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七年级（下）Units5-6第二部分高频话题写作指导学校生活从云南近四年学校生活相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题角度主要集中在初中的学习和生活，以及校园中的人物事件等的描述。主要涉及的有：2014云南、2014昆明、2013云南、2012德宏州、2012普洱、2011昭通。写作导图ATalktoMyselfHappyschooldayslearnlotsofknowledge;helpful;broadenone’seyes;enrich;readinterestingbooks…makefriends;friendly;happy;getonwellwith;sharehappinessandsadness;helpeachother…SomewishesJoininmoreoutdooractivities;colorfullife;arrangetime;valueschooldays;takeexercise;abalanceddiet;lifeinthefuturemoreandmorebeautifultoomuchhomework;noenoughtime;nooutdooractivities;toomanyrules;quarrelwithothers…ATalktoMyselfRegretfulthings写作范文详见：亮点句型速成常用句型：Thehomeworkistoomuch.Ihavenooutdooractivities.②ThereissomuchhomeworkthatIdon’thaveenoughtimetotakepartinoutdooractivities.推荐句型：①Ican’tjoininmanyoutdooractivitiesbecauseoftoomuchhomework.常用句型：Ihaveahappyschoollife.②IhaveahappyschoollifewhichIwillneverforget.推荐句型：①Withthesespecialmemories,Ihaveahappyandcolorfulschoollife.常用句型：Ilikeplayingfootball.②Ilikeplayingfootballontheplaygroundwithgreatinterest.推荐句型：①Ilikeplayingfootballontheplayground.常用句型：Ifeelverysadtoday,becauseIdidn’tpassthemathexamagain.②HowterribleIfeeltoday!Ifailedagaininthemathexam.推荐句型：①IfeelterribletodayforIfailedagaininthemathexam.1.Myfavoritesubjectisphysics.2.It’sdifficultbutinteresting.3.Lastweek’stalentshowinourclasswasagreatsuccess.4.Studyinggrammarisagreatwaytolearnalanguage.5.Itiseasyformetounderstand...6.Teenagersshouldbeallowedto...7.Therearealotofrulesatmyschool.8.YouhavegivenmesomuchhelpthatIwillneverforget...9.Theschoollifeisverybusyandexciting.Therearemanyactivitiesinourschool,suchas...10.Ourteachershavetaughtusalot.Theynotonlyteachushowtolearn,butalsoteachushowtobeausefulpersoninsociety.（常用词汇见本书“话题词汇分类速记表”话题（五）学校、话题（十八）语言学习）11.Ourschoolwherearemanytreesandflowersaroundiscleanandbeautiful.写作模板ATalktoMyselfHowtimeflies!I’mleavingschool多长时间.Ireallyhave多少totalktomyself.Luckily,myteachersarevery描述人物的特点.Theynotonly老师教的知识butalsotellme老师教的道理.Andmyclassmatesare描述人物特点.We总结所经历的事情inourschoollife.However,I’malso遗憾sometimes.I遗憾没有做的事情quiteoftenbecauseof原因.Iknow对这件事的认识forme.I’ll以后将会怎么做.Ibelieve对以后生活的希望.典例剖析（2013云南）ATalktoMyself提示：在初中三年的学习和生活中，你有许多快乐，也有许多遗憾。在即将毕业之际，你想对自己说点什么呢？请根据所给题目用英语写一篇短文。要求：1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个；2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。1.写作的对象是“我自己”,行文用第一人称。2.从①三年中的快乐；②三年中的遗憾；③对自己说的话及对未来生活的希望三个方面陈述。3.陈述“我”在学习生活中的快乐和遗憾时，用一般现在时态；如果表达对未来充满希望，则用一般将来时态。4.短文应包括提示的全部信息：初中三年学习和生活中的快乐和遗憾；在毕业之际，要给自己说的话。5.词数不少于60词，不得出现真实姓名、校名。【审题指导】【范文点评】ATalktoMyself①Howtimeflies!I’mleavingschoolsoon.Ireallyhavealottotalktomyself.①Howtimeflies！用一个感叹句来感叹时间的飞逝，给读者留下了深刻印象，使得文章增加了文采。Luckily,myteachersareveryfriendly.②Theynotonlygivemeknowledgebutalsotellmehowtobeaman.Andmyclassmatesarehelpful.Wesharehappinessandsadnessinourschoollife.②notonly...butalso使得句子通顺连贯，使得文章句式更加丰富，也显示作者对连接词的掌握和运用水平；宾语从句howtodo的使用使得显示了作者较高的语言表达能力。③However,I’malsoupsetsometimes.④Idon’ttakepartinoutdooractivitiesquiteoftenbecauseoftoomuchhomework.Iknowit’snotgoodforme.I’lltrymybesttojoininmore.③however的运用承上启下，行文自然。④用固定短语takepartin，quiteoften，becauseof，toomuch彰显作者词汇之丰富，是增分的一大亮点。⑤Ibelievethatmylifeinthefuturewillbemoreandmorebeautiful.⑤使用主从复合句来总结全文，既使文章句式丰富，又呼吁主题，相信自己以后的生活会更好。