M7-Unit2--Writing-想象性作文

[题目要求]根据以下内容，通过合理的想象，以“OurFutureLife”为题写一篇100词左右的英语短文，展望一下未来的科技生活。1．有些人可以到月球上度假。2．有些科学家能在海底生活。3．每家都有可视电话(videophone)，通过可视电话人们可以进行体检和购物。4．孩子们可以在家通过电视和广播接受教育。5．机器人为你做家务。第一步：细审题、三确定1．确定体裁：本文为__________作文；2．确定人称：本文的主要人称应为第____________人称；3．确定时态：描述将来要发生的事情，时态以__________为主。想象性一、三一般将来时第二步：依提纲、准翻译①：或许有些人会去月球上度假。______________________________________________②：有些科学家将在海底生活。_______________________________________________③：每家都有可视电话。_________________________________________________④：我们可以通过可视电话进行体检和购物。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Perhapssomepeoplewillgotothemoonforaholiday.Somescientistswillliveunderthesea.Wewillhavevideophonesineveryhome.Wecanhaveamedicalexaminationordosomeshoppingwithoutleavingourhomes.⑤：广播或电视上会有更多的教育节目。_______________________________________________________⑥：孩子可以在家学习而不是天天去上学。_______________________________________________________⑦：也许将来每个家庭都会有机器人。______________________________________________________⑧:它可以做它被告诉的一切，如购物、做家务等。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ttcandowhateveritistoldto,suchasshopping,houseworkandsoon.TherewillbemoreeducationalprogramsontheradioorTV.Childrenwillstudyathomeinsteadofgoingtoschooleveryday.Maybeinthefutureeachfamilywillhavearobot.第四步：句升级、求靓丽句式升级一：用连词and连接①②。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________句式升级二：用which引导定语从句把要③④连接起来，并修饰videophones__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Somepeoplewillgotothemoonfortheirholidays,andsomescientistswillliveunderthesea.We’llhavemorevideophonesinourhomebywhichwecanhaveamedicalexamordosomeshoppingwithoutleavingourhomes.句式升级三:以⑦为主句,然后用which引导的定语从句改写⑧。______________________________________________________________________________________________________________Maybeinthefutureeachfamilywillhavearobot,whichcandowhateveritistoldto,suchasshopping,houseworkandsoon.巧衔接、顺成文OurFutureLife__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Iamalwaysdreamingaboutlifeinthefuture.Whatonearthwillitbelike?Perhapssomepeoplewillgotothemoonforaholiday,andsomescientistswillliveunderthesea.Maybewewillhavevideo-phonesineveryhomebywhichwecanhaveamedicalexaminationordosomeshoppingwithoutleavingourhomes.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________I’msurethere’llbemoreeducationalprogramsontheradioorTV.Childrenwillstudyathomeinsteadofgoingtoschooleveryday.Nopeoplelikedoinghousework.Maybeinthefutureeachfamilywillhavearobot,whichcandowhateveritistoldto,suchasshopping,houseworkandsoon.Idobelievethedreamwillcometruesomeday.推荐模板LifeinthefutureWiththedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,ourlifeinthefuturewillsurelybecome________.Inthefuture,more________willappear,andpeoplewill________.Allinall,peoplewillleada________lifeinthefuture.Thelifeinthefuturewillalsobe________.More________willbeinvented,different________areusedto________asfastaspossible.________willreplace________becausetheyaremoreefficientandareacceptedbymorepeople.Inthefuturetherewillbeno________，andeveryonewillenjoyahappylife.Atthattimepeoplewillhavemoremeansof________.Forexample,________.ThisisthefuturelifethatIdreamof.增分佳句1．SometimesIdreamaboutlifeinthefuture.我有时梦想未来的生活。2．Maybeinthefuturewecantravelinspace.或许在将来我们能在太空旅行。3．Withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,ourlifeinthefuturewillsurelybecomemorecolorful.随着科学与技术的发展，在未来我们的生活一定会更加丰富多彩。4．Thereisapossibilitythathumanbeingswillliveonthemoon.人类有可能会生活在月球上。5．Iamcuriousaboutfuturelife.对未来的生活我充满了好奇。6．Inmyopinion,thedreamwillbecomeareality/cometrueoneday.我认为，终有一天梦想会成为现实。7．Whatwilllifebelikeinthefuture?未来的生活会是什么样的？8．Lifeinthefuturewillbemuchbetterthannow.未来的生活一定会比现在更美好。