高考书面表达讲解课件

暑假即将来临，你班同学讨论了假期计划，提出了不同看法。请根据提示写一篇有关讨论的英语短文，并谈谈你的看法。注意：1.词数100-120（不含已写好部分）2．短文必须包括表中所列要点，可根据内容分段表述。3．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。4．参考词汇：眼界---horizon(view)TheSummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringthesummerholiday.优点缺点待在家中花费少，舒适方便不能亲身了解外界外出旅游增长知识,开拓眼界花费多,旅途不便1.Pre-writing：2.While-writing：3.Post-writing：Discussion:Howtocomposeacomposition（议论文）?审题：type（议论文）、tense(主要为一般现在时)person(第一或第三人称)、mainpoints(要点)correctsentencestructuretransitionwords/expressions（过渡词）properstructureforthepassagebeautifulsentencesneathandwritingreadandcheck(动词时态,人称,单词拼写,大小写,名词单复数,连词和标点的使用)mainpointssentencespassageMainpoints花费少／多舒适，方便了解外界世界Thecost/expenseislow/high.Itcostslessthan/morethan…Theywillspendless/morethan…knowtheoutsideworldhaveagoodknowledgeoftheworldhaveabetterunderstandingofcolorfulworldIt’sconvenientandcomfortable.Itoffersthemconvenienceandcomfort.增长知识，拓宽眼界旅游不便意愿，选择addto/enrich/increaseourknowledgewiden/broaden/enlargeourhorizons/viewsIt’sinconvenientanduncomfortable.meetsomeproblems/difficultiesduringthetrip.preferto/beinfavorof/tendto/wouldrather/wouldliketo/insistthat/holdtheviewthat…StructureforthepassageTheSummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringthesummerholiday.Some________.Theythink___________.What’smore,_______________________.But____________________.However,others_________________.But_____________.Inmyopinion,________________.CorrectsomemistakesTense:Person:Structure:Spelling:experenceconveientcomfotableincreseknowlegeboardensocityexperienceconvenientcomfortableincreaseknowledgebroaden混乱混乱段落不清晰,没条理,忽略发表意见部分societyCorrectonestudent’spassageThesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.Therearesomestudentsareinfavorofstayingathome.Theyareconvenientandcomfortable.Theythinkstayathomespendlessmoney.Buttheycan’tlearntheoutworldbythemselves.But,otherstudentsthoughtgotravelinghavesomeadvantage.Itcangrowourknowledgeandopenourhorizons.Butitneedmoremoneyandcausemanydifficultsinthejourney.Inmyopinion,stayathomeisbetterthangoout.\ItisstayingcostsoutsideHowever,thinkgoinghassincreasetheirbroadentheirssdifficultiesstayinggoing•Transitionwordsandphrases表并列，递进表转折，对比表发表意见besides／inaddition／apartfrom/also／what’smore/what’sworse/furthermorewhile／however／but／ontheotherhand／onthecontraryinmyopinion/asfarasI’mconcerned/asforme/fromthepointofmyview/personallyIthink/formypartEnjoyonegoodpassagefromastudent(凌玉)Thesummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadiscussionaboutwhattododuringtheholiday.Somestudentsthinkthatweshouldstayathome,foritcostsuslittleanditisconvenientandcomfortable.Butitwilllimitourcommunicationwithsocietyandnature.Ontheotherhand,someholdtheideathattravelingisagoodwayforustolearnmuchknowledgewhichwecan’tlearnfromschool.It’sjustlikeabridgethatcombinesuswiththeoutsideworld,whichwillbroadenourhorizons.Theseareveryimportantforourfuturestudyandwork.Butitoftencostsussomuchthatwecan’tafford,whichmightthrowusintotrouble.Asweknow,everythinghastwosides.Bothhavetheirownadvantagesanddisadvantages.Wecan’tsaywhichisgoodandwhichisbad.Wecanchooseitaccordingtoourhobbiesandeconomics.Somethingworthlearning1.合理的过渡词/句子2.变换句型及表达方式（避免难点，文章不拘一格）3.使用高级句型,使文章增色不少.使得行文流畅，条理清晰，文章更有说服力1.nothingismoreimportantthefactyouwillspendlittlemoney.(张超)2.AsfarasI’mconcerned,goingoutsideisbetterthanstayingathome.(陈玲)3.It’smorecomfortableandconvenienttostayathome.(骆群)4.Somestudentsthinktravelingcanenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.(魏薇,万青等)5.Ifweweretodoit,wewouldknowmoreabouttheworldandmakeourhorizonbigger.(张瑞)6.Somestudentsareinfavorofstayingathome.(谈炎)1.Somepeopleprefertostayathomethangotraveling.(丘菊)2.Wecanknowthevarietyofcultureallovertheworld.(徐甲)3.wecannotlearnmanythingshappeningintheworldwithouthavingtogooutsideourhouses.(赵鹃)Enjoysomebeautifulsentences1.Thesummerholidayoffersusagoodchancetodomorevaluablethings,suchasreadingbooks,doinghousework,practicinginthesocietyandsoon.(骆彬)2.Asisknowntous,everythinghastwosides.(陆千军等)3.Opinionsaredividedonthistopic.(高明等)4.Somestudentsthinktravelingcanenrichtheirknowledgeandbroadentheirhorizons.(魏薇等)5.Theypointoutthattheycangainalotmoreknowledgewhichtheycan’tlearnfromtextbooks.(耿云丽等)6.Onlyinthiswaycanweknowhowbeautifulourcountryis.(耿云丽等)7.Nomatterwhatwewilldointhesummerholiday,weshouldn’twastetheprecioustime.(杨云弄)8.Butwecan’thaveagoodknowledgeoftheoutsideworld.SoIagreewiththelatter,whichletusbreathethefreshair.(纪程迈)9.Travelingoutside,wecangetabetterunderstandingofthesociety.Onlythencanwemakelotsoffriendsandlearntogetonwellwithothers.(张青)10.However,therearesomeagainststayingathome,thinkingit’sagoodchancetoknowaboutthesocietyandgetclosetonature.(鲜义芬)11.Somestudentsholdtheideathatstayingathomeisbetterthantravelingoutsideduringtheholiday.(张爱莲)12．Otherstudentsinsistthatstayingathomewillpreventusfromknowingmoreaboutthesociety.（吉云）13.Ifwehaveenoughmoney,wecangotraveling.Ifnot,wemightaswellstayathome.(高翔)14.Whethertostayathomeortogoonatripdependsonourowneconomicconditions.(徐宝轩)SampleTheSummerholidayiscoming.Ourclasshavehadadisc