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Learningaims:•Tolearnhowtosumupthemainideaofashortpassage;•Tolearnhowtodraftandpolishyourownwritings;•Tocorrectsomemistakesfromyourownwritings.Frame•Dividethepassageintoseveralparts•Part.1•Part.2•Part.3•Part.4para1Para2-3Para4-5para6Frame•Findoutthemainideaofeachpartwiththehelpofthekeywords.•Part.1(1)_____________________________•Part.2(2-3)_____________________________•Part.3(4-5)_____________________________•Part.4(6)_______________________________•GreenteaisregainingpopularityBecauseofitshealthbenefits,greenteaiswarmlywelcomedAllaroundtheworldAnditssalesarecurrentlysoaringHowever,greenteawasonceconsideredasdangerousandcausedsomepanicTherearesomeproblemswithteaButalltheseneverstoppeople’sloveforgreentea概要写作阅卷考虑点•对原文要点的理解和呈现情况•应用语法街都和词汇的准确性•上下文的连贯性•对各要点表达的独立性情况说明性(illustrative)短文,你就必须用概括的文字来说明某种现象。Youmaybeginlikethese:1.Itisstatedinthearticlethat…2.Accordingtothepassage,wecanknowthat…3.Inthepassage,theauthorstatesthat…4.Thepassagepointsoutthat…OneExample概要写作写作注意事项（2016考试说明）•1找关键词和主题句，准确理解、分析原文要点、归纳段落大意•2各要点间的表达要相对独立•3各要点间要有适当的衔接•4句型力求见到，每句话要表意明白、无空泛、笼统、含混词。•5尽量使用短句、慎用长难句•6多使用概括性词语、少用具体描述性词语（1）Summarizeincompleteidea（2）Misuse/misunderstandoriginalpassage（3）Toomanymistakesmadeinsentencestructures（4）Expressopinionstooearly（5）Applytheideasfromoriginalpassage（6）Toosimplesentences避免可能表达中可能会存在的问题：tipsAgifttoTomALettertoTom•假设你是Betty，对于你的礼物---真丝围巾，Tom一家很感谢，也很感兴趣，但他很想了解关于丝绸的情况。请写一封邮件给Tom，介绍一下丝绸知识（词数80左右)要点：1.历史2.特点、洗护3.询问对方其他需求GeneralAdvancedoriginateroot/stemfromcharacteristicuseconsideruseimportantfeatureserveas/functiontake…intoconsideration/accountmakeuseof/takeadvantageofbeofvital/greatimportance各种从句非谓语倒装句型with复合结构强调句型省略句型祈使句型虚拟语气巧用副词—不让句子裸奔•Obviously,mostofpeoplelacktheconsciousnessofpublicsafety.•Surprisingly,thefatalstampedeledto36deathsanddozensofinjuries.•Definitely,weshouldputoursecurityinthefirstplace.•Personally,aseriesofpreventionmeasuresmustbetakentoguaranteepublicorder.ASSESSMENTstructureIstheessaydividedintoparts?Doeseachparthaveatopicsentence?contentAreallthedetailsstated?Iseverythingtothepoint(切题)?LanguageDoesthewriteruseanylinkingwords?Arethereanymistakes?Isthereanyadvancedvocabulary（高级词汇）?Arethereanygoodsentencepatterns（句式）?PeerevaluationPolishyourfinaledition