雅思强化写作小作文解析

题目归类题型本质上分为两种——动态图和静态图动态图(数字变化)最好用数字变化来表达静态图(数字不变)则是静态表格（纯比较）的写作模式不同图形特点动态变化图(重变化)Line：分单根和多根,变化较曲折。Pie：经常跟其他图像混搭,本身包含信息不多。静态图(重比较)Table：数字众多,信息量巨大,必须要有取舍,要把握变化最明显的。Column：提供信息大,对比明显。雅思留学小作文写作评分准则之内容Contents:如实还原图表1.无任何个人评价,严禁出现表示观点的词和个人推断.2.不要描写全部信息(数字,事物),分清主次,动态图重在顶点底点及转折点和交汇点等4类特征数据maximum–minimum-intersection-trend；静态图重在比较关系评分准则之结构1.分段准确2.body段落的展开方式：动态图(线,饼)利用主语句型的不同和衔接关联词来展开；静态图(柱,表格)利用比较句式和排序方式而展开3.总结:对比不同研究对象之间关系或找到隐藏在图形中的变化趋势评分准则之词汇语法1.词汇的diversity尤为重要.2.时态:总体趋势的时态为一般现在时,一般在第一段和结尾比较段出现.具体数字变化用一般过去时,一般在中间段出现.词汇收集之上升,下降从时态,词性,难易搭配和趋势四点来考虑单词increase/grow/rise/jump/goup/climbup/soar/expand/rocket/hike/ascend/surge/boom/escalate/swelldecrease/fall/drop/decline/godown/climbdown/slip/shrink/descend/slump/ebb/crash/collapse/plunge稳定,震动,大约holdsteady,leveloff,stabilize,remainsteady,stayconstant,keepstable,be/remainstatic,beconsistent,stagnateFluctuate,wave,vibrate,Varyfrom,Swing,Riseandfall,Increaseanddecrease大约：about/around/approximately/roughly/intheneighborhoodof幅度副词显著significantly,noticeably,obviously,sharplydramatically,rapidly,steeply,immensely,considerably,markedly,unexpectedly,平缓稳定slowly,gradually,steadily,slightly,gently,moderately,subtly,modestly,smoothly,marginally波动fluctuately,wavily,flexibly数字,趋势,顶点,低点figure/data/statistics/number/percentagetrend/tendency/tendtobebeatitshighestlevel/topposition,reach/attain/toapeakof…(maximum/peak/summit/zenith/apex/climax)，或者peakat…这里的peak是动词Hit/reacha(floor/bottom/base/valley)，或者：bottomout（动词短语）显示Predict,indicate,display,expose,reveal,depict,illustrate,demonstrate,reflect,unfold,takeup/makeupcontribute/occupy/represent/accountfor涉及到百分比的时候才出现,只针对于pie和tableABCD线状图永远不变的小作文句型结构:主语+变化+到具体数字+时间段主语变化体现的四种变句模式(句式灵活)研究对象做主语/Therebe做主语/时间段(period做主语/变化趋势做主语/地点做主语研究对象主语研究对象做主语Thefigure/data/percentage(图单位)of/in/about研究对象dropped/increased/fluctuated/leveledoff/remainedstable/wasupward(图趋势)from_to_(具体数字波动)during/between…and…,anditreachedthemaximum/minimumof…therebe主语研究对象做主语Attentionshouldbedrawntothecontinuingrise/drop/wavein/of_from_to_.Therebe作主语Therewassteadying/waving/sharp/slight(用形容词表趋势)increase(名词)/upwardtrendin/of_from_to_,reachingthebottomof_.时间主语Thelasthalfof2008sawthemostsavagedecreaseindemandformotorvehiclessincethesecondworldwar.Thebiggest/quickest/mostnoticeableincreaseoccurredin2000,whichsaw/witnessedagrowth(替换increase)from_to_.Theyearbetween1980and2000witnessedahuge/flexiblechangefrom_to_.趋势,地点作主语地点做主语Theplacewitnessedasharpincreaseinsthfrom…to…incertainyear.“趋势”做主语Averynoticeabletrendwasthesteadyincreaseinthenumberof__from___to__in___.Thetrendshowedthesteadyincreaseinthenumberof__from___to___in___.句型练习之婚礼费用上海的婚礼的花费从96年的5万迅猛的震荡上扬到08年的120万,最终达顶点300万在09年Thefigureofweddingfeeinshanghaiboomedrapidlyfrom50thousandrmbto1millionand200thousandrmbbetween1996and2008,reachingthepeakof3millionin2009.句型练习之婚礼费用Therewasasharprocketintheweedingfeeinshanghaifrom50thousandrmbto1millionand200rmbthousandbetween1996and2008,reachingthezenithof3millionin2009.Theamazingsoarofweedingfeeinshanghaioccurredbetween1996and2008,whichwitnessedtheupwardtrendfrom50thousandto1millionand200thousand,reachingtheclimaxof3millionin2009.句型练习之婚礼费用海的婚礼的花费从96年的5万迅猛的震荡上扬到08年的120万,最终达顶点300万在09年Inshanghai,weddingfeesharplyincreasedfrom50,000rmbin1996to1,200.000rmbin2008,peakingat3,000,000in2009.Averynoticeabletrendwasthesteadyincreaseinthenumberofweddingfeefrom50,000rmbin1996to1,200.000rmbin2008,peakingat3,000,000in2009.句型练习之外国国籍加入外国国籍的百分比从1995的百分之一平稳增长到2006年的百分之六.Thepercentageofimmigrantsstabilized(动词)fromonepercentin1995to6percentin2006.Therewasasteadyandsmoothrise(形容词+名词)inthepercentageofimmigrantsfromonepercentin1995to6percentin2006.Thepastdecadewitnessedastableascendanceinthepercentageofimmigrantsfromonepercentin1995to6percentin2006句型练习之外国国籍加入外国国籍的百分比从1995的百分之一平稳增长到2006年的百分之六.Someimmigratingcountrieswitnessedasharpsoarofthepercentageofimmigrantsfromonepercentin1995to6percentin2006.Theimmigratingtrendshowedthesteadyincreaseintheonepercentin1995to6percentin2006.Structure结构Introduction总起段(介绍图表)Body主体段(具体数字波动)Conclusion总结段:趋势或对比背景句介绍题目四要素:图表类型,图表研究对象,图表趋势,图表时间万能OpeningOpening的四要素：Asisshown/displayed/revealed/inthe（1）图的类型,the（2）图的单位(number/amount/percentage/figure)of图的主题（3）图的趋势fluctuate/rise/fall/change（4）(图的时间)from…to…万能opening前半句:Aswecanseefromthe图的类型，Accordingtotheinformationdescribedinthe图的类型，后半句:Thereisadramatic/slight/flexible图的趋势in图的主题in图的时间TheeducationalbackgroundofemployeesinacompanyThecolumngraphshowsthechangesofeducationallevelsofstaffmembersinacompanyintheyearof1991,1996and2000.ThepercentageofenergysourceinAmericaAccordingtothepiegraphs,thereisadramaticchangeinthepercentageoftheenergysourcesoftheunitedstatesin1970and1980.*经典第一段的概括总分趋势句(高分较难)位置:写在第一段第二句目的:概括出总趋势,给读者以宏观把握Alltrends(动态)/statistics(静态)/items(多图)canbecategorized/classifiedintogroups(项目)/stages(时间)/types(多图)with(“general”trendsorcharacteristics).Alltrendscanbecategorizedinto3groupswithfluctuatinginA,risinginBandfallinginC.Allstatisticscanbecategorizedinto2stageswithth