公开课：应用文写作之建议信ppt课件

课程名称：应用文写作之建议信复习内容：建议信基础写作书面表达（满分25分)假设你是李华，你的朋友Mike与父母一道来到中国。他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：1.邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。2.提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音等3．祝愿他学习取得进步。注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。一、欣赏与学习（见巩固练习第一题）Page2Outline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:第一段：第二段：第三段：Page3DearMike,IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem.HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese.Firstly,itisimportanttospeakChinesemore,bothinandoutofclass.TryyourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese.Ithinkthemoreyouspeak,thebetteryourChinesewillbe.Secondly,itshouldbeagreatideatopaymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater.Inconclusion,Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.Wishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies.YoursFaithfully,LiHuaALetterofAdvicePage4Outline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:第一段：第二段：第三段：RaisetheproblemAdviceWishesFirstpersonPresenttenseLetterPage5DearMike,IamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceonhowtoimproveyourChineseandIunderstandyourproblem.HereismyadviceforimprovingyourChinese.Firstly,itisimportanttospeakChinesemore,bothinandoutofclass.TryyourbesttocommunicatewithyourclassmatesinChinese.Ithinkthemoreyouspeak,thebetteryourChinesewillbe.Secondly,itshouldbeagreatideatopaymoreattentiontoTVhostswhenyouarewatchingTVathome.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogresssoonerorlater.Inconclusion,Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.Wishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudies.YoursFaithfully,LiHuaALetterofAdvicePage6Usefulexpressions:1.Iamgladtoreceiveyouremailaskingformyadviceon….2.Hereismyadvicefor…3.itisimportanttodosth.4.themore…,thebetter….5.itshouldbeagreatideatodosth.6.I’msureyouwillmakegreatprogress.7.Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.8.Firstly,….Secondly,….Inconclusion,….Page7Learntomakesentences.（见巩固练习第二题）1.我收到你的来信询问我关于学习压力的问题，我深感遗憾。（Iamsorryto….）_________________________________________________2.劳逸结合很重要。（combine…with…）_________________________________________________3.强烈建议你保持均衡的饮食习惯。（keepabalanceddiet）_________________________________________________4.适当的户外运动是一个好主意。（outdooractivities）__________________________________________________5.你吃的健康食品越多，你的身体就会越好。__________________________________________________Doyouknowanyotherusefulexpressions?Iamsorrytoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonpressure.Itisimportanttocombinestudywithplay.Istronglyadviseyoutokeepabalanceddiet.Itshouldbeagreatideatodoproperoutdooractivities.Themorehealthyfoodyoueat,thebetterhealthyouwillhave.Page8Forthebeginning1.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning…2.Iamwritingtosharewithyoumyopinionabout…Forthemainbody1.Istronglyadvise/suggestthatyoushould…because…2.IfIwereyou,Iwould…Fortheending1.Ihopemyadvicecanbeofsomehelptoyou.2.Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.◇UsefulSentences◇Page9假设你是李华，你的笔友Tony写信告诉你他最近在学习中的一些困难。他感到学习压力大，正常生活也受到影响，如睡眠不足，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你给他写一封信，给他提供帮助。注意：1.词数100左右2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。Learnwritealetterofadvice.（见巩固练习第三题）Page10Outline提纲Style体裁格式：Tense主导时态：Person中心人称：文章结构要点：StructureandPoints:第一段：第二段：第三段：RaisetheproblemAdviceWishesFirstpersonPresenttenseLetterPage11Para1.Raisetheproblem问题1：___________________________________________问题2：___________________________________________Para2.Adviceonhowtodealwithpressure.建议1：___________________________________________建议2：___________________________________________建议3：___________________________________________Para3.Wishes___________________________________________havesomesleepingproblemshaveabadhealthItisimportanttocombinestudywithplay.Istronglyadviseyoutokeepabalanceddiet.Itshouldbeagreatideatodoproperoutdooractivities.Isincerelyhopemysuggestionwillhelpyou.别忘了连接词：Firstly,….Secondly,….Inconclusion,….Page12参考范文：DearTony,Iamsorrytoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceonstudypressure.Youhavesomesleepingproblemsandabadhealth,whichhaveabadeffectonyourstudy.Hereismyadvice.Firstly,itisimportanttocombinestudywithplay.Secondly,Istronglyadviseyoutokeepabalanceddiet.Themorehealthyfoodyoueat,thebetteryourhealthyouwillhave.Finally,itshouldbeagreatideatodoproperoutdooractivities.Iamsureyouwillimproveyourproblemsifyouacceptmyadvice.Inconclusion,Ihopemysuggestionswillhelpyou.Wishyoueverysuccesswithyourstudy.Yours,LiHuaPage13Thankyou!