高考英语作文图画作文指导

图画作文一、命题特点图画类作文实际上就是将漫画、照片或图片中的信息转化成作文。在写作的过程中，考生可根据情景图的寓意、内容或情节线索，传递信息和表达自己的思想，揭示图画的主题。作文应覆盖提示的要点，但要避免仅根据提示文字做简单翻译。图画类作文的图画包括组图、对比图、单张图三类。组图有点像连环画，一般由多幅图片构成，这类题通常要写记叙文（常用一般过去时）；对比图要求观察出两幅或三幅图之间的不同（常用一般现在时），并分析产生这种变化的原因；单张图通过生动的图画传递深刻的思想，需在描述图片的基础上发表感想或分析问题，这类题通常要写议论文（常用一般现在时）。二、写作步骤1.认真看图，确立主题。2.围绕主题，提炼要点。3.合理想象，补充要点。4.确定时态，写出要点。5.连句成篇，自然过渡。三、常用模板1.组图写作模板第一段：Thestorytookplace（时间和地点）.第二段：事件起因（要点一/图片一的内容）、事件发展（要点二、三……/图片二、三……的内容）、事件结局（最后一个要点/最后一张图片的内容）第三段：Fromthestory，Ifeel（自己的看法或感想）.假设你是图①中的男孩。请根据以下图画提供情节线索，以SharingHousework为题，用英文叙述你帮妈妈做家务的经过及感想。【解析】本文记叙“我”帮妈妈做家务的经过，叙述的是已经做过的事，因此用过去时。要点：1．见妈妈同时做几件事情，觉得妈妈太累，决定帮妈妈做一点家务活；2．在帮妈妈洗衣服时，“我”的朋友来叫我去踢球，“我”拒绝了；3．等把衣服洗完时，“我”累得满头大汗；4．妈妈见“我”把衣服洗好了，夸“我”是个好孩子，“我”感到非常高兴。OnedaywhenIwasabouttoplayfootball,IsawMotherwastakingalotofdirtyclothestowashandabuckettocarrywater.IthoughtMotherwasverytired,soIdecidedtohelpherwashclothes.WhileIwasdoingthewashing,LiMingcameandaskedmetoplayfootballwithhim.IrefusedhimandtoldhimthatIwouldhelpMotherfinishthehouseworkfirst.WhenIgotthehouseworkdone,IwassotiredthatIwassweatingallover.WhenMothercamebackhome,shefoundIhadwashedallthedirtyclothesandsaidthatIwasagoodchild.Ifeltveryhappy.三、常用模板2.对比图写作模板GreatChangeshavetakeplace（地点）since（时间）.Inthepast（描述过去的情景，图一）.Butnow（描述现在的情景，图二）.Therearemanyreasonsforthegreatchanges.First，（变化的第一个理由）.Second，（变化的第二个理由）.Lastbutnotleast，（变化的最后一个理由）.Ithink（自己的感想）.假设你是一位生活在某城市的中学生，暑假打算去乡村度假。请根据下面两幅图提供的信息，写一篇短文。简要说明城市生活的不足，重点说明你去乡村度假的原因。【解析】此书面表达有图画兼文字提示，因此考生在动笔前先要审阅提示。如：文章的体裁为说明文，说明要去乡村度假的原因。人称：第一人称。时态：以将来时和一般现在时为主。写作要点：1．“我”要去乡下度假的打算。2．城市化所存在的问题(拥挤、嗓音、空气污染)。3．乡下的环境(空气、山、水、树木、鸟儿等)。Onepossibleversion:Iwillspendthissummerholidayinthecountryside.Althoughthecityismodernandconvenient,therearestillsomeproblems,suchasairpollution,crowdednessandnoise.InthecountrysideIcanenjoyacomfortableandquietlife.There,theairisfreshandthewaterisclean,treesaregreenandbirdsaresinging.Icanalsogoboating,fishingandswimminginthelake.What'smore,Icanclimbthehills.Allthiswillbeinterestingandgoodformyhealth.Aboveall,Icanlearnmoreaboutnature.SoIwanttogotothecountrysideforachange.I'mlookingforwardtothecomingofmysummerholiday.三、常用模板3.单张图写作模板Ascanbeseeninthepicture，（图画内容）.Thepicturetellsus（概括图片大意）.Theimpliedmeaningofthispictureshouldbetakenintoconsiderationseriously.Tobeginwith，（揭示涵义/原因/结果之一）.Second，（揭示涵义/原因/结果之二）.Inmyopinion，weshouldtakesomemeasurestodealwiththeproblem.First，weshould（具体措施之一）.Second，wemust（具体措施之二）.Onlyinthiswaycanwesolvetheproblemof（图画内容）.简要描述上面图片，并谈谈你对学生在业余时间参加过多的补习和培训的看法。【解析】这是一个识图题，体裁为议论文。说明自己的观点看法。1．本文要求用第一人称。2．时态：一般现在时。3．写作要点：①业余时间，学生补习太多，没有自己的时间。②表达自己的观点：学生应有自己的时间。③理由。WeWanttoHaveOurOwnTimeAsisvividlyshowninthepicture,todaystudentshavetospendsomuchoftheirsparetimetakingvariouslessonsthattheyhavenotimeforthemselves.Theimpliedmeaningofthispictureshouldbetakenintoconsiderationseriously.Asforme,Ithinkyoungstudentsshouldhavemoretimetodevelopthemselves.First,studentsshouldhavesometimetorelaxandplay.Thisdoesn'tmeanthattheywillwastetime.Wecanalsostudyandlearnfromtheplay.Afterdoingthehomeworkforalongtime,itisnecessarytohavesometimetorelax.NoplayandnogamesmakesJackadullboy.Wedon'twanttobedullboys.Wewanttobegoodstudentsinmanyways.Second,wecanhaveourowntimeinordertomakeourbodystrongenough,thiscanbehelpfulinourfurtherstudy.Afterall,Iwanttosay,studentsshouldhavetheirowntimetodevelopthemselves.writing第一段：描述图画中的信息和表达的含义。不应发表太多议论1、Asisvividlyshowninthepicture(s)/drawing(s)/table(s)/chart/pie/graphabove,+图画的内容。Thepicturepicture/drawing/tableabovetellsusthat+这个图片的大致反映的意思。2、Recentyearspeoplein地名havewitnessedthefactthat描述图片里的现象.Itisverycommon/usualtoseethatinrecentyears---.第一段描述方法：首句总体描述图画、点出人物、动作和环境次句挖掘细节词、将图中细节一网打尽末句点出文字说明或象征寓意。第一段的写作套路：Whatacompelling(令人激动的、极为有趣的)andthought-provokingdrawingitis!Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,----.Whatimpressesmemostisthat/themoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthat---.Simpleastheimageis,theimplicationsmirroredareapparentlyfar-reaching.Thecartoonsubtlyandsymbolicallydepictsathought-provokingphenomenoninwhich---.Furtherexaminationrevealsthat---.However,aquickglanceat---revealsironicallythat---.有关图画的名词：sketch素描、草图；drawing、cartoon漫画、diagram图表、图样；picture\painting着色的图画；portrait肖像描绘图画的形容词：thought-provoking发人深省的；enlightening有启迪作用，使人感悟的；profound含义深刻；instructive有益的；amusing;ridiculous;impressive印象深刻的；exaggerative夸张的；修饰动词的形容词：graphically/vividly生动地；symbolically象征性地；clearly/explicitly清晰地；subtly巧妙地Asisvividlydepictedinthecartoonabove,描述图画Whatisclearlyillustrated/presented/describedinthedrawingaboveisthatThecartoondepictsavividsceneinwhich+描写图画Itisvividlyillustrated/demonstratedinthepicturethat描述图画Whatimpressesmemostisthat+图画重点信息ThemoststrikingfeatureofthedrawingisthatWhatmakesthedrawingstrikingisthefactthat有关寓意的句式：Oddandfunny(i.e.adj.)asitseems/looks,suchhappenings/practices/phenomena/stories/cases/eventsaresowidespreadthatwecan’taffordtoignore/disregard/overlook/paynoattentiontothem.Uncomplicatedasthepictureis,thesymbolicmeaningisasdeepasocean/impliedmeaningi