高中英语作文写作――如何写建议信(简洁版)

高考复习专题建议信写作要点：1.建议信：作者就有关问题进行分析并针对这些问题提出自己的看法和建议。2.对象：1）写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；2）写给某个组织和机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。书信格式称呼（Greeting）：收信人的称呼，顶格写在信纸的左边。正文（Body）：信的内容,低于称呼语，常在缩进四、五个字母处起笔。正文通常分为三个部分；引言部分---表明写信的目的；主体部分---具体说明写信人的请求或想法；结束部分---总结信的内容,表明希望对方做些什么；或写出祝愿话语。如果是写回信，在引言部分要提到来信内容，然后再写其他内容。结束词（Closing）：发信人表示自己对收信人的一种客套称呼，写在书信正文结尾下面低一或两行的位置上。一般它均从正中或偏右处写起。收信人与写信人之间是朋友关系时常用：Yours,/Yoursincerely,/Yourtruly,建议信篇章结构⑴说明建议的内容；⑵提出具体建议的原因；⑶指出采纳建议的益处。注意事项：语言要委婉、礼貌，顾及对方感受。3.基本框架：开头（beginning）----开门见山，向对方陈述自己的观点.(stateyouridea)主体(body)----对所提出的问题进行分析并说明理由，接着提出自己的建议(reasonsandevidence)结尾(ending)----呼应开头，重申观点(restateyouropinion.)4.注意事项：1）建议信要写出写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由，提出的理由要入情入理，语气一定要礼貌当先。因此建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确、具有合理性和说服力；2）建议的角度要多样化，避免重复。可从政治、经济、文化、伦理、法律以及个人等多角度给出建议；3）符合英文信件的基本格式；4）基本时态多用一般现在时和一般将来时。常用套语A．建议信开头常用句式(照应材料,表明写作意图)1.AfterIreadyourletterinthenewspaper,Iamsorrytoknowthat…2.Iamverygladtohearthatyouwantto…3.Iknowyouhavetroublein…afterreadingyourletter4.Iamwritingtoyouforthepurposeof…5.Iamwritingtosharesomeadvice/opinionswithyou.6.Youhaveaskedmeforsomeadvicewithregardto…andIwilltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestions.7.Youhaveaskedmeformyadviceabout/on…B.表达建议（body）1.Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould…2.Iwouldliketosuggest/recommendthat…3.IfIwereyou,Iwould…4.Whynot…?/How(What)aboutdoing…5.…isagood/greatidea.6.Youmayconsiderdoing…7.Itwouldseem/seemstomethatyoucould…8.Inmyopinion,itwouldbewisetotakethefollowingaction.9.Whenitcomestosuchasituation,Iwouldliketosuggestthatyoushould…First,/Firstly,/Secondly,/Then,/Afterthat,/Intheend,/Finally,/Meanwhile,/What’smore,/Inaddition,/Besides,/Furthermore,…C.建议信结尾常用句式1.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/consideration.2.Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.3.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsinthisregard.4.Iwouldappreciateitverymuchifyoucouldconsidermysuggestions.5.Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialifyousticktoit.6.Intheend,Iwillbegladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.适当运用模板模板二：Dear_____(对象)，Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning______(问题).Firstandforthemost,_______(建议一).Inaddition,_____(建议二).What’smore_____(建议三).Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsuseful.Yourssincerely,LiMingDearBob,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).I'msure(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).I'mlookingforwardto(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHuaDear____,Youhaveaskedmeformyadvicewithregardto_____,andI’lltrytomakesomeconductivesuggestionshere.Inmyhumbleopinion(以我拙见),youwouldbewisetotakethefollowingactions:_____.Ihopeyou’llfindtheseproposalsusefulandIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.Goodluckwithyou/your______(祝愿).YourssincerelyLiMing第一步：审题养成重视审题的习惯。虽然基础写作题是半封闭性的，但审题仍然十分重要。现以样题为例，谈谈如何审题：思考的问题样题分析第几人称？（person）文章的题材是什么？要写的文章主题是什么(topic)怎样安排信息点的顺序？(order)动作是什么时候发生的？(时态)(when)第一人称一封信建议政府采取措施舒缓交通拥挤的状况说理逻辑性一般现在时三个步骤Step1ListthekeypointsStep2MakesentencesStep3.Formapassageandpolish假设你是李华，你的笔友张明来信说他英语学的不大好，请你给他写一封回信，提一些建议，帮助他学好英语。内容提示：1.一定要做好课前预习2.课堂上认真听讲，记好笔记3.课后认真独立完成作业4.每天进行英语听说练习5.加强课外阅读扩大词汇量第一步：列举要点英语学的不大好YouarenotgoodatEnglishYoudon’tdowellinEnglishYouhavedifficultyinEnglishYouarenotgettingalongwellwithEnglish做好课前预习previewPrepare/makepreparationsforLookthrough课堂上认真听讲ListentotheteachercarefullyPayattentiontowhattheteachersayscarefully记好笔记Set/writedownMake/takenotes课后认真独立完成作业每天进行英语听说练习Finishyourhomeworkbyyourself/onyourown/don’tcopyPractiselisteningandspeakingeveryday加强课外阅读扩大词汇量Enrich/enlargeyourvocabulary.点睛之笔：Nothingisimpossibletoawillingheart!PracticemakesperfectNevergiveup/loseheartIfyouhaveanytrouble,pleaseturntomeforhelp.I’dliketosharemymethodswithyou.Onlyinthisway,canyoulearnEnglishwellreadnovels,magazinesandeverythingtodowithEnglish书面表达训练2008年全国卷II英语作文假定你是李华，你的英国朋友Peter来信向你咨询如何才能学好中文，请你根据下列要点写回信。要点：1.参加中文学习班；2.看中文书刊、电视；3.学唱中文歌曲；4.交中国朋友。注意1.词数100左右；2.开头语已为你写好。DearPeter,I’mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowtolearnChinesewell.Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportanttotakeaChinesecourse,asyou’llbeabletolearnfromtheteacherandpracticewithyourfellowstudents.Then,italsohelpstowatchTVandreadbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinChinesewheneverpossible.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideatolearnandsingChinesesongs,becausebydoingsoyou’lllearnandrememberChinesewordsmoreeasily.YoucanalsomakemoreChinesefriends.TheywilltellyoualotaboutChinaandhelpyoulearnChinese.TryandwritemeinChinesenexttime.BestwishesLiHuaDearBob,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonhowto(引出主题).Hereareafewsuggestions.First,itisimportantto.Then,italsohelpsto.Besides,itshouldbeagoodideato.Youcanalso.(此三句不同的句式提出建议)Asto,Isuggest(有时根据需要具体到某一反面).Inaddition,(其他建议).I'msure(预测可能的结果，给对方以行动的信心和决心).I'mlookingforwardto(表达愿望).Sincerelyyours,LiHua