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英语作文的写作技巧之看图作文请根据图画和所给词语的提示,叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。然后,再根据此故事内容,发表你自己的感想(自拟),不得少于三点想法。开头已给出。Oneday,XiaoMingsawalittlegirlfallover.______________________________________一、描写图片,说明所发生的事左边一幅图1.女孩跌倒2.小明要帮她3.小明的母亲阻拦他说:“不要扶,否则人家会说是你把她碰倒的。”如何变图片为文字左边一幅图1.Oneday,XiaoMingsawalittlegirlfallover.(试题中已给出)2.XiaoMingwantedtohelpthegirlup.3.Hismotherstoppedhimandsaid,“Don’tdothat,otherwiseotherswillthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherdown.”右边一幅图1.有一天,小明母亲看到倒在地上的瓶子2.小明说:“我扶了,你会说是我碰倒的”右边一幅图1.Anotherday,themothersawthefallenoilbottleontheground.2.XiaoMingsaidtohismother,(注意小明的话要用虚拟语气)“IfIhadstraightenedthebottleup,youwouldhavethoughtthatIdidit.”二、谈感想1.我对小明母亲在上述图中所述故事中的做法看法:不同意2.我想:①父母应该为孩子树立好榜样②父母不仅要关心孩子的身体,还要关心他们的思想③父母应该让孩子知道帮助处在困难中的人是一件快乐的事。因为我们生活在社会这个大家庭中。1.Idisagreewithwhatthemotherdidinthestory.2.①Ithinkparentsshouldsetagoodexampletotheirchildren.②Theyshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildren’shealth,buttheirminds.③Theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowitisapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble.Becauseweliveinthesocietywhichisabigfamilyforallofus.五、增加结尾句,整理成文Oneday,XiaoMingsawalittlegirlfallover.Hewantedtohelpthegirlup,buthismotherstoppedhimandsaid,“Don’tdothat,otherwiseotherswillthinkitwasyouwhoknockedherdown.”Anotherday,themotherwasshockedtoseeXiaoMingjustletthefallenoilbottlebe.sayingtohim,“Can’tyouseethefallenoil?Whycan’tyoustraightenitup?”butXiaoMingsaidtohismother,“IfIhadstraightenedthebottleup,youwouldhavethoughtthatIdidit.”Idisagreewithwhatthemotherdidinthestory.Ithinkparentsshouldsetagoodexampletotheirchildren.Theyshouldnotonlycarefortheirchildren’shealth,buttheirminds.Theyshouldlettheirchildrenknowitisapleasuretohelpotherswhoareintrouble.Weliveinthesocietywhichisabigfamilyforallofus.Everyoneshoulddosomethinggoodtobuildupoursociety,right?例2.WriteanEnglishcompositioninover120wordsonthepictureandinstructionsgiven(2002上海高考题)1.描述图片whenachildislearningtoridebicycle,theparentsandgrandparentsaresweating,runningalongsidethebikeandaretryingtheirbesttoprotectthechildforfearthatsheshouldfallandhurtherself.Itcanbeseenfromthepicturethat…Accordingtotheabovepicture,wecanseethat…Inthepicture,wecanseethatInthispicturewecanseeagirllearningtorideabikewithherparentsandevengrand-parentsrunningaroundher,sweating.Obviously,theyintendtoprotectthechild,forfearthatshemightfalloffthegethurt.2.陈述此图片反映的社会现象Duetotheone-childpolicyinChina,mostfamilieshaveonlyonechildandthereforethischildisregardedasthetreasureofthewholefamily.Boththepaarentsandgrandparentsusuallyspoilthechildtoomuch.Asaresult,childrenbecomesodependentandincapablethattheymayfindithardtosurvivethefiercecompetitioninfuture.3.表明自己的观点和想法,提出建议Asthisphenomenahasbeenbecomingafiercesocialissue,Manymeasurescanbetakentopreventitgettingmoreandmoreserious。Astoparents,it’sbetterforthemtoprovideguidanceaswellasopportunitiesforkidstofallandfail,astheyarerecognizedasaninevitablewaytogrowup.Whileforthechildren,it’shightimethattheylearnedtosaynototheirparents’unnecessaryprotection.4.总结Inconclusion,thepathtosuccessisfilledwithvariouskindsofdifficultiesandobstacles.Onlywhenkidsdependonthemselvesratherthantheirparentscantheygetmatureandfaceeverythingwithconfidenceandcourageinthefuture.Formanychild,learningtobikecanbeafunexperience,butthisisnotthecaseswiththegirlinthepicture,whoobviouslyhasnofunatall.Forfearthatshemayfalloffthebike,herparentsareholdingthehandle,withhergrandmothergivingahardpushfrombehind.Thethreeadultsaredrippingwithsweatwhilethegitlissittingonthesaddlewonderingwhoactuallyislearningtobikeabike.Theyhavewithoutdoubtgonetoofarprotectingthegitl.Today'sparentsseemtobetooprotectiveoftheirchildren,whichcandeabarriertotheirgrowthanddevelopment.Rather,childrenshouldbeencouragedtolearntodothingsontheirown.Ofcourse,theyarelikelytorunintosetbacks,butitisthesesetbacksthatcanteachthemtobematureandindependent.Don't
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