江苏省2019高考英语满分作文

江苏省2019高考英语满分作文【试题回顾】请阅读下面文字，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章．LiJiang：Haveyouheardthis？AgroupofexchangestudentsfromtheUKarevisitingourschoolnextmonth．SuHua：Yes，Ihave．SomearealreadyrecommendingthetraditionalChinesedressforthewelcomeceremony．LiJiang：Butitseemspeoplehavedifferentopinions．SuHua：Whatdoyouthink？LiJiang：Ithinkit'sagoodidea．It'sanopportunitytomaketheChineseculturebetterknowntointernationalstudents．SuHua：Iagree．Butwedon'thavetodressthatway．That'snotourdailystyle．Besides，it'snotveryconvenient．LiJiang：Yousee，it'stheChineseculturethattheBritishfriendsarecomingfor．Justtherightoccasion．SuHua：Iprefertheschooluniform．It'snice．It'salsoabetterdisplayofourschoolculture．【写作内容】1．用约30个词概括上述信息的主要内容；2．在上述场合，你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由（不少于两点）．【写作要求】1．写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；3．不必写标题．【评分标准】内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当．【分析】高分句型一：Themainquestionpresentedinthedialogueiswhetherthestudentsshouldweartraditionalcostumesduringaceremonyforforeignstudents．译文：对话中提出的主要问题是，在外国学生的仪式上，学生是否应该穿传统服装．分析：过去分词做定语，whether引导表语从句．高分句型二：Theyarehighlyrepresentativeofourtraditions，andwillundoubtedlyleaveadeepimpressionontheforeignstudentswhoarecomingfora'cultural'exchange．译文：他们高度代表了我们的传统，无疑会给前来参加文化交流的外国学生留下深刻印象．分析：who引导定语从句．【解答】Themainquestionpresentedinthedialogueiswhetherthestudentsshouldweartraditionalcostumesduringaceremonyforforeignstudents．【高分句型一】Thestudentshadeachgiventheirownstandandreasons．（概述）IammoreinclinedtoagreewithLiJiang，takingintoconsiderationofthefollowingperspectives．First，traditionalcostumesareoneofthemostsuitableitemswhenitcomestopresentingourculture．Theyarehighlyrepresentativeofourtraditions，andwillundoubtedlyleaveadeepimpressionontheforeignstudentswhoarecomingfora'cultural'exchange．【高分句型二】Second，attendingtheeventintraditionalChinesedressmayopenupseveralopportunitiesforinteraction．Theorganizercancomeupwithseveralactivitiesbasedontheattireitself，suchasinvitingtheforeignstudentstotryourtraditionalcostumes．（你是否倾向于穿中国传统服装？请说明理由）Toconclude，myadviceisthatthestudentsshouldweartraditionalChinesedressforthisoccasion．（结论）【点评】这是一篇提纲类作文，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来．动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．本作文中给出的要点比较具体，故需要准确表达．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．