高中定语从句与书面表达资料

1.Combinesentenceswiththeattributiveclause.Today,wearegoingto…2.Makesentenceswiththeattributiveclause.根据所掌握的定语从句的知识，熟练地使用定语从句也是高考英语写作的一项基本要求。定语从句属于较为复杂的语法结构，根据内容要点在短文中适当地运用定语从句有助于提高写作的得分。高考满分作文中的定语从句欣赏：2.HereI’dliketointroduceyousomewayswhichmighthelpyouimproveyourlisteningability.1.Sofar,wehavedonesomeunforgettablethings,oneofwhichwastalkingwithforeignersintheCentralPark.4.Inthiswaywemaymakefriendswiththosewhohavealotincommonwithusbothincharactersandininterests.3.WewillgototakepartinthesummercampheldbyyourschoolthisJuly,whichmakesusveryexcited.5.CurrentlyChinahasabout350millionsmokers,amongwhom75%aremenand25%arewomen.写作中定语从句的主要作用:1.增加词数（100词左右）2.可以连接两个包含同一事物的句子，避免单词的重复和句式单一。3.补充细节，以丰富文章内容。一、句子的合并题干中出现两句涉及同一事物的简单句。Solution:如何写出定语从句3.确定关系词2.再确定主句：根据文章所描述的主题来确定较重要的信息为主句。1.找两句中共同的名词或代词，将其定为先行词。•两个句子间的合并①IwenttoHangzhouforthreedays.②DuringthattimeIvisitedthewholeWestLake.IwenttoHangzhouforthreedays,duringwhichIvisitedthewholeWestLake.Task1预习自测①Atpresenttherearemoreandmorestudents.②Theireyesightispoorerandpoorer.Atpresenttherearemoreandmorestudents,whoseeyesightispoorerandpoorer.①Hehadgivenupsuchagoodchance.②Ididn’tknowthereason.Ididn’tknowthereasonwhyhehadgivenupsuchagoodchance.①Thisisthemuseum.②Wesawanexhibitioninthemuseumtheotherday.Thisisthemuseumwhere/inwhichwesawanexhibitiontheotherday.•两个以上句子间的合并①Johnismybestfriend.②Johngavemeagift.③HeboughtthisgiftfromUSA.John,mybestfriend,gavemeagift,whichheboughtfromUSA.Task2合作探究:①Kateisanewstudent.②Shecomesfromanorthernprovince.③Shespeaksadialect.④Wefindithardtounderstandherdialect.Kate,anewstudentfromanorthernprovince,speaksadialectwhichwefindhardtounderstand.Practicemore1.王蒙，女，25岁，黑龙江人；2.10岁开始滑冰训练WangMeng,agirlof25whowasborninHeiLongjiangProvince,beganherskatingtrainingattheageof10.•Iphone，苹果公司制造,深受青少年欢迎。Iphone,akindofcellphonewhichwasmadebyApple,isquitepopularamongteenagers.二、插入语的使用众所周知：如上所述：情况常常如此…Asweallknow/AsisknowntousallAsismentionedaboveAsisoftenthecase…1.Asweallknow,lifeisfullofdreamsandhavingagooddreamisofgreatimportanceinourdailylife.我们都知道，生活充满了梦想。在我们日常生活中拥有一个美好的梦想是很重要的。Task3翻译下列句子2.如上所述，我支持后者的观点。I,asismentionedabove,aminfavorofthelatterview.3.正如我们所期待的，她取得了第一名。She,aswehadexpected,gotthefirstprize.4.Asisoftenthecase,thefactthatsomethingischeapdoesn’tnecessarilymeanit’soflowquality.情况往往如此，便宜的东西未必就质量不好。Solution:找到这个简单句中的中心词，用定语从句将其丰富。Forexample:汉语是一门受欢迎的语言。Chineseisapopularlanguage.Chineseisapopularlanguage,whichisnowspokenandusedbymoreandmorepeopleallaroundtheworld.怎么受欢迎？为谁所欢迎？三、在要点增加上的使用题干中只有一个孤立的简单句1.派对将于十二月二十五号举行。ThepartywillbeheldonDecember25th.Theparty，whichisdesignedtowelcometheforeignersfromothercountries，willbeheldonDecember25th.(派对的目的)Task4Practice李明是一个热心肠的人。LiMingisawarm-heartedman.LiMingisawarm-heartedman,whoalwayshelpsotherswhentheyareintrouble.(具体化)温馨提示：用which引导的非限制定语从句可以增添做这些事情的原因或结果。1.Inthissummervacation,Iwouldliketodoapart-timejob，whichwillhelpmegainmoneyandworkingexperience.2.Youlookedupsetinclassyesterday,whichmademeworried.3.Iwouldliketodovoluntarywork,whichwillhelpthoseinneed.Task5补充细节，丰富文章内容。能力提升（2011全国2卷)假定你是李华，你所喜爱的GlobalMirror周报创刊五周年之际征集读者意见。请你依据以下内容给主编写封信，内容主要包括：1．说明你是该报的忠实读者2．赞赏该报优点：1)兼顾国内外新闻2)介绍名人成功故事3．提出建议：刊登指导英语学习的文章注意：1．词数100左右，开头语己为你写好；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。1)兼顾国内外新闻可以让我见识广阔。Itcoversbothnationalandinternationalnews,whichhelpsmetoknowmoreabouttheworld.2)介绍名人成功故事这会激励我努力学习。Itintroducesmanystoriesofthecelebrities,whichcaninspiremetostudyhard.假定你是李华,2022年冬季奥运会将在你所居住的城市张家口举办，现正在招募志愿者，你希望成为其中一员。请按要求用英文给组委会写一封信。内容应包括：1.个人情况：年龄，性别，学历2.个人条件：英语好，爱好体育，善于交际，乐于助人，熟悉本地情况3.承诺：提供最佳服务注意：词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；生词：申请—apply(v.),application(n.)志愿者—volunteer巩固练习Homework:Tips:•定语从句虽好,但不宜过多•容易超出字数限制•学会将定语从句浓缩为非谓语动词则是写作的最高境界•个人情况：年龄，性别，学历•Iam16yearsold.•Iamagirl.•IstudyinZhangJiakouNo.1middleschool.I,16yearsoldgirl,studyinZhangJiakouNo.1middleschool,whichisoneofthebestseniorschoolsinZhangJiakou.DearSir/Madam,MynameisLiHua.IwouldliketoworkasavolunteerfortheWinterOlympicGames.I,16yearsoldgirl,studyinZhangJiakouNo.1middleschool,whichisoneofthebestseniorschoolsinZhangJiakou.WiththegreatfluencyinEnglishandtheburningpassionforsports,IsupposeIamqualifiedtobeavolunteerfortheGames.Besides,IamgoodatcommunicatingandIamconsideredtobeanoutgoing,reliableandhelpfulperson.What'smore,Iamfamiliarwiththelocalconditions.IpromiseIwillofferthebestservicetothosewhoparticipateintheGames.NowIformallyapplyforthejobandIsincerelyhopeIcanbeaccepted.Yoursfaithfully,LiHua