2010高考英语二轮专题复习课件--高考作文写作指导

HowtoWriteaComposition?如何写好英语作文呢?一.写好句子1、句子要正确。2、句子要平行。3、句子要连贯。4、句子要有逻辑性。5、句子要避免过多重复。6、句子要避免头重脚轻。7、句子要避免汉式英语。二.写好段落三.用好过渡词四.写好开头和结尾作文:1.记叙文2.说明文3.议论文英语写作多数为指导性写作或称:半命题写作，也就是说，是先给一定的材料，然后让学生依据所给的材料按要求作文。方法：组写、缩写、扩写、改写、或看图作文等。一.写好句子1.句子要正确：1).DoyouknowwhereisthePeople’sPark?2).Therearemanyvisitorsenjoythedish.→Manyvisitorsenjoythedish.→Therearemanyvisitorswhoenjoythedish.→DoyouknowwherethePeople’sParkis?2.句子要平行Inmysparetime,Ienjoypopularmusicandcollectingstamps.→Inmysparetime,Ienjoylisteningtopopularmusicandcollectingstamps.3.句子要连贯Gointothepark.Goforward.Crossthestreet.Turnright.→Afteryouentertheparkbythemaingate,walkstraighttillyoucometoastream.Crossthestreamandturnright.4.句子要有逻辑性I’mveryinterestedincomputerandwonfirstprizelastyear.→Iwasveryinterestedincomputerandwonfirstprizelastyear.5.句子要避免过多重复.Youwillcontinuetowalk.You’llseeahill.Youwillgoaroundthehill.You’llgettoalake.→Afterwalkingforawhile,you’llcometoahill,walkroundtotheothersideofthehill.Thereyou’llseealake.6.句子要避免头重脚轻Chinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputerarethemainsubjects.→ThemainsubjectsareChinese,maths,English,physics,chemistryandcomputer.7.句子要避免汉式英语Myspareloversareswimming,skating,collectingstampsandlisteningtopopularmusic.→Inmysparetime,I’mfondofswimming,……→Inmysparetime,myhobbiesareswimming,skating……→Inmysparetime,Ienjoyswimming,skating……某英语杂志社“家长之友”栏目要举办一次征文比赛,要求围绕“Youcanleadahorsetowater,butyoucan’tmakeitdrink.”这一主题发表意见.请根据下列提示写一篇文章.内容提示:许多家长望子成龙,不惜重金送孩子上私立学校,到国外留学,请家教,给他们买大量的资料,电脑等,但往往这些都……注意事项:投稿人应提示内容,表明自己的观点:Nowadays,knowledgeisbecomingmoreandmoreimportantwiththedevelopmentofsociety,somanyparentsexpectthechildrentobeusefulorsuccessful.Theysparenoefforttooffertheirchildrenasgoodachanceaspossible:Theynotonlysendthemabroadforfurthereducationandtoprivateschoolsatgreatexpenses,butalsohirepersonalteachers.Theybuyallkindsoflearningmaterials,computersandsoon.Butnomatterwhattheirparentsdoforthechildren,whatbecomesofthechildren?Someofthemreallymakeit,butmostofthemwanttoenjoyandrelaxthemselvesandatlasttheyarereallydisappointing.Thisprovesthemeaningofthesaying“Youcanleadahorsetowater,butyoucan’tmakeitdrink.”Thatistosay,youcangivesomeonealltheopportunitiesforsuccess,butyoucan’tmakeeverypersonsuccessful.二.写好段落二.写好段落段落本身又是一篇小短文,包括主题句、支持句和结尾句。高考题参考范文:主题句是全文的第一句:SunShuwei,aworldchampionindiving,isaboyof14fromGuangdong.结尾句是全文最后一句:Ayearlaterin1990,hewonagoldmedalatthe11thAsianGamesandbecameaworldchampionatthe6thWorldSwimmingChampionshipsearlythisyear.假设你是李晓平，是“江苏中学”的学生。请你围绕“建设和谐社会”的主题，根据下面所给出的要点提示，用英语给全省中学生写一封倡议书。提示1.人与社会：祖国、家乡、学校，热爱关心2.人与人：家人、师长、同学，诚信互助3.人与自然：能源、环境、动植物、爱惜保护4.你的态度：（内容由考生自己决定）。注意：1、词数：100左右；2、内容可适当发挥，注意行文连贯。Dearfellowstudents,Ourgovernmentisaimingtobuilda“harmonioussociety”.Ithinkitiseverycitizen’sdutytoworkhardtoachievethisgoal.Ashighschoolstudents,whatshouldwedo?Firstofall,weshouldloveourmotherland.Let’stakeagreatinterestinthedevelopmentofourhometownsandtakeanactivepartinourschool’sactivities.Secondly,let’sfilltheworldwithlove.Weshouldshowourrespectforoldpeople,ourparentsandourteachers.Weshouldalsocareforeachotherandhelpthoseinneed.Mostimportantofall,allofusmustbefaithfulandhonestinourdailylife.Finally,let’sworktogethertosaveenergyandprotectournaturalenvironment,includinganimals,trees,flowersandgrass.三.过渡词1.and,inaddition,first,second,third…2.before,after,when,later,immediately…3.beyond,beside,behind,below,inside…4.but,still,however,even,though…5.because,so,therefore,thus,otherwise…6.sothat,indeed,aboveall,forexample…7.finally,inotherwords,inbrief…四.开头和结尾开头方法:开门见山、解释和描述主题、提供背景知识、小故事引路、提出问题、倒叙、悬念、名言、描写等等.结尾方法:总结主要观点、重复开头或题目、提出结论、提出问题暗示答案、引言、故事等等.请以你校学生的名义写一篇短文,陈述反对拟在你校附近兴建一座化工厂的理由.短文须包括以下内容:1.大部分同学都反对兴建.2.尽管该厂可能为本市赚钱不少,但弊大于利.3.可能造成噪声污染和空气污染.4.侵占学校部分操场.注意:可以补充若干理由,不要仅仅翻译以上各点.词数:100-120.写作的步骤1.在头脑中搜索你想用的单词:beagainst;construction;chemicalfactory;makealotofmoney;pollute;prevent;takeup;harm;playground,havesports,takemeasures…..2.想好开头句.Moststudentsofourschool,includingme,areagainsttheconstructionofachemicalfactorynearourschool.3.写好其它句子来支持你自己的观点:Althoughthefactorywillmakealotofmoneyforourcity,wedothinkitwilldousmoreharmthangood.Theairwillbebadlypollutedandwecan’tpreventthenoisefromenteringourclassrooms.Besides,thebuildingofitwilltakeupapartofoursmallplayground.Wecan’thaveenoughplacetoplaygamesandhavesportsafterclass.Ofcourse,theyhavepromisedtotakemeasurestodoitwell,however,itisfarfromenough.Ontheotherhand,Wewillneverbeabletobreathefreshair.4.适当加上一些评论:5.写出结尾句。Wherewouldwegoifitweretakenup?6.补充，完善，加上过渡词。Sowedon’tagreetobuildthefactoryhere.Moststudentsofourschool,includingme,areagainsttheconstructionofachemicalfactorynearourschool.Althoughthefactorywillmakealotofmoneyforourcity,wedothinkitwilldousmoreharmthangood.Theairwillbebadlypollutedandwecan’tpreventthenoisefromenteringourclassrooms.Besides,thebuildingofitwilltakeupapartofoursmallplayground.Wecan’thaveenoughplacetoplaygamesandhavesportsafterclass.Ofcourse,theyhavepromisedtotakemeasurestodoitwell,however,itisfarfromenough.Ontheotherhand,Wewillneverbeabletobreathefreshair.Wherewould