高考英语书面表达写作技巧训练公开课课件(共27张)(1)

FiveSkillsJingle五字口诀一二三四五KeepANeatAnswerSheet个被动句/形式主语It句型；个非谓语；个从句句子；个连词；个高级短语+句型Welcometomyclass.Firstofall,let’shavefuntogether.1.heartflowerangryopen2.Onecarcomeonecargo,twocarspengpeng,peopledied.3.Ifyouwantmoney,Ihaveno;ifyouwantlife,Ihaveone!那些中式英文表达假定你是李华，正在一所英国学校学习暑期课程，遇到一些困难，希望得到学校辅导中心(LearningCenter)的帮助。根据学校规定，你需书面预约，请按下列要点写一封信：1．本人简介；2．求助内容：3．约定时间；4．你的联系方式(Email：[e-mail]；Phone：[phone])。注意：1．词数100左右：2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯：3．结束语已为你写好。SampleArticle1.Readthecompositions,andthentellmewhichonedoyouthinkwritesmuchbetter.2.Giveatleasttworeasons.3.Underlinethewell-writtensentencesandcirclesomegoodtransitionalwords.(3minutes)DearSir,Howareyougettingalong?I’mLiHua,astudentfromChinawhoistakingsummercoursesinyouruniversity.Now,IhavemetsomuchtroublethatIhavetoturntotheLearningCenterforhelp.Yourpreciousadvicewillbehighlyappreciated.Asyouknow,peoplewhoisfarawayfromhomeoftenfeelhomesick,sodoI.IthinkthereasonwhyImisshomeisthatIamsolonelyandlackfriendshere.Besides,it’sdifficultformetoadapttotheforeigncultureandfoodhere.EvenIcan’ttakecareofmyselfindailylife.Idon’tknowwhatIshoulddothefollowingdays.What’smore,nomatterhowgreateffortsImake,IfinditnoteasytounderstandthelessonsgiveninEnglish,becausemyEnglishissopoor.Couldyoupleasetellmehowtodealwiththeproblemsmentionedaboveandmakemylearningeasier.Ifit’sconvenientforyou,canImakeanappointmentonnextFridayafternoonintheCenter?[e-mail],MarkingStandard(评分标准):第五档(21-25分)：完全完成了试题规定的任务，完全达到了预期的写作目的1.覆盖所有内容要点。2.应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。3.语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。4.有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）连接词语言地道，规范FiveSkillsJingle五字口诀一二三四五KeepANeatAnswerSheet个被动句/形式主语It句型；个非谓语；个从句句子；个连词；个高级短语+句型SkillⅠTheVarietyoftheSubject主语多样性HowtoimproveourEnglish?①First,weshouldreadmoremagazinesandnewspaperseveryday.②Secondly,wecanwatchsomeEnglish-speakingTVprogramsandmovies.③Thirdly,wecanmakemoreforeignfriends.①MoreEnglishmagazinesandnewspapersshouldbereadtohelpusformthehabitofthinkinginEnglish.1.主动不如被动妙2.句型：Itisnecessary/important/useless/amust/agoodway…forustodo…②ItisagoodwayforustowatchsomeEnglish-speakingTVprogramsandmovies,whichcanbroadenourhorizons.②Secondly,wecanwatchsomeEnglish-speakingTVprogramsandmovies.3.非谓语v-ing③Thirdly,wecanmakemoreforeignfriends.③Makingmoreforeignfriendsisalsohelpful,whocanassistustopractiseourspokenEnglishandletusknowwhatwecannotlearninourclass.SkillⅡNonfiniteVerbs非谓语Openingblogscanhelpusreleaseourstudystress.Tosolvetheproblem,somemeasuresshouldbetaken.SkillⅢThreeClauses三大从句1.NounClause名词性从句Idon’tknowhowIcanimprovemyEnglish.2.AttributiveClause定语从句Blogsprovideusagoodstagewherewecanshowourtalentsandfeelings.3.AdverbialClause状语从句Ifwintercomes,willspringbefarbehind?Ifchancescome,willsuccessbefaraway?Nomatterhowdifficultitis,Iwilltrymybesttoovercomeit.SkillⅣTransitionalWordsandPhrases连词What’smore/Besides/What’sworse1.Eatingsugarisbadforourteeth._____________________________,itmaymakeusfat.2._______canreadingenrichourmind,________broadenourhorizons.NotonlybutalsoSkillⅤOutstandingPhrasesandSentencePatterns高级短语及句型1.Itishightimethatwetooksomemeasurestosolvetheproblem.2.Theimportanceofreadingcanneverbetoostressed.3.Onlybytakingexercisecanwekeephealthy.4.Theharderyoustudy,themoreprogressyouwillmake.5.Readingistoourmindwhatexerciseistoourbody.Practice近几年，SARS、禽流感等疫情大肆流行，威胁着人类的健康。请你根据以下图片，以“Howcanwekeephealthy?”为题，为校英语报写一篇120字左右的短文，阐述青少年应该如何提高自身的免疫力，从而远离疾病保持健康。注意：开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词：增强免疫力strengthenimmunityP1.P2.P3.BrainStormingItishightimethat/forustodo;(keep)abalanced/healthydiet;provide/supplyenoughnutrientsto;enoughsleep/sleepingenough;bebeneficialto;it’snecessary/amustto;Sleepingistoourbodywhatgasistoanengine.takeexercise;keepfitandenergeticthemore…themore…only倒装句protect…fromHowcanwekeephealthy?Inrecentyears,somediseases,likeSARSandbirdflu,arethreateningourhumanbeingslife.Itishightimethatteenagersshouldstrengthentheirimmunesystem.Tohaveahealthylifestyleisofgreatimportance.Firstofall,abalancedhealthydietisamustforteenagers,whichprovidesthebodywithdifferentnutrientstobestrongerenoughtofightmanydiseases.Besides,sleepisnecessaryforourhealth.Asweknow,sleepingistoourbodywhatgasistoanengine.Itcanguaranteeussufficientenergytostudyhardnextday.Finally,tokeepfit,itisverynecessarytotakemoreexercise.Youknow,theimportanceofexercisecanneverbetoostressed.Weneedtodomorelikejoggingandrunning,whichcankeepusliveandenergetic.Nothingcouldbemoreimportantthanowingahealthybodyintheworld.Keepdoingthese,andyou’llbehealthierandhealthier.FiveSkillsJingle1.一个被动句/形式主语It句型；2.二个非谓语；3.三个从句句子；4.四个连词；5.五个高级短语+句型SummaryRomewasnotbuiltinaday,andpracticemakesperfect.