雅思写作连接词之起

雅思写作连接词之起：First/firstly/firstofall/tobeginwith/tostartwith/inthefirstplace,Firstandforemost;Foronething(…foranother);Ontheonehand(…ontheother)雅思写作连接词之承：Second/secondly;Third/thirdly;Besides/inaddition/inadditionto…;Furthermore/whatismore/moreover;Namely/inotherwords;Inthesameway/similarly/likewise;Afterwards/afterthat/afterawhile;Consequently/asaconsequence/asaresult雅思写作连接词之转：But/yet;However/Nonetheless/Nevertheless;Onthecontrary/conversely;Though/although/eventhough/evenif;Unlike….,A…;Differentfrom…,A….;Infact/asamatteroffact,雅思写作连接词之合：Finally/eventually/inthefinalanalysis;Inconclusion/toconclude;Inshort/Inbrief;Insummary/tosumup/insum;AsIhavesaid/ashasbeennoted;Giventhefactthat….,wecancometotheconclusionthat…另附雅思大作文考官范文示例Insomecountries,manymorepeoplearechoosingtolivealonenowadaysthaninthepast.Doyouthinkthisisapositiveornegativedevelopment?构思过程：独居，也就是一个人生活，显然有利有弊，如果选择一边倒观点显然都站不住脚，很难论证，需要分开讨论平均用力。主体段一段写好处，一段写坏处。抽象类话题往往在寻找观点上比较困难或者没有方向，建议大家按照文波雅思教授的方法分类提取观点。本篇考官分别从个人和经济的角度出发，层次分明论证清晰，值得大家学习。Introduction1)背景导入，说尤其在发达国家的大城市，最近几年独居变得更为常见。Inrecentyearsithasbecomefarmorenormalforpeopletolivealone,particularlyinlargecitiesinthedevelopedworld.(句型结构：Itadj.forsb.todosth.后置状语补充，注意完成时hasbecome;注意particularly的用法，举特例方便直接，类似especially但语气更强;inthedevelopedworld比indevelopedcountries更地道;farmore修饰normal代入感强)2)观点句，我认为这个趋势的影响好坏各半。Inmyopinion,thistrendcouldhavebothpositiveandnegativeconsequencesinequalmeasure.(句型结构：简单句后置状语;虚拟语气couldhave;consequences高分词;inequalmeasure高分搭配)MainParagraphs11)段首概括，一个人住在个人和宏观经济上都有好处。Theriseinone-personhouseholdscanbeseenaspositiveforbothpersonalandbroadereconomicreasons.(句型结构：被动后置状语并列;主语theriseinone-personhouseholds替换morepeoplechoosetolivealone，地道高分搭配准确;seenas语法得分点;personal&broadereconomic词汇得分点)2)分论点1：个人层面上，独居的人可能变得比和家人一起住的人更独立自强(常见观点)Onanindividuallevel,peoplewhochoosetolivealonemaybecomemoreindependentandself-reliantthanthosewholivewithfamilymembers.(句型结构：前置状语主语who从句谓语比较级宾语who从句，高分复合句;self-reliant高分词，展示词汇量)3)举例论证线性推理展开：独居年轻人需要学做饭，做家务，付账单，管账等重要的生活技能;这样的人增加了就是种正面的发展Ayoungadultwholivesalone,forexample,willneedtolearntocook,clean,paybillsandmanagehisorherbudget,allofwhicharevaluablelifeskills;anincreaseinthenumberofsuchindividualscancertainlybeseenasapositivedevelopment.(句型结构：主语从句插入语不定式并列宾语allofwhich从句;简单分句被动;valuable得分词;anincrease语法得分点;suchindividuals指代准确，语法和词汇得分点)4)分论点2：经济角度上看，独居的趋势会导致住房需求增加(加分观点)Fromaneconomicperspective,thetrendtowardslivingalonewillresultingreaterdemandforhousing.(句型结构：前置状语后置定语简单句;trendtowardsliving搭配准确，词汇和语法得分点;resultin学术搭配，词汇得分点;demandforhousing词汇得分点)5)举例说明展开：这样会让建筑公司，房产中介和其它依赖业主购买产品的公司获益。Thisislikelytobenefittheconstructionindustry,estateagentsandawholehostofothercompaniesthatrelyonhomeownerstobuytheirproductsorservices.(句型结构：简单句宾语并列宾语that从句;likelytobenefit学术搭配，词汇得分点;constructionindustry&estateagents展示词汇量;relyonhomeowners词汇得分点)MainParagraph21)段首概括：上述个人和经济的论点可以反向考虑;(简介易懂，挂钩前文暗含对比，CC满分技巧)However,thepersonalandeconomicargumentsgivenabovecanbeconsideredfromtheoppositeangle.(句型结构：转折简单句被动;givenabove非谓语修饰，语法得分点;beconsideredfrom学术搭配，词汇语法得分点;theoppositeangle词汇得分点)2)分论点1：和独立的好处相比，独居的人会感觉孤独、隔离和不安(常见观点)Firstly,ratherthanthepositivefeelingofincreasedindependence,peoplewholivealonemayexperiencefeelingsofloneliness,isolationandworry.(句型结构：前置状语主语从句宾语并列;ratherthan无痕迹对比，语法和CC得分点;loneliness&isolation高分词)3)举例对比论证展开：他们错过了家人或室友提供的对话和支持，还要承担过重的家庭账单和职责;这样来说，这个趋势就是负面的Theymissoutontheemotionalsupportanddailyconversationthatfamilyorflatmatescanprovide,andtheymustbeartheweightofallhouseholdbillsandresponsibilities;inthissense,perhapsthetrendtowardslivingaloneisanegativeone.(句型结构：简单句并列宾语从句简单分句;missouton地道搭配;emotionalsupport,dailyconversation&flatmates词汇加分点;beartheweightof高分搭配，词汇得分点;anegativeone指代准确避免重复，语法得分点)4)分论点2：从经济角度来说，住房需求增加会推高房价和租金(加分观点)Secondly,fromthefinancialpointofview,ariseindemandforhousingislikelytopushuppropertypricesandrents.(句式结构:前置状语简单句;thefinancialpointofview替换aneconomicperspective;likelytopushup学术搭配;propertyprices&rents词汇得分点)5)对比论证说明展开：虽然让企业获益，但大众包括独居的人都要面临更高的居住成本Whilethismaybenefitsomebusinesses,thegeneralpopulation,includingthosewholivealone,willbefacedwithrisinglivingcosts.(句式结构：让步句插入语补充被动;befacedwith地道搭配;risinglivingcosts词汇得分点)Conclusion1)一句话总结：独居增加对个人和经济影响有好有坏Inconclusion,theincreaseinone-personhouseholdswillhavebothbeneficialanddetrimentaleffectsonindividualsandontheeconomy.(句式结构：总结简单句宾补;detrimental不利的，高分词，beneficial&detrimental替换positive&negative;两个on介词短语并列，语法得分点)雅思大作文评分TR:两面观点完整回答问题，分论点详实有深度，首尾段观点总结到位，9分CC:全篇结构清晰，整齐，行文连接通顺，易于理解，没有明显模板痕迹，9分LR:词汇非常多样，同义替换到位，搭配地道准确，9分GA:句型多变，复合句实用灵活，没有语法错误，9分(13sentences,306words,band9)