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雅思写作------董崟Task1Atleast150words，20MINs题型：曲线图，表格，图表40%Task2Atleast250words，40Mins题型：议论60%TwoTasks评分标准UnderlengthNoofwordsTask2雅思大作文40Mins•雅思大作文六大出题思路：•与生活相关的非专业型知识——•科学、教育、文化、社会、媒体、环保•考查组织论证的能力TR：TaskResponse任务完成程度CC：CoherenceandCohesion结构与衔接程度LR：LexicalResource词汇丰富程度GRA：GramaticalRangeandAccuracy语法应用程度Task2：雅思大作文评分标准•TR：addressallpartsofthetask/presentsaclearpositionthroughoutthereponse/presents,extendsandsupportsmainideas,buttheremaybeatendencytoovergeneraliseand/orsupportingideasmaylackfocus•CC：logicallyorganisesinformationandideas;thereisclearprogressionthroughout/usesarangeofcohesivedevicesappropriatelyalthoughtheremaybesomeunder-/over-use/presentsaclearcentraltopicwithineachparagraph•LR：usesasufficientrangeofvocabularytoallowsomelexibilityandprecision/useslesscommonlexicalitemswithsomeawarenessofstyleandcollocation/mayproduceoccasionalerrorsinwordchoice,spellingand/orwordformation•GRA:usesavarietyofcomplexstructures/producesfrequenterror-freesentences/hasgoodcontrolofgrammarandpunctuationbutmaymakeafewerrors7分评分标准：•1两位考官评分，最后取平均分，以保证分数相对比较公正•2考生字数不够（小于250个单词），考官会酌情扣分•3考生如果书写毫无意义的模板句子，将被扣分•4字迹潦草影响辨认(illegible)，将被扣分•ButpeoplestilldisagreeaboutwhethertheeffectoftheInternethasbeengoodorbad.•(5)•However,thereisstillsomedisagreementaboutwhethertheoveralleffectoftheInternethasbeengoodorbad.(6)•Yet,thereremainssomedisagreementastowhethertheoveralleffectofthistechnolgyhasbeenpositiveornegative.(7)实例：常犯的错误•1.可数名词永远不能单独使用，必须在前面加上一个限定词，如the/an/a/this/my;或者复数•2.英语里动词不能做主语，被动的动词别忘了加-ed/-d•3.主谓要一致。主语很长一定要检查谓语单复数•4.Manystudentsarelikestudyinghomeeconomics.只有情态动词可以加动词原形，like是动词，要去掉are•5.时态要一致，议论文极少用过去时•6.修饰名词用形容词，修饰动词用副词或者形容词•7.介词搭配：reasonsfor…;solutionsfor…•8.动词替代：replace/supplant;insteadof是副词或者连词•9.禁止使用简写can’t应写成cannot，注意没有空格。•10.修饰可数名词：numerous,ahostof,avastnumberof;不可数：agreatdealof•11英-se结尾,美-ze;英-our结尾，美-or•12.口头语和书面语要区分开。serious→severe;•people→individuals;harm→damage;moreandmore→increasingly;so→therefore/hence/thus;bemorethan→outweigh大于/超过，最常用的一句advantagesoutweighdisadvantagesgreatly利远大于弊。•13.慎重引用句子，有些如宗教句子不能直接来做论据•14.不要轻易使用语气过于强烈的句子委婉表达belikelyto/could/would/might/probably/largely/tendto/beinclinedto/haveahigherlikelihoodto•15.避免第一第二人称(Iweyouus)写作，但可以用第三人称（theyit）雅思大作文题型二、Argumentation:80%1.dicussbothviewsandgiveyourownopinion.2.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?/Doyouagreeordisagree?3.doyouthinktheadvantageoutweighthedisadvantage?一、Report：20%Whyisthecase?Isitapositiveornegativedevelopment?/Whatarethecauses?Givesolutionsorsuggestionstosolvetheproblem.总之：Cause，influence，solution题型一：Argumentation最常见关键字：advantages/disadvantages,agree/disagree,good/bad,positive/negative,•1.Therangeandqualityofthefoodhavebeenimprovedbytheadvancementofscienceandtechnology.Discusstheadvantagesanddisadvantagesaboutthisandpresentyourview.•2.MaintainingpubliclibrariesisawasteofmoneysincethecomputertechnologyissoadvancedthattheInternetandcomputercanreplacethem.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?题目只有一种观点：Doyouagreeordisagree？/Towhatextentdoyouagree?/whatdoyouthink?可以：一边倒or折中式开头段转述题目加主题句，论证主旨句并提出论点一边倒主题段一般写三段：要写出层次感，firstly/secondly/thirdly折中式主体段一般两段：把倾向的一方放在前面，让步段放在后面。题目有两种观点：Discussbothviewsandgiveyouropinion.可以：一边倒or折中式开头段转述题目+主旨句，主体段论证主旨句加自己观点一边倒主题段写三段折中式主体段写两段Intheproponents'mind,charityorganizationsshouldkeepthemajorityoftheiraidinthecouintry•题型二：写报告•最常见关键字：causes,reasons,leadto,solutions,suggestions,measures•Withdivorceratesandfamilybreakdownincreasingglobally,itisgenerallyacceptedthatfamiliestodayarenotascloseastheyusedtobe.Whatarethecausesandwhatareyoursolutions?•Report12句框架模板第一段：引出问题，提出原因1Itseemstobeanincreasinglywidespreadconcernthat….2IthinkthatAandBareresponsibleforthis.•第二段：分析第一个原因•3Inthepast，…•4Thisisnolongerthecasebecause…•5Therefore,Aistherootcauseofthisphenomenon.•第三段：分析第二个原因•6Anotherimportantreasoncontributingtothisphenomenonisthat…•7Forexample,…•第四段：提出解决方案•8Inordertoaddressthisproblem,…•9Moreimportantly,…•10Moreover,…•第五段：总结•11Inconclusion,twofactorsleadto…•12Weshouldtaketheseeffectivemeasurestotacklethisproblem.雅思写作起承转合关联词语大全•1排序列举：•First=Firstly=Firstofall=Inthefirstplace=Tobeginwith=Initially=Tostartwith=Firstandforemost;Afterthis/that=Followingthis/that=Subsequently;•Afterwards;Inthesecondplace=Secondly;Thirdly=Eventually;Finally=Lastly=Atlast=Eventually•2递进：•Also;Additionally;Besides;Inaddition（to）;Furthermore;Moreover;What’smore•3比较：•Similarlyadv.相似地，类似地•Likewiseadv.同样也•Inthesameway=Inthesamemanner以同样方式•Alternativelyadv.或者，要不•By/Incomparison（with）与…比较起来•Equallyadv同样重要地•4举例：•Forexample=Forinstance•Namelyadv.那就是，这就是说•Suchas:例如，诸如此类•Thatistosay：那就是说，换句话说•Acaseinpoint：合适的例子•Illustratevt.举例说明；表明•5因果：•Because=Since=As=For因为•Thus=So=Thereforeadv.因此•Asaresult=Consequently=Asaconsequence=Inconsequence因此•Becauseof=Dueto=Thanksto=Owingto=Onaccountof因为•Henceadv.因此•Accordinglyadv因此•Leadto=Resultin=Contributeto导致•6转折：•Although;Though;But;However;Instead;Yet;•Converselyadv.相反地；另一方面•In/Bycontrast对比起来•Onthecontrary于此相反•（Ononehand）Ontheotherhand从另一方面说•While=Whilst=Whereas（conj）尽管•Nevertheless=Nonethelessadv.尽管如此，仍然•Admittedlyadv.诚然，不