How to better my English writing(公开课)

HowtobettermyEnglishwriting美文欣赏及提高技巧训练美文标准：Standardsofafinecomposition1.书写卷面精美2.审题立意精准3.谋篇布局精细4.遣词造句精确5.行文流畅自然I.Usefulsentencepatterns.第一段段落任务：引出话题，亮明观点Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat…It’sbeyondtheargumentthat…Asisknowntoall,…isofgreatimportancein…Asisuniversallyacknowledged,…Itiscommonlybelievedthat…Itisacommonbeliefthat…众说周知……Opinionson…varyfrompersontopersonInmyopinion,…Frommyperspective,…1)Asapopularsayinggoes\Asafomousproverbsays\Asisknowntoall,“Amanisknownbythecompanyhekeeps.”(观其交友,知其为人)2)Itgoeswithoutsayingthatconstantdroppingwearsthestone.(滴水不绝可穿石)•第二段段落任务：引用事例，证明观点•引出事例的句子•Takemeasanexample\forexample.•Itwasnotuntil…thatIrealizedtheimportanceof…•(Icanwellandtrulyremember)therewasatimewhen…•Whenitcomesto…•Itremindsmeofmystory.•Herecomesa/mystoryworthmentioning,•第三段段落任务:得出结论，强调观点•(结尾1)Fromthestorymentionedabove\Basedonmyexperience,wecansafelydrawaconclusionthat…istouswhat…isto….Therefore,nevershallweignoretheimportanceof….•(结尾2)Inanutshell/Inconclusion,thereisnodenyingthefactthatwecan’tattachtoomuchimportanceto…\itishightimewedidsth..Onlyby…canwelivealifefullofcolorandmeaning.（一）第一段：众所周知，父母是孩子的第一任老师。1.（1）____________________,parentsserveasthefirstteachersoftheirchildren.(2)________________________isthatparentsserveasthefirstteachersoftheirchildren.(3)________________________thatparentsserveasthefirstteachersoftheirchildren..(know\acknowledge\accept\recognize\believe)2._______________________itisself-disciplinethatmakesitpossibleforustoachievesomethinggreat.(go\doubt)不言而喻\毫无疑问，正是自律让我们可能实现一些伟大的事情。AsisknowntoallWhatisknowntoallItisknowntoallItgoeswithoutsayingthat/Thereisnodoubtthat3.Thereisasayingthatgoes\asasayinggoes\Theregoesasayingthat,“hewholaughslast,laughsbest.”俗话说，谁笑到最后谁笑的最好。（there\as）4.(1)Never_______________denythesignificantroleearlypreparationplaysinourlife.(afford)•我们如何也不能否认及时准备在生活中的重要角色。(2)Bynomeans\______________canweignorethefactthateffortsarewhatittakestoachieveyourgoals.(way\case\occasion\circumstance…)在任何情况下我们都不能忽视实现目标所需要的是努力的这个事实。canweaffordto(3)ThedevelopmentofsocietyhasmadeitnecessaryforustohaveagoodcommandofEnglish,______________.(emphasize)社会的发展使我们很必要精通英语英语，它的重要性我们再怎么强调都不为过。5.(1)________________________________bringupchildreninagentlewaycanbeofmorebenefitcomparedwithtreatingthemseverely.(exaggeration)毫不夸张的说，用一种温和和方式抚养孩子比严厉的对待他们更受益。(2)________________________developinggoodhabitsisboundtoleadyoutosuccess.(convince)我坚信，养成好习惯一定能指引你通向成功。(3)_________________,equippedwithconfidence,wecanovercomealltheproblemsandchallenges.(perspective\view\opinion\concern)依我看来,只要有信心，我们就能克服所有的困难和挑战。III:第二段表达事例的技巧事例选择精准切题，有说服力；事例需语义完整，讲故事最好遵循起---承---转----合，即故事开端----发展---高潮（即转变）---结局。故事不要为了句式套句式而失去语言的流畅与美感.注重衔接流畅。总起句（如果必要的话）1.Yearsofschoollifehastaughtmealotofthings,__________________.(teamwork)多年的学校生活教会我很多东西，其中合作对我来说最重要。2.Thereisanexampleofmine_________________.（worth）我有一个值得一提的故事3.Herecomesastory________________________.(involve)这有一个关于我的故事。4.Whenitcomestofamilyeducation,whatIhaveexperienced__________________.(flash\crowd)当谈到家庭教育，我所经历的事闪过\涌入脑海。（三）第三段：照应主题，用2-3句话完美收笔。1．__________________________________________,weshouldbuildupconfidenceifwewanttomakeadifference,whichisofvitalsignificanceifwewanttoovercomeanyobstacleandfinallyachieve.总之\简言之，如果我们想要有所成就就应该构建自信，这对克服困难和最终取得成功来说意义重大。2.________________________,whatwearemoresureaboutisthatgoodhabitsreallymakeadifference.(confirm)从以上证实的，我们能够更确定的是好习惯真的意义重大。3.Itisearlypreparation__________________todealwithvarioustoughsituationsaheadofus.(enable)正是及早准备让我们能够处理前方棘手的情况。4.Onlywhenwegetwellprepared_____________________________.(wave)只有我们准备好了，光明的未来才会向我们招手。II.Practicalskillstobetterourwriting.提高表达技巧在遣词造句（1）用高级词汇代替一般词汇。Eg:1.Itisindeedagoodidea。1.know---_________________2.wantto____3.see---______________4.can’t---_________________5.disappointsb--______________6.like--________________7.Ithinkofagoodidea____________________8.ignorehealth______________________9.happen--_______________10.ignore--___________________11.delay--______________12.fulfillone’sexpectation_________________13.master_______________________词汇表达技巧•1.know---beawareof2.want---beeagerto\longto\bedyingto…3.see---catchsightof4.can’t---failto•5.disappontsb---failsb\letsbdown•6.like---befondof\beinterestedin\becrazyabout\bekeenon•7.Ithoughtofagoodidea---Agoodideaoccurredtome\struckme\hitme\flashedacrossmymind\crowdedintomymind•8.ignorehealth---turnablindeyetohealth•9.happen---takeplace\occur\comeabout•10.ignore---同8,turnadeafearto\11.delay---putoff•12.fulfillone’sexpectation----liveuptoone’sexpectation13.master---haveagoodcommand\getthehangof…（2）合理，多样化地使用高级句式结构。1.Whatdisappointeduswasthathedidn’tturnup.(主语从句、表语从句)2.Followingteacher’sadvice,Igraduallysteppedoutoftheshadow.(非谓语动词)3.Difficultasitwas,wemadeeveryendeavortomeetthedeadline.(倒装句4.Itishumorthathelpsuschangetheembarrassingsituationandwinrespectbackinagentleway.(强调句)5.Hadhenotgivenahandtome,Icouldnothaveeasedmypressure.(虚拟语气)6.Themorehespoke,themoreexcitedhefelt.7.Holdonandyou’llmakeadifference.8.Ihadnochoicebuttoturnadeafeartohisword.9.Exerciseistothebodywhat