初二英语写作(教学课件)

初三英语在线课程上课老师：蔡老师上课时间：18：45-19：45初三英语寒假课程第二讲：作文写作精讲作文写作的字、词、句、段、篇•字：工整、清楚；•词：不拼写错误；能适当掌握高级词汇；•句：不出现语法错误；句子要逐渐使用复杂的从句句型，为文章添彩；•段：段落内容有逻辑性；•篇：合理安排文章布局；要有逻辑与联接；绝对好用的替换词•Good–wonderful,excellent,gorgeous,fabulous,amazing,magnificent;•Important–significant,essential,necessary,carryalotofweight;•But—However,•So—therefore,hence,•Primarily,Firstly,oneofthemostessentialreasons,tostressfirst•Secondly,abovefromthefirstpoint,Inaddition•Thirdly,Lastbutnoleast,•Inconclusion,tomakeaconclusion,tosummarize…举例•Forexample—•Forinstance,•totake….asanexample,•tostateafactasanvividexample,经典句型：1、It’ssaidthat…2、Nomatterwhat/which/who/where/when/whose+从句3、Itis/was+被强调部分+that(who)+剩余部分•4、Ithappened(chanced)that+从句=sb.Happened/chancedtodosth.=sb.didsthbychance•5、由as引导的非限制性定句从句/由where,when引导的定语从句6、It+谓语+时间段+before+主语+谓语(before引导的是时间状语从句）7、When/Solongas/Aslongas/Once+从句，+主句（从句也可放在主句之后）•8、Nosooner+had+主语+done…than+主语+did•9、倍数表达句型•倍数+morethan,倍数+asmuchas..•10、形容词、副词、名词+as/though+主语+谓语+主句句式多变化•要抓住英语高考作文得高分的”关键点”,就需要把好增加句子复杂性和使用高级词汇这两道关。•（1）句式要有变化。改变句子的开头方式，不要一味地以主语开头，接着是谓语，宾语，最后再加一个状语。可以把状语放在句首，或用分词作状语等。•[原文]Wemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogetherearlyinthemorning.•[修正]Earlyinthemorningwemetattheschoolgateandwenttheretogether.•[原文]Theyoungmancouldn’thelpcryingwhenheheardthebadnews.•[修正]Hearingthebadnews,theyoungmancouldn’thelpcrying.•(2)在整篇文章中，避免只使用一两个句式，要灵活运用诸如到装句、强调句、主从复合句、分词状语从句等。•①强调句•[原文]MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.Ithadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.•[修正]MyparentspraisedAhFuwarmly.ItwasourbraveAhFuwhohadsavedmylittlesisterbravely.•②由what等引导的从句，此处的what相当于中文中的“所……”，有很强的概括，如：•[原文]Wehadtostandheretocatchoffender.•[修正]Whatwehadtodowas(to)standthere,tryingtocatchtheoffender.③由with或without引导的短语。如：Hesatinachairwithanewspaperinthehand.④分词短语．如：Satisfiedwiththeresult,hedicidedtogoonwithanewexperiment.•⑤倒装句•Onlyinthiswaycanweachieveourgoal.•NeverbeforehaveIseensuchawonderfulfilm.•⑥省略句•Ifso,victorywillbeours.•Youcanmakesomechangeswherevernecessary.•⑦对比，这在中文中也是常使用的方法．如•Failureisnotacrime,butfailuretolearnfromfailureis.•WhenIplay,Ifeelexcited,andafteritIfeelrelaxed.•(3)通过分句和合句，增强句子的连贯性和表现力。•[原文]Hestoppedusanhourago.Hemadeuscatchthenextoffender.•[修正]Hestoppedusanhouragoandmadeuscatchthenextoffender.•[原文]Wehadashortrest.Thenwebegantoplayhappily.Wesanganddanced.Sometoldstories.Someplayedchess.•[修正]Afterashortrest,wehadgreatfunsinginganddancing,tellingjokesandplayingchess.2007年上海市中考写作题：•Writeatleast60wordsonthetopic“AStoryaboutMyParent(s)”.•(以“爸爸/妈妈的故事”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。)•（注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。）我的父亲母亲•先中文构思•尽量避免复杂的词句•将中文翻译成英文•加入适当的连词，组成文章•注意全文用过去式写作关于职业的单词•scientist科学家•detective侦探•fisherman渔夫•firefighter消防员•journalist新闻记者•lawyer律师•barber理发师•singer歌手•engineer工程师•worker工人•painter画家•writer/author作家•businessman商人•pilot飞行员•dentist牙医•nurse护士•accountant会计•waiter/waitess服务员•librarian图书管理员•surgeon外科医生•pharmacist药剂师•anesthetist麻醉师•manager经理•governor政府官员•President总统•policeman警察•policewoman女警察•waiter服务员•waitress女服务员•driver司机，驾驶员真题举例•1）AStoryaboutMyParent;•2)Inmum’sfamily,thereweresevenpeople:mum’sparents,mum’stwobrothersandtwosistersandmum.Whenmumwasyoung,herfatherwasadoctorinthesmallvillageandhermotherwasjustaworker;•3)Atthattime,forlackofTVandcomputer,everydayafterschoolmumalongwithherbrothersandsisterswouldgohometohelptheirmotherwiththehousework.Forexample,theyhelpedtomakesupperorwashclothes.Mumtoldmethatthoughthelifeatthattimewasveryhard,shefelthappy.•Mymumwasborninasmallvillage.Inherfamily,thereweresevenpeople:mum’sparents,mum’stwobrothersandtwosistersandmum.Whenmumwasyoung,herfatherwasadoctorinthesmallvillageandhermotherwasjustaworker.•Atthattime,forlackofTVandcomputer,everydayafterschoolmumalongwithherbrothersandsisterswouldgohometohelpedtheirmotherwiththehousework.Forexample,theyhelptomakesupperorwashclothes.Mumtoldmethatthoughthelifeatthattimewasveryhard,shefelthappy.比较型作文写作•常用词组:•PreferAtoB•IshowmystrongpreferencetoA.•ComparedwithA,IshedmorelightonB.•IncomparisonwithA,IfindthatBismore..文章层次•1、开启段落，指出自己的选择结果。•2、列出原因，将一些可比项进行比较。横向与纵向。•3、总结开启段落•Infacingthehighschoolentranceexamination,wehavetomakechoicesaboutwhichschooltoattend.Betweenthetwochoices,Iwillchoose…..Thereasonforthatisareasfollowing.学会对比•南方大学:学费8000/年招生20人无优惠政策•北方大学:学费5000/年招生10人加20分优惠•选择南方：1、虽然学费贵，但是招生人数比北方的多；2、自己是南方人，适合南方的生活，离家近。•选择北方：1、学费便宜；2、有加分政策；3、可以体验不同的学习生活，学会独立。如何转折•ThoughthetuitionishigherinthesouthernUniversity,yetIpreferthewaysoflivinghereinthesouth.•TheNorthernUniversityoffersanadditional20scores.However,IstillhaveastronginclinationtotheSouthernUniversity.如何结尾•Concerningthereasonsabove,Iwouldnothesitatetochoose….•Inconclusion,concerningtheconvenience,thetuitionandtheotherreasons,Iwillchoose..•Inall,toconclude,toputallthereasontogether,上海2002年的中考英语作文•根据英文提示，以“我的心爱之物”为题写话，不少于50个词。内容必须包括英文提示中的3项要求，标点符号不占格：•题目：MyFavoriteThing(s)•Whatthething(s)is(are)•Whenand/orwhere,andhowyougotif(them)•Whyyoulikeit(them)andwhyitis(theyare)specialtoyouMyFavoriteThing•Ihavemanysmallthingsinmyhomesuchasstamps,toys.Butamongthosethings,myfavoritethingisagreenwatch.Itisadigitalwatchwithaduckon