Unit_2_Healthy_eating_有关减肥的写作_Writing

Writing词汇训练1.nutritionnutritiousenergy2.usualunusualcommon3.patientimpatientproper4.helphelpfulharm5.harddifficulthealthy6.healthysickfatenergeticuncommonimproperharmfulfitthin/slim词汇训练1.节食2.渴望减肥3.挑食4.养成健康的饮食习惯5.对环境造成危害go/beonadietbedyingto/eagertoloseweight或desiretoloseweightbeparticularaboutfoodform/develophealthyeatinghabitsdoharm/damagetotheenvironment完成句子1.多吃蔬菜对我们的健康有益。1)Eatingmorevegetables______________ourhealth.2)Eatingmorevegetables______________ourhealth.ishelpfulto/isgoodfor/doesgoodto/isbeneficialtoisofhelp/benefitto完成句子2.运动不仅能让我们精力充沛，还能让我们身体健康。1)Doingexercisecanmakeus__________________________.2)Doingexercisenotonly_______________，butalso_________________.healthy/fitaswellasenergeticmakesusenergetickeepsushealthy/fit完成句子3.只有我们养成健康的饮食习惯，我们才能保持健康。1)_______________________________，andwecan_____________.2)____ifwe________________________canwe______________.Form/Develophealthyeatinghabitskeephealthy/fitOnlyform/develophealthyeatinghabitskeephealthy/fit完成句子4.据报道，越来越多的女生节食减肥。1)_____________，moreandmoregirls____________to___________.2)________________moreandmoregirlstryto____________by_____________.Asisreportedgo/areonadietloseweightItisreportedthatloseweightgoingonadiet范文赏析1.不当的减肥方法：吃减肥药，做手术，疯狂节食，疯狂锻炼；2.减肥不当的后果：营养缺失，引发疾病甚至猝死；3.正确的减肥方法：养成健康的饮食习惯，如少吃零食，多吃水果、蔬菜；适当运动。以下是关于减肥的一些资料。范文赏析【写作内容】不少年轻女孩热衷于减肥，根据以上表格写一篇英语短文，内容包括：1.介绍不当的减肥方法及其后果；2.推荐正确的减肥方法。【写作要求】只能使用5个句子表达全部内容。【评分标准】句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章连贯。范文赏析引出现象：用定语从句引出话题①Asiswidelyknown,lotsofpeople，especiallyyounggirls,aredyingtoloseweight.②However,themethodstheyuse,suchastakingpills,havingoperations,goingonstrictdietsandexercisinginacrazyway,areimproper.深入分析：现象+后果以However引出不当的方法范文赏析用notonly...，butalso...的结构引出后果③Thesemethodsmaynotonlyleadtoalackofnutrition，butalsoleadtodiseasesandevensuddendeath.④Actually,therightwaytoloseweightistoformhealthyeatinghabitslikeeatinglesssnacksbutmorefruitandvegetables.⑤Besides,aproperamountofexercisecanalsobeofgreatbenefit.推荐方法：主系表的简单句，不定式短语作定语和表语简单句loseweightbedyingtodosth.goonadietalackofsth.leadtosth.forma...habit好词1)Asiswidelyknown，...2)Thesemethodsmaynotonly...，butalso...3)Actually，therightwaytoloseweightisto...好句方法指导1.认真审题，确定文体及时态(本文文体属议论文，时态用一般现在时)；2.根据【写作内容】整理出信息点；3.根据信息点，用各种句子结构连词成句；4.最后通读并润色修改文章。看要点是否齐全，文章的时态、人称是否一致，句子结构是否完整等。句型训练1.Somegirlsskipbreakfasteverymorning.Somechildreneattoomucheveryday.(用适当的连接词连接句子)2.Itisknowntousallthatslimmingpillsareharmfultoourhealth.(用定语从句改写句子)Somegirlsskipbreakfasteverymorning，whilesomechildreneattoomucheveryday.Asisknowntousall，slimmingpillsareharmfultoourhealth.句型训练3.Thegirlisinperfectshapenow.Sheusedtorunhalfanhouraday.(用定语从句合并句子)4.Shedecidesnottoeatdessertbeforebed.Shecanbeslimagain.(用合适的连接词连接句子)Thegirl，whousedtorunhalfanhouraday，isinperfectshapenow.Shedecidesnottoeatdessertbeforebedsothatshecanbeslimagain.改写短文Somestudentswhostayuplateintonightchoosenottohavebreakfastsothattheycanhaveafewextraminutesinbedinthemorning.Besides,someschoolgirlswanttokeepslimsotheyoftengotoschoolwithouthavingbreakfast.Asaresult,thesestudentsarelikelytofeelsleepyinclassandhavepoormemories,whichmakesithardforthemtodowellinexams.Infact,breakfastplaysanimportantpartbecauseitcanprovide30percentofawholeday’senergy.Therefore,itisamustthatwehavebreakfasteverymorning.基础写作However,badeatinghabitsaren’tuncommonamongusstudents,suchasoftengoingtoschoolwithouthavingbreakfast,preferringsnackstomeals,beingparticularaboutfoodandsometimeseatingordrinkingtoomuch.Allthesebadhabitswillsurelydoharmtoourhealth.Tokeepfit,we’dbetterhavemealsregularly,anditwouldbebetterifthey’revarioushealthydiets,whichcontainthenutritionneeded.Inmyopinion,weshouldtrytodevelophealthyeatinghabitstobuildupastrongbody.Onlyinthiswaycanwebemoreenergeticandstudymoreeffectively.