2017年英语高考浙江新题型续写

第1页共8页读后续写一、考纲解读提供一段350词以内的语言材料，要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写（150词左右），将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。二、原题分析①原文材料350词以内，所续写文章150词左右。②原文多是情节丰富的记叙文，偶有少量的议论文。③原文给出10处左右的标有下划线的关键词语，所续写短文应使用5个以上。④续写部分分为两段．．，每段开头语已经给出。⑤续写部分分为两大类别：1)半开放性质。必须依据文章的语境逻辑推理续写。2)完全开放性质。可以依据文章的思路，自己发挥。三、注意事项①词数要求。②与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度。③内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用。④应用语言结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性。⑤上下文的连贯性。四、评分原则①本题总分为25分，按5个档次给分。②评分时，先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次，最后给分。③词数少于130的，从总分中减去2分。④评分时，应主要从以下四个方面考虑：(1)与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度；(2)内容的丰富性和对所标出关键词语的应用情况；(3)应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性；(4)上下文的连贯性。⑤拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面，评分时，应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。⑥如书写较差以致影响交际，可将分数降低一个档次。第2页共8页续写导练（一）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。WhenIwaselevenyearsold,Ihadabigaccident.IgetscaredevennowwhenIthinkaboutthattime.Iwentskatingnearmyhouse.Thereweremanypeople,andIsawsomeofthemfallingontheice.Itwasmyfirsttimetogoiceskating,soIwasnervous.Iwaswonderinghowtoskate.Iwentwithafriendwhowasveryskillful.Hespentsometimeteachingmehowtoskate,butIdidn’tlearnmuch.Heleftmeandskatedallaround.Assoonasheleft,Ifelldown.Ienviedtheotherpeoplebecausetheycouldskatewell.IwasboredbecauseIkeptfallingsoItookoffmyskatesandjustwalkedaroundontheiceinmyshoes.Itwascoldandmyhandswerefrozen.Suddenly,Isteppedonsomethingthatwasnothard.Whatwasit?Itwasaweakplaceintheice.WhenIsteppedthere,Isankundertheice.IthoughtthatIwasgoingtodie,butIdidmybesttograbsomethingtogetoutfromundertheice.Itriedtograbtheedgeoftheice,butitwasverydifficultforaneleven-year-old.Itseemedlikeaverylongtime,likeayear.Then,fortunately,someonehelpedme.Hegrabbedmyarmsandpulledmeup.So,IlivedandI’mstillalivetoday.Ithankedhim.Atthattime,myfriendcameback.Iwasannoyedathimbecausehewassupposedtotakecareofme,buthedidn’t.Hewasembarrassed.WhenItookataxihome,thetaxidriverwassurprisedandaskedwhathadhappened.Ididn’twanttosayanythingbecauseIwastiredandscared.Evennow,wheneverIthinkaboutthattime,Ifeeluncomfortable.Idon’twanttogoskatingagainevennow.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:ItwaslongbeforeIwentskatingonceagain,第3页共8页Paragraph2:However,eversincethenIhaven’tfoundanytimetogoskating,续写导练（二）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。MrBrownlivedinahouselessthantwomilesawayfromhisoffice.Hewasthereforeabletodrivehomeeverydayforlunch.Everytimehedroveinthemiddleoftheday,hefoundcarswereparkedintheroadoutsidehishouse,andtherewasnoroomforhisowncar.Hehadtodrivetwoblocksfartherbeforehecouldfindaplacetopark.Thenhehadtowalkhome.Thismadehimveryangry.Hehadputupaboardwhichread“NoParking!”inthegardenfacingtheroad,butnobodyseemedtopayattentiontoit.Peopleonlyobeyedapolicenotice,butnotaprivateone.Therewerenoparkedcarswheretherewasablueboardwithwhitelettersonit:PoliceNotice—NoParking!MrsBrownsuggestedthatheshouldstealapolicenotice.Buthedarednot,beingafraidofgoingtoprison.Shethensuggestedthathemakeonejustlikeapolicenotice.Hesaidhewasnotapolicemanandcouldn’tusetheword“police”.Hedecidedthathemustfindawayoutandstartedthinkinghard.Forseveraldays,thesmellofpaintfilledthehouse.Onenightheshowedhislifeanewnoticeboard.Itwaspaintedinwhitelettersonablueboard:PoliteNotice—NoParking!“Oh,”MrsBrownsaid,“butyoutoldmeyouweren’tgoingtousetheword‘police’.That’sexactlylikeapolicenotice.”“Isit?”heasked.“Lookagain.”Shebegantolaugh,“Youarereallyratherclever.”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。第4页共8页Paragraph1:WhydidMrsBrownsayherhusbandwasreallyratherclever?Paragraph2:IfthepolicediscoveredthattheBrownswereusingapolicenotice,续写导练（三）阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Mymotherusedtoaskmewhatthemostimportantpartofthebodyis.ThroughtheyearsIwouldtakeaguessatwhatIthoughtwasthecorrectanswer.WhenIwasyounger,Ithoughtsoundwasveryimportanttousashumans,soIsaid,“Myears,Mommy.”Shesaid,“No.Manypeoplearedeaf.Buttheyaredoingwellintheirlife.YoukeepthinkingaboutitandIwillaskyouagainsoon.”Severalyearspassedbeforesheaskedmeagain.Sincemakingmyfirstattempt,Ihadcontemplated（深思）thecorrectanswer.SothistimeItoldher,“Mommy,sightisveryimportanttoeverybody,soitmustbeoureyes.”Shelookedatmeandtoldme,“Youarelearningfast,buttheanswerisnotcorrectbecausetherearemanypeoplewhoareblind.”Overtheyearsmymotheraskedmeacouplemoretimesandalwaysheranswerwas:“No,butyouare第5页共8页gettingsmartereveryyear,mychild.”Thenlastyear,mygrandpadied.Everybodywashurt.Everybodywascrying.MyMomlookedatmewhenitwasourturntosayourfinalgoodbyetograndpa.Sheaskedme,“Doyouknowthemostimportantbodypartyet,mydear?”Iwassurprisedwhensheaskedmethisonthisoccasion.Ialwaysthoughtthiswasagamebetweenherandme.Shesawtheconfusiononmyfaceandtoldme,“Thisquestionisveryimportant.Howyouansweritshowswhetheryouhavelearnedaboutlife.Foreverybodypartyougavemeinthepast,IhavetoldyouwerewrongandIhavegivenyouareasonwhy.Buttodayisthedayyouwillknowtheanswer.”Ilookpuzzled.“Allyourpreviousanswers-ears,eyes,hands,heart...Theyareallveryimportanttoyourself.ButthistimeIneedyoutothinkofsomethingthatisimportanttoothers.”注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4.续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1:“Mydear,themo