高一英语作文训练Unit1 Festivals around the world Writing

评论某一事物利与弊的套用格式1.提出要评论的事物或观点.2.分别陈述利与弊(或不同的观点)3.归纳得出作者的结论.a.有定论的,作者可明确表态(赞成或反对)b.争议较大的或尚无定论的,可不明确表态,提出扬长避短的方法,也可以平衡其利弊,提出某种期望和设想.典型模板1、Justasacoinhastwosides,______alsohassomesideeffects.2、However,______hasalsoalotofproblems.Foronething,____________;Foranother,___________.Finally,____________.1、___hasbroughtanumberofbenefitstous.2、——isabeneficialactivity,inwhichwecanobtainmanyadvantages.Firstofall,________.Also,____________.Mostimportantly,____________________.先阐述要讨论的东西Weareallawarethateverythinghasitstwosides,______isnoexception.开头:优点：缺点：结尾:1）Inspiteofthesedisadvantages,Ithink____doesmoregoodthanharmtopeople.Andthedisadvantages,sincetheyhavebeenpointedoutclearly,willbedealtwitheffectively.2）Weighingthetwosides,thereisnodenyingthefactthat______hasproducedgreateffectsonsociety.3）Toconclude,Iwouldsaythattheadvantagesoutweighthedisadvantages.4）Insum,______doesmoregoodthanharmto______.Wemusttakeacorrectattitudetowards______.Weshouldtakefulladvantageofitandavoiditsdisadvantages.苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Shouldwegivemoreattentiontostudents’healthorgrades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。支持方的理由反对方的理由你的看法及理由1．可以促进对体育的重视；2．可以增强学生的体魄；3．更有利于提高学习效率。1．学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；2．过高的要求学生难以达到；3．长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥2—3点)注意：1．词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2．对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。1.Agoodbeginningmakesagoodending.2.Yourcompositionshouldbedividedintoparagraphs.3.You’dbetterusesomelinkingwords.4.Handwritingisofgreatimportance.Suggestions:最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生1500米，高中生2000米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。先阐述要讨论的东西Weareallawarethateverythinghasitstwosides,______isnoexception.国家教育部theMinistryofEducationofChina冬季长跑活动Winterlong-distancerunningactivity小学生primaryschoolstudent初中生juniorschoolstudent高中中highschoolstudentRecently,theMinistryofEducationofChinarequirestudentstotakepartinthewinterlong-distancerunningactivity.Itissuggestedthatprimaryschoolstudentsrun1,000metersaday,juniorschoolstudents,1,500andseniorschoolstudents,2000.running优点：1、_____hasbroughtanumberofbenefitstous.2、_____isabeneficialactivity,inwhichwecanobtainmanyadvantages.Firstofall,________.Also,____________.Mostimportantly,____________________.支持方的理由1．可以促进对体育的重视；2．可以增强学生的体魄；3．更有利于提高学习效率。1.促进对体育的重视catchone’sattentiontophysicaleducation2.增强学生体魄improvestudents’health3.提高学习效率helpstudentsstudyefficientlyRunningRunningpeoplewillpaymoreattentiontophysicaleducationrunningcanimprovestudents’health.ithelpsstudentsstudymoreefficientlyRunninghasbroughtanumberofbenefitstous.Firstofall,peoplewillpaymoreattentiontophysicaleducation.Also,runningcanimprovestudent’shealth.Andmostimportantly,ithelpsstudentsstudymoreefficiently.缺点：1、Justasacoinhastwosides,______alsohassomesideeffects.2、However,______hasalsoalotofproblems.Foronething,____________;Foranother,___________.Finally,____________.反对方的理由1．学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；2．过高的要求学生难以达到；3．长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。1.以学习为主,考试成绩决定个人前途studyisthemostimportanttaskofstudents,theirfuturedependsonthegradesintheirsubjects.2.过高的要求学生难以达到studentscan’tmeetthehighrequirement.3.引起感冒或伤害suffercoldorinjuriesrunningrunningstudyingisthemostimportanttaskofstudents,theirfuturedependsonthegradesintheirsubjects.studentscan’tmeetthehighrequirementstudentsmaysuffercoldorinjuriesHowever,runningalsohasalotofproblems.Foronething,studyingisthemostimportanttaskofstudents,theirfuturedependsonthegradesintheirsubjects.Foranother,studentscan’tmeetthehighrequirement.Finally,studentsmaysuffercoldorinjuriesbecauseofrunning.结尾Insum,______doesmoregoodthanharmto______.Wemusttakeacorrectattitudetowards__________________.Weshouldtakefulladvantageofitandavoiditsdisadvantages.runningstudentsthisrunningactivityForexamplewecandosomewarm-upexercisetoavoidbeinginjuredwhenrunning.Recently,theMinistryofEducationofChinarequirestudentstotakepartinthewinterlong-distancerunningactivity.Itissuggestedthatprimaryschoolstudentsrun1,000metersaday,juniorschoolstudents,1,500andseniorschoolstudents,2000.Weareallawarethateverythinghasitstwosides,runningisnoexception.Runninghasbroughtanumberofbenefitstous.Firstofall,peoplewillpaymoreattentiontophysicaleducation.Also,runningcanimprovestudent’shealth.Andmostimportantly,ithelpsstudentsstudymoreefficiently.However,runningalsohasalotofproblems.Foronething,studyingisthemostimportanttaskofstudents,theirfuturedependsonthegradesintheirsubjects.Foranother,studentscan’tmeetthehighrequirement.Finally,studentsmaysuffercoldorinjuriesbecauseofrunning.Insum,runnigdoesmoregoodthanharmtostudents.Wemusttakeacorrectattitudetowardstherunningactivity.Weshouldtakefulladvantageofitandavoiditsdisadvantages.Forexamplewecandosomewarm-upexercisetoavoidbeinginjuredwhenrunning.面对中学生“出国热”,社会对此有不同的看法.请你以StudyingAbroad为题,根据以下提示信息,谈谈自己的看法.Advantages：良好的语言环境,更利于语言学习.拓宽视野,学习国外先进的科学技术传播各民族间的不同文化Disadvantages：年纪小,缺乏生活经验,自理能力差情感孤独,思乡生活,学习费用高注意:1.第一句已为你写好,不计入总词数.2.词数120左右StudyingAbroadInrecentyears,studyingabroadhasbeenpopular.表达个人观点的用语•Ithink/Ifirmlybelievethat…•inmyopinion,/inmyview,….•personallyspeaking,…•AsfarasIamconcerned,…•Inmypointofview,….•Iagreewiths