用被动替换主动，这样能更客观的反映事实,句子开头不要总是用we/I(比如写结尾时不用weshouldpayattentionto而用Attentionshouldbepaidto.)举个经典结尾2004年六月六级作文的最后一段：Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Bydoingso，itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.沪江四六级善于使用插入语，比如说把副词、连接词等，作插入语放在中间，一般放在主语、动词或者助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。如however/therefore/forexample/Ibelieve做插入语放在中间，一般放在动词，助动词后，两边分别加上逗号。比如说：Otherindividuals,however,taketheattitudethat…3.一定要学会换词，换形象，具体的替换太宽泛的。(考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等)比如上面例子中，applicable替换proper,approaches替换ways,implement替换carryout,sharpenone’scompetitiveedge替换enhanceone’scompetitiveness(提高某物竞争力)下面举一篇南京工程学院某位同学写的优秀作文(14分)的例子，看看他是如何运用各类写作技巧的。这位同学把老师上课讲的各类写作手法和精彩替换和句型都用上了，作文有了很大的提高。四六级英语资料免费下载ComputerandI(BySimmy)沪江四六级替换verythrilling替换excitingsth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.google替换searchanarmyof替换alotofThedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputers.Coincidentwiththeadvancementofscienceandtechnology,computerspouringintothecurrentsocietyasafashionareappealingtogrowingindividuals.Itisnoexaggerationtosaywehavebeensubmergedbythem,inlargemeasure!Thedawnofthenewcenturywitnessed是一个精彩句型，用来描述在某个时期发生了什么事情；Increasingpopularity替换moreandmorepopularCoincidentwith…非常地道的句型，表达“与…一致”的意思，替换With…Advancement替换developmentPourinto(floodinto/swarminto)替换enterintoCurrent(currently)替换now沪江四六级经典句型，说某事是毫不夸张的沪江四六级替换TobeginwithWecan,freely,search用了插入语的写作手法ourknowledgewillbewellenriched,andourhorizonswillbegreatlybroadened.用了非常精彩的被动Additionally替换Inaddition/BesidesDeliver替换sendThereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,inaway,especiallythegrowingviolence,***,pornpictures,AV-filmsemergingonthescreen,whichleadsquietafewnetcitizenstocopying.Thereisnodenyingthat,however,computerscanfunctioninthedisserviceofhumanbeings,这个句子有三个精彩之处，首先Thereisnodenyingthat这个句型，还有however作为插入语，functioninthedisserviceof替换doharmtoEmerging替换appearing(fading替换disappearing)Netcitizen网民，属于精彩用词Asaclassicproverbgoesthatnogardenhasnoweeds.Computersdoplayapositiveroleinthedevelopmentofpeople'lives,despiteasliceofunfavorableimpacts.Weshould,therefore,takeadvantageofthefruitsandavoidtheoppositefacet.Nogardenhasnoweeds替换EverycoinhastwosidesComputersdoplay，do强调Positive替换important/good等Asliceof替换apartof沪江四六级…使用插入语Fruits(而且fruits用的非常形象，merits/virtues)替换advantage(defects替换disadvantage)Facet替换aspect以下是30个最经典的替换词，各位同学可以参考一下:1.individuals,characters,folks替换(people,persons)2:positive,favorable,rosy(美好的)，promising(有希望的)，perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good3:dreadful,