英语雅思大作文

IELTS大作文写作手法IDA目录HowareTask2answersassessed?Waystodevelopaparagraph（论证方法）雅思议论文论证结构大作文分类ExaminersassesstheanswersaccordingtothesecriteriaTaskResponse(i.e.howfullyandappropriatelythecandidatehasansweredallpartsofthetask;theextenttowhichthecandidate'sideasarerelevant,developedandsupported;theextenttowhichthecandidate'spositionisclearandeffective)ExaminersassesstheanswersaccordingtothesecriteriaCoherence连贯性andCohesion衔接(i.e.howwelltheinformationandideasareorganisedandpresentedi.e.paragraphing;howwelltheinformationislinked)ExaminersassesstheanswersaccordingtothesecriteriaLexicalResource词汇资源(i.e.therangeofvocabularyused,howaccuratelyitisusedandhowappropriateitisforthetask)ExaminersassesstheanswersaccordingtothesecriteriaGrammaticalRangeandAccuracy(i.e.therangeofstructuresused,howaccuratelytheyareusedandhowappropriatetheyareforthetask)段落的组织•250字，4段至5段话，4段更容易操作•第一段：2至4句•第二段：4至6句•第三段：4至6句•第四段：2至4句•Introduction:stateyourview•Body:supportyourviewwithreasons,arguments,examples•Conclusion:restateyourview•主体段落：Topicsentence+supportingsentencesArgumentativedevices---Waystodevelopaparagraph（论证方法）•exemplification（举例说明），•explanation（解释说明），•causeandeffect（因果论证），•comparisonandcontrast（比较与对比）•concessionandrefutation（让步与反驳），•classification（分类）Exemplification•Example:aspecificfact,idea,person,orthingthatisusedtoexplainorsupportageneralidea,ortoshowwhatistypicalofalargergroup•举例相关关联词：•Forexample•Forinstance•Take(Consider)…asanexample•Acaseinpoint•suchas•includingSomepeoplethinkthatanimalsshouldbetreatedasfriends.Yetothersonlyconsideranimalsassourcesoffoodandclothing.Towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?•SampleAnswer•Thereisagrowingtendencynowadaysforsomepeopletotreatanimalsaslivingmeatandwalkingfur.Thisleadstothecruelslaughterofanimalsallovertheworldeveryyear.Yet,inmyopinion,insteadofkillinganimals,humanbeingsshouldtreatthemastheirfriends.•Itisanundeniablefactthatanimalsplayavitalroleinmaintainingthesubtlebalanceoftheearth'secologicalsystem.Thelackofthisessentialpartwillbringaboutthedestructionofthewholeworld.Therefore,tosomeextent,killinganimalsisequaltodiggingourowngraves.•Forthousandsofyears,manyanimalshavegivenloyalservicetohumans.Pigeonsconveymessagesinwartime,anddogshelptodetectcrime.Evenpigs,whichmanypeoplethinkarethemoststupidanimals,areusedinthebattleagainstdrugs.Thereisnodoubtthatourliveswouldbefarlessconvenientwithoutalittlehelpfromouranimalfriends.•Animalsalsohelphumansinaspiritualway.Thereisnothingbetterthankeepingacatoradogifyouwantyourkidstobemoreindependentandresponsible.Itisalsonotedthatseniorcitizenslivelongeriftheykeeppetsaftertheirretirement.•Tosumup,animalsarehumanbeings'friends.Thosewhoregardanimalsasmerelyasourceoffoodandclothingshouldatleastbearonethinginmind:Beingkindtoanimalsisbeingkindtoourselves.Therefore,forourownfuturebenefit,pleasetreatanimalswithloveandcare.•Topicsentence:•Agrowingnumberofenvironmentalproblemsarenolongerconfinedtoacertainregionorcountry.•Forexample,oilspillscanpolluteinternationalwatersandthelossoftheozonelayermayleadtothemeltingoficecapsandglaciers,whichinturn,mayraisesealevelsworldwide.练习•Topicsentence:•TheadvertisementsonTV,newspaperandotherkindsofmediamayconfuseconsumersandmakethemrushtopurchaseproductswhichtheydon’treallyneed.•Takethecellphoneforexample.Itsfunctionsandpracticaluseareoftenexaggeratedinadvertisements.What’smore,theadvertisementsevencreateafashionableatmosphereforcellphoneswhichappealstoyoungpeopletochangetheirphonescontinuouslywhileignoringthebasicserviceofcellphonesisjusttomakeaphonecall.Explanation•解释：•Itmeans•Thatistosay•Inotherwords•Toputitanotherway•BythatImean•Ibelievethetraditionalfamily,withbothparentsprovidingemotionalsupportandrole-modelsfortheirchildren,isthemostsatisfactorywayofbringingupchildren.•Educationafterbirthplaysasignificantroleinone’sdevelopment.Education,whichhelpschildrendeveloptheirthinkingandaccumulatetheirknowledge,isadecidingfactorofone’ssuccess.Forexample,ahigh-schoollevelpersoncommonlymaynotsucceedtotheextentofapersonwhohasreceivedauniversityeducation.Thisisnotonlybecauseofthegreaterbreadthofknowledgeacquired,butalsoduetoamorecriticalandfocusedwayofthinkingthatisimpartedandrefinedduringonessenioreducation.•Ithinkanabilitytokeepclearperspectivesinlifeisamoreessentialfactorinachievinghappiness.BythatImeananabilitytohaveaclearsenseofwhatisimportantinourlives(thewelfareofourfamilies,thequalityofourrelationships,makingotherpeoplehappy,etc.)andwhatisnot(aproblematwork,gettingannoyedabouttrivialthings,etc.)CauseandEffect•Cause:•becauseof•asaresultof•dueto•thanksto•owingto•because•as•since•for•Result:•asaresult•asaconsequence•accordingly•inthisway•thus•hence•so•therefore练习•妇女不应该当兵，因为她们的体力不如男子。•Womenshouldbejoininthearmy•Womenshouldnotbeamemberofthearmy•Womenshouldnottakeupamilitarycareer•becausetheyarenotasstrongasmen•becausetheyareinferiortomeninphysicalstrength•becauseoftheirphysicalinadequaciesInmanycountriesschoolshavesevereproblemswithstudentbehavior.Whatdoyouthinkarethecausesofthis?Whatsolutionscanyousuggest?•范文：•Poorstudentbehavior