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读后续写练习（一）Afarmergrewsomevegetablesinhisgarden.Onedayhiswifewasillandhehadnomoney.Hehadtosellsomecabbagesandcarrotsinthemarket.Thenextmorninghetooktwobasketsofvegetablestotown.Butitwasrainingheavilythatafternoonandtherewerefewpeopleinthestreet.Whenhisvegetablesweresoldout,itwasdark.Heboughtsomemedicineandhurriedtohisvillage.Onhiswayhomehesawapersonlyingonthesnow.Heplacedhisbasketsonthegroundandwasgoingtohelpthepersontostandup.Atthattime,hefounditwasadeadmanandtherewasmuchbloodonhisbody.Hewassoafraidthatheranawayquickly,withouttakingthebasketswithhim.Thenextafternoonthefarmerwassenttothepolicestation.Havingshownthebaskets,anofficerasked,“Aretheseyours?”“Yes,sir.”thefarmeransweredtimidly(胆怯地).“Haveyoukilledtheman?”“No,no,sir.”thefarmersaidinahurry.“Whendidyouseethedeadman?”“Ataboutsevenlastnight.”“Didyouseewhokilledtheman?”“No,sir.”Theofficerbroughtoutaknifeandasked,“Haveyouseenityet?”“No,sir.”Theofficerbecameangryandtoldthepolicementobeat(打)himupandsenthimintoprison.theofficerwantedtotrap(设陷阱)thefarmerintotheconfession(供认),butthefarmerdidn’tadmithewasthemurderer(谋杀犯).注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,Possibleanswer:Paragraph1Theofficerwassoangrythatheaskedthepolicemantobeathimupagain.Thefarmerwasveryafraid,andhethoughthewouldbesentencedtodeathbykillingpeople,buthewasinnocent.Hemusttellpeoplethetruth,butnoonecouldhearhisvoice.Hehopedthatsomeonecouldcomeandsavehim.Paragraph2Thefarmerwaslucky.Afewdayslater,ayoungmancametothepolicestationwithalotofjournalists,sayingthathesawthemurderer.Itwasthepoliceofficerwhokilledthemanonthesnow!Hesawthepoliceofficeusedaknifekillingthemanlateintheevening.Hewassofrightenedandranaway.Buttheyoungmanthoughtthefarmerwasinnocent.Sohetookthegreatcouragetoexposetherealcriminal.Aftertheinvestigation,theyoungmanwasright.Thepoliceofficerwassentintoprisonandthepolicemanwhobeatupthefarmerwasfired,andthebraveyoungmanwasregardedastheherobythevillagers.简评：1.Thefarmerwasveryafraid,andhethoughthewouldbesentencedtodeathbykillingpeople.这一句可以改为形容词作状语的悬垂结构：Afraid/Frightened,thefarmerthoughthewouldbesentencedtodeathbykillingpeople.2.Hehopedthatsomeonecouldcomeandsavehim.可改成感叹句，语气更加强烈：Howhehopedthatsomeonecouldcomeandsavehim!3....ayoungmancametothepolicestationwithalotofjournalists,sayingthathesawthemurderer.后半部分词作状语，构成悬垂结构。saying可以换成declaring宣布;saw可换成witnessed,目击。4.Itwasthepoliceofficerwhokilledthemanonthesnow!强调句，高级。强调部分还可以加上否定内容使语意更加完整。此处可以用到Itwasnot...but...that...或者Itwas...ratherthan...that...即：Itwasnotthefarmerbutthepoliceofficerthatkilledthemanonthesnow!或者Itwasthepoliceofficerratherthanthefarmerthatkilledthemanonthesnow!5.Sohetookthegreatcouragetoexposetherealcriminal.中tookthegreatcourageto鼓起极大勇气做某事。6.Aftertheinvestigation,theyoungmanwasright.建议改为：Afterinvestigation,thepolicefoundwhattheyoungmanhadsaidwasthetruth.7.Thepoliceofficerwassentintoprisonandthepolicemanwhobeatupthefarmerwasfired,andthebraveyoungmanwasregardedastheherobythevillagers.最后一句可以适当加上副词。Immediately,thepoliceofficerwassentintoprisonandthepolicemanwhobeatupthefarmerwasfired.Eventually,thepoorfarmerwasreleasedandthebraveyoungmanwasregardedastheherobythevillagers.读后续写练习（二）Iwasrespondingtoacallfromasmallbrickflat(用砖做的公寓)inaquietpartoftown.IassumedIwasbeingsenttopickupsomeparty-goers，orsomeonewhohadjusthadafightwithalover，oraworkerheadingtoanearlyshiftatsomefactoryfortheindustrialpartoftown.WhenIarrivedat2：30a.m.，thebuildingwasdarkexceptforasinglelightinagroundfloorwindow.Undersuchcircumstances，manydriversjusthonk（按喇叭）onceortwice，waitaminute，thendriveaway.ButIhadseentoomanyweakpeoplewhodependedontaxisastheironlymeansoftransportation.Unlessasituationsmelledofdanger，Ialwayswenttothedoor.Thispassengermightbesomeonewhoneedsmyassistance，Ireasonedtomyself.SoIwalkedtothedoorandknocked.“Justaminute，”answeredafrail，elderlyvoice.Icouldhearsomethingbeingdraggedacrossthefloor.Afteralongpause，thedooropened.Asmallwomaninher80sstoodbeforeme.Shewaswearingaprintdressandapillboxhat，likesomebodyoutofa1940smovie.Byhersidewasasmallnylonsuitcase.Theapartmentlookedasifnoonehadlivedinitforyears.Allthefurniturewascoveredwithsheets.Therewerenoclocksonthewalls，noequipmentonthecounters.Inthecornerwasacardboardboxfilledwithphotosandglassware.“Wouldyoucarrymybagouttothecar？”shesaid.Itookthesuitcasetothecab，thenreturnedtoassistthewoman.Shetookmyarm，andwewalkedslowlytowardthecab.Shekeptthankingmeformykindness.“It'snothing,”Itoldher.“IjusttrytotreatmypassengersthewayIwouldwantmymothertreated.”注意：1.所续写的短文词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为二段，每段的开头语已经为你写好；4续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:Havinggivenmeanaddress,ahospice,sheasked.“Couldyoudrivethroughdowntown?”Paragraph2:wedroveinsilencetotheaddressshehadgivenme,andit…Paragraph1:Havinggivenmeanaddress,ahospice,sheasked.“Couldyoudrivethroughdowntown?”Askedwhywedidn’ttaketheshortestway,thesmallwomantoldmeitwasthelastchanceforhertovisitthecity.Wedrovethro