高考英语书面表达写作指导-漫画作文[课件]

高考英语书面表达写作指导之漫画作文(议论类)谋篇3parts:1)describethepicture2)interpretitsmeaning3)giveyouropinionsaboutthephenomenonPart1DescribethepictureThepictureistalkingabout/shows…Thepictureshowsacommonphenomenon.Thepicturedescribesaninterestingphenomenon.Inthepicture,thereare…/…is(are)doing…Thepictureaboveisabout……Let’slookatthepictureabove/first.Let’spractise!DescribethepictureThepictureistalkingaboutastoryaboutneighborhood.Twoladieslivingintheoppositeapartmentssay“hello”whentheyhappentomeeteachotherinthecorridor.Oneofthemsays,“Imovedhere5yearsago,butInevermetyoubefore.CouldIaskyournameplease?”Theothersays,”Ihavebeenherefor6years.HowshouldIcallyou?”Let’spractise!DescribethepictureWecanseeinthepicturethatachildisburdenedwithheavyschoolbagsaswellashugementalpressure.Whenhewasakid,hewasexpectedtobeabletogotoakeyelementaryschool,andlaterakeyhighschool.Andnowheisexpectedtobeadmittedtoakeyuniversity.Part2InterpretthepictureItseemsveryridiculousthat…However,thiskindofstoryisperformedeverywhere.Thepictureshowsthat…Itistheexactreflectionof…Thepictureindicatethatwe…Nowadays,itisacommonphenomenonthat…Thisisasatirical(讽刺的)cartoonwhichdescribesvividlyakindofcommonphenomenonamong…Let’spractise!Let’spractise!ThepictureshowssomeproblemsinthepresenteducationsysteminChina.Inthepoorcountryside,therearenobuildingsforclassrooms,letalonegoodteachers.Theyaresometimesforcedtoleavetheirstudiesbecausetheirfamiliescannotaffordthenecessaryfees.However,thesituationistotallydifferentinthecities.Almostallthechildreninthecitiescanhaveregulareducation.Buttheyhavetheirownproblems.Whattheyfaceistheendlesshomework,whichputssomuchpressureonthemthatsomestudentsdon’twanttocontinuetheirstudies.Part3GiveyouropinionsIthink/believethatAsfarasI’mconcerned,Inmyopinion,Frommypointofview,shouldItisbetter/advisableto…Iconsideritnecessary…Onlyinthiswaycan….2/3musthavetoDo/Don’t…Enjoythisexcellentending!Inmyview,thisphenomenonisnogoodtous,nortooursociety.It’stimethatwetooksomemeasurestoimproveit.Peoplelivinginthesamezonecanbeorganizedtohavesomeactivitiestogether.Weshouldcallonpeopletobefriendlytoeachother.Asapopularsongsays,“Ifeverybodygivesalittlelovetoeachother,theworldwillbecometheseaoflove.”Enjoythisexcellentending!Frommypointofview,reducingthechildren’sheavyburdenrequireseffortsfromtheschools,thesocietyaswellastheparents.Educationthatbreakstherulesofchildren’sdevelopmentinbodyandmindisboundtofail.Thus,parentstogetherwithteachersshouldbecomeactivesupportersofall-aroundcharactereducationandworkcloselywitheachotheringuidingthestudentstowardsabalanceddevelopment.Inmyopinion,spare-timetrainingcoursesareawasteoftimeformanystudents.Theymightdobetterwhentheyshowinterestinwhattheyarelearning.Pleasedon’tforcethesestudentstodowhattheyarenotwillingto,andwhenlearningisfun,surelytheywilldobetterthanweexpect!Enjoythisexcellentending!1.Touselinkingwords表示平行、对等或选择关系and,aswellas,togetherwith,notonly…butalso...表示转折关系but,however,inspiteof,although,otherwise,while表示对比关系onthecontrary,insteadof,ononehand…ontheotherhand...表示因果关系so,therefore,asaresult(of),because,owingto,dueto,thanksto.表示时间、顺序关系first,second…,then,next,finally,foronething...foranother,intheend,表示递进、强调关系besides,what’smore,inaddition,worsestill,aboveall表示解释、说明关系suchas,forexample,forinstance(例如),inotherwords,andsoon表示结论inshort,inbrief,inaword,ingeneral,onthewhole,inconclusion1.Touselinkingwords(五／三)2.TousecomplicatedstructuresPeoplesuggestthattheconferencebeputoff.Itissuggestedthattheconferencebeputoff.Shewalkedoutoftheroomandmanystudentsfollowedher.Followedbymanystudents,shewalkedoutoftheroomTohissurprise,thelittlegirlknewsomanythings.Whatsurprisedhimwasthatthelittlegirlknewsomanythings.被动语态非谓语动词从句Thecouplewassocuriousaboutwildplantsthattheydecidedtotraveltotheforest.倒装Socuriouswasthecoupleaboutwildplantsthattheydecidedtotraveltotheforest.Regularradiobroadcastsbeganin1920.强调句Itwasnotuntilin1920thatregularradiobroadcastsbegan.Manylivesweresavedbecausethereweretheeffortsoffirefighters.虚拟语气Butfortheeffortsoffirefighters,manyliveswouldnothavebeensaved.Neat!