第五讲作文 吸引眼球的定语从句

定语从句的正确使用能够比较明显地反映出考生对于语言具有较高的掌握能力，所以建议考生一定要在写作中至少使用一个恰到好处的定语从句。一、定语从句的类型1．关系代词引导的定语从句关系代词who,whom,whose,that,which,as引导的定语从句是写作的一大重点，尤其是which和as引导的非限制性定语从句在高考范文中更是屡见不鲜。①(2014·湖北高考写作)IcanwellrememberanincidentthathappenedonarainySundayafternoon.我记忆犹新的是发生在一个雨天的周日下午的一次事故。②(2015·安徽高考写作)Finally,Iwouldliketoaskafewquestionsabouthispersonallife,whichmustbeveryinteresting.最后，我想问他几个私人生活的问题，这些肯定非常有趣。③(2015·福建高考满分作文)Onlythosewhosparenoefforttoconfrontproblemscanachievewhattheylongfor.只有那些面对困难不遗余力的人才能取得他们渴望的成就。④(2015·重庆高考写作)Asanoldsayinggoes,livingwithoutaclearandachievableaimislikesailingwithoutacompass.正如古老的谚语所说，生活没有清晰可达成的目标，犹如航海没有指南针。2．关系副词引导的定语从句关系副词引导的定语从句是指when,where,why引导的定语从句。①(2014·全国卷Ⅱ满分作文)Duringholidayseasons,Iwillliveinthecountryside,whereairisfreshandpeoplearefriendly.在假期，我会住在乡下，那里空气新鲜而且人们友好。②(2014·安徽高考满分作文)Ithinkthereasonwhyyouarealwaysangrymaybethehighpressureofstudy.我认为你总是发脾气的原因可能是学习上的巨大压力。3．“介词＋which/whom”引导的定语从句①(2015·四川高考书面表达)Speakingandlisteningareveryimportantforalanguagelearning,bywhichyouaresuretomakegreatprogress.听和说对于一门语言的学习非常重要，通过它们你一定会取得很大进步。②Iboughtagreatmanybooks,onwhichIspentallmymoneythatIsaved.我买了很多书，这些书花了我所有的积蓄。即学即练(一句多译)1．因此，我认为我能得一个高分，这个分数能使我进入一个理想的大学。①SoIsupposeIcangetagoodmark,_________________________________________________________________________________.②______________________________________________________________________.(定语从句)答案：①itwillenablemetoentermyidealcollege②SoIsupposeIcangetagoodmarkwhichwillenablemetoentermyidealcollege2．我们都喜欢我们的英语老师，我们已向她学习了很多东西。①WealllikeourEnglishteacher.______________________________________________________________________.②________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(定语从句)答案：①Wehavelearnedalotfromher②WealllikeourEnglishteacherfromwhomwehavelearnedalot3．我总是盼望着我独立的那一天。①I'vealwayslongedforthedays,I________________________________________________________________________________.②_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(定语从句)答案：①willbeabletobeindependentthen②I'vealwayslongedforthedayswhenIwillbeabletobeindependent.4．事实上，我来这儿拜访我叔叔，目前他碰巧在你们城市工作。(2017·武汉调研书面表达)①Asamatteroffact,Iamherevisitingmyuncle.____________________________________________________________________________.②_______________________________________________________________________.(定语从句)答案：①Hehappenstobeworkinginyourcityatpresent.②Asamatteroffact,Iamherevisitingmyuncle,whohappenstobeworkinginyourcityatpresent5．在几次我班的英语活动中我已帮助她，这受到老师和同学的欣赏。(2015·陕西高考书面表达)①IhavelentahelpinghandtoherinseveralEnglishactivitiesofmyclass.___________________.②IhavelentahelpinghandtoherinseveralEnglishactivitiesofmyclass,______________________________.(定语从句)(2015·陕西高考)答案：①Ithasbeenappreciatedbybothteachersandmyclassmates②whichhavebeenappreciatedbybothteachersandmyclassmates二、定语从句的常用句型1．Asweallknow.../Asisknowntoall...众所周知……Asweallknow,childrenandelderlypeoplebothneedwarmthandcare.众所周知，小孩和老年人都需要温暖和关心。2．Assb.putsit...按照某人所说的……Asheoftenputsit,universityeducationdeterminesone'sfuture.按照他常说的，大学教育决定一个人的命运。3．such...as...像……这样的；诸如此类的……Believeitornot,thereisnosuchthingasafreelunchintheworld.信不信由你，世界上没有免费午餐之类的事情。4．Astheoldsayinggoes,……常言道……Astheoldsayinggoes,practicemakesperfect.常言道，熟能生巧。5．thesame...as.../thesameas...像……一样的Hermannerandattitudestowardshimwerequitethesameastheyhadalwaysbeen.她对他的方式和态度与以前完全一样。6．oneofthe＋复数名词＋定语从句……中的一个AsfarasIknow,yoursisterisoneofthestudentswhohavepassedtheexam.据我所知，你妹妹是通过考试的学生之一。7．theonlyoneofthe＋复数名词＋定语从句……中唯一的一个Mr.GreenwastheonlyoneoftheworkersthatwasinvitedtoBeijing.格林先生是这些工人中唯一被邀请去北京的。即学即练1．另外，正如古老的谚语所说，“赠人玫瑰，手有余香”。Foranother,_____________________________，“Therose'sinherhand;theflavorinmine.”(2014·广东高考书面表达)答案：astheoldsayinggoes2．使我非常高兴的是，Michael在我同学面前高度评价了我的好成绩，这使我感到自豪。Muchtomydelight,Michaelsanghighpraiseformygreatachievementsbeforemyclassmates,_____________________________________________________________________________.(2015·湖南高考书面表达)答案：whichmademeveryproud3．我们大家都知道，这幅画讲述的是古代中国的一个故事。____________，thepicturetellsastoryofancientChina.(2015·福建高考满分作文)答案：Asweallknow4．据我所知，她就是这样一个总是乐于助人的女孩。AsfarasIknow,sheis____________alwaysreadytohelpothers.答案：suchagirlas5．长城是吸引大批游客的世界著名的建筑之一。TheGreatWallis____________________________lotsofvisitors.答案：oneoftheworld­famousbuildingsthatattract三、定语从句写作时需避免的几种情况1．误用关系词误：IliveinBeijing,whereisthecapitalofChina.正：IliveinBeijing,whichisthecapitalofChina.误：Ihaveafriend,who'snameisLiuMei.正：Ihaveafriend,whosenameisLiuMei.2．句子成分残缺误：ThereweremanystudentstookpartintheEnglishcompetition.正：ThereweremanystudentswhotookpartintheEnglishcompetition.误：Thosewhoinfavoroftheproposal,pleaseraiseyourhands.正：Thosewhoareinfavoroftheproposal,pleaseraiseyourhands.3．有多余的代词或副词误：ThefilmIsawitlastnightwasreallyverygood.正：ThefilmIsawlastnightwasreallyverygood.误：Lastweek,IreturnedtothevillagewhereIgrewupthereinmychildhood.正：Lastweek,IreturnedtothevillagewhereIgrewupinmychildhood.4．混淆定语从句与并列句误：Infact,smokingisabadhabit