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SummarywritingWhatisasummary?Asummaryisashortstatementthatgivesonlythemainpointsofsth,notthedetails.Itisabrief,completeandobjectiverestatementofthemainideaandkeypointsofalongercomposition.第五档(21-25)理解准确,涵盖全部要点。能准确使用相应的语法结构和词汇。有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使所完成的概要结构紧凑。完全使用自己的言语。completecorrectcoherentconcise;nocopyStep1.Readforthestyleandstructureofthepassage.Howtowriteasummary?ArgumentationExpositionNarrationRecently,awildfishrestaurantwasorderedtoshutdowninHarbin,northeastChina'sHeilongjiangProvince.Asaresult,theowneroftherestaurantfacedafineof500,000yuan.ChenYan,atouristfromChangzhou,eastChina’sJiangsuProvince,complainedonlineonFebruary12thathewasbeingovercharged10,000yuanforthreebigfishatalocalwildfishrestaurantinSongbeiDistrictofHarbin.Worsestill,heclaimedthathisfamilymemberswerebeatenandthreatenedbytherestaurantstaffwhenhequestionedthebillatthecheckout.Chen’scomplaintimmediatelyspreadonChina’ssocialmedia.Theinvestigationresultsbysomelocalgovernmentdepartmentsshowedthattherestauranthadnofault,sincetheyhadalreadytaggedtheprice,whichraiseddoubtamongnetizensagain.Furtherinvestigationshowedthatonetypeofthefishserved,Huso,wasnottherealwildspecies,butakindoffarmedfishatamuchlowerprice.Sincethepricesofthefishdidhaveviolatedtherightsofconsumers,therestaurantgotitsduepunishment.Meanwhile,relevantgovernmentdepartmentsthathavestoodbythesideoftherestaurantinthefirstplacewouldalsobeinvestigatedandpunished.Similarcasesoffraudulent(欺骗的)pricingatscenicspotshavealsobeenreportedelsewhereinChina.InOctober2015,forinstance,atouristwasoverchargedforacourseofshrimp(虾)inthecoastalcityofQingdao,eastChina'sShandongProvince,whentherestaurantclaimedthequotedpriceof38yuanwasnotforthedish,butforeachshrimp!Authoritiessaythattheseillegalactionswillbeseverelypunished.NarrationWhenWhoWhatWhyWhereHow5W+1HHowtowriteasummary?Step2.Findthetopicsentencesorkeywordsofeachpart.Leaveoutdetailsandreducetheexamples.Recently，awildfishrestaurantwasorderedtoshutdowninHarbin,northeastChina'sHeilongjiangProvince.Asaresult,theowneroftherestaurantfacedafineof500,000yuan.faceaheavyfinewhenwherewhatChenYan,atouristfromChangzhou,eastChina’sJiangsuProvince,complainedonlineonFebruary12thathewasbeingovercharged10,000yuanforthreebigfishatalocalwildfishrestaurantinSongbeiDistrictofHarbin.Worsestill,heclaimedthathisfamilymemberswerebeatenandthreatenedbytherestaurantstaffwhenhequestionedthebillatthecheckout.Chen’scomplaintimmediatelyspreadonChina’ssocialmedia.Theinvestigationresultsbysomelocalgovernmentdepartmentsshowedthattherestauranthadnofault,sincetheyhadalreadytaggedtheprice,whichraiseddoubtamongnetizensagain.whowhatFurtherinvestigationshowedthatonetypeofthefishserved,Huso,wasnottherealwildspecies,butakindoffarmedfishatamuchlowerprice.Sincethepricesofthefishdidhaveviolatedtherightsofconsumers,therestaurantgotitsduepunishment.Meanwhile,relevantgovernmentdepartmentsthathavestoodbythesideoftherestaurantinthefirstplacewouldalsobeinvestigatedandpunished.whySimilarcasesoffraudulent(欺骗的)pricingatscenicspotshavealsobeenreportedelsewhereinChina.InOctober2015,forinstance,atouristwasoverchargedforacourseofshrimp(虾)inthecoastalcityofQingdao,eastChina'sShandongProvince,whentherestaurantclaimedthequotedpriceof38yuanwasnotforthedish,butforeachshrimp!Authoritiessaythattheseillegalactionswillbeseverelypunished.howStep3.Organizeyourownpassage.1.Useyourownwords.2.Tobeconcise.*omitthedetails*reducetheexamples*simplifythedescriptions*eliminateallrepetitions3.Topresenttheinformationfairlyanddonotgiveyourowncomments.4.Addtransitionalexpressionstomakeyoursummarycoherent.Howtowriteasummary?Skill1:_________词性转换法Skill2:__________同义替换法Skill3:__________改变语态法Skill4:___________句式转换法Skill5:__________压缩长句法1.Recently,awildfishrestaurantwasorderedtoshutdowninHarbinandfacedaheavyfine.Lately,awildfishrestaurantinHarbinfacedbeingshutdownandaheavyfine.lately/notlongagorequire/commandclosedown2.ChenYancomplainedhewasbeingoverchargedandwerebeatenandthreatenedbytherestaurantstaff.Chen’scomplaintimmediatelyspreadonChina’ssocialmedia.AcustomernamedChenYanexposedhisbeingoverchargedandtheviolenttreatmentoftherestauranttothepublic.Chen’scomplaintthat…spread…violenttreatmentexpose…tothepublic3.Therestaurantgotitsduepunishmentandrelevantgovernmentdepartmentswouldalsobeinvestigatedandpunished.aswellas/togetherwith/alongwithTherestaurantaswellassomerelevantgovernmentdepartmentsreceivedtheirduepunishment.received4.Similarcaseshavealsobeenreportedelsewhereandauthoritiessaythattheseillegalactionswillbeseverelypunished.happened/tookplacegovernmentwillbeseriouslypunishedwillreceiveserious/severepunishmentSimilarcasesalsohappenedelsewhereandthegovernmentaredeterminedtofightthem.1.Lately,awildfishrestaurantinHarbinfacedbeingshutdownandaheavyfine.2.AcustomernamedChenYanexposedhisbeingoverchargedandtheviolenttreatmentoftherestauranttothepublic.3.Therestaurantaswellassomerelevantgovernmentdepartmentsreceivedtheirduepunishment.4.Similarcasesalsohappenedelsewhereandthegovernmentaredeterminedtofightthem.Onepossibleversion：Lately,awildfi