书面表达指导---建议信

审题体裁:信件(aletterofadvice)主体时态:一般现在时人称:第二人称假如你是中学生李华，你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难，感到非常着急。请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议，帮他来解决这方面的困难。1.不要担忧，要有信心。2.给自己更多练习汉语的机会。3.让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中。假如你是中学生李华，你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难，感到非常着急。请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议，帮他来解决这方面的困难。1.不要担忧，要有信心。2.给自己更多练习汉语的机会。3.让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中。1.Beginning:statetheproblem&yourpurpose(问题和目的)2.Body:giveadvice&reasons(建议和理由)3.Ending:expressyourhope(表达希望)3parts假如你是中学生李华，你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难，感到非常着急。请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议，帮他来解决这方面的困难。1.不要担忧，要有信心。2.给自己更多练习汉语的机会。3.让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中。Ihavereceivedyourletter.I’msorrytohearthatyouaregoingthroughahardtimelearningChinese.NowI’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Don’tbeanxiousandtrustyourself.Grabeveryopportunitytopracticeusingthelanguage.InvolveyourselfinaChineseenvironment.Lookingforwardtoyourimprovementsoon.DearPeter,Ihavereceivedyourletter.I’msorrytohearthatyouaregoingthroughahardtimelearningChinese.NowI’mwritingtogiveyousomesuggestions.Tobeginwith,don’tbeanxiousandtrustyourself.Chineseisoneofthemostcomplexlanguagesintheworld,soit’snormalforabeginnertohavesometrouble.Besides,grabeveryopportunitytopracticeusingthelanguage.Themoreyoupractice,themorefluentyouwillbeinit.•Aboveall,involveyourselfinaChineseenvironment.MakesurethatyouaresurroundedbybooksandTVprogramsinChinese,andbyfriendsspeakingChinese,whichisessentialtothelearningofanylanguage.•Lookingforwardtoyourimprovementsoon.Writing.1假设你是李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖很烦恼，她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议，请你根据以下的内容给Jane写一封信。要点：1.健康饮食；2.多锻炼；3.喝足够多的水。Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I'dliketogiveyousomesuggestions.Itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.1.Beginning:purpose2.Body:advice•DearJane,•Knowingthatyouhavetroubleinlosingweight,I'dliketogiveyousomesuggestions.•First,itisimportanttohaveahealthydiet.Inordertoloseweight,youcaneatmorevegetablesandfruits.Besides,itishelpfultodomoreexercise.Themoreexerciseyoutake,themorefatyouwillburnoff,andyouwillbethinner.Inaddition,itwouldbeagoodideatodrinkenoughwater.Becausewatercansupportourbodyandactivities,andhelpusloseweight.•Iamsureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillbecomeslimmerandstayhealthy.•Yours,•LiHuaWriting.2假设你是李华，得知你的老师Mr.Huang喜欢吸烟，并且已经养成长期吸烟的习惯，请你给他写一封信，向他提出戒烟的建议。要点：1.担忧老师的身体健康。2.提出戒烟理由和如何戒烟的建议。3.祝他早日戒烟成功。SinceIknewthatyouhavegotintothethehabitofsmoking,Ihavebeenveryworried.First,chooseadaywhenyouarerelaxedtothrowawayallyourcigarettesandmakealistofallthebenefitsyoucangetfromstopsmoking.Then,rereadthebenefitswhenyouwanttosmokeagain.Finally,dosomesportseverydayandyouaresuretosucceed.•DearMr.Huang,•SinceIknewthatyouhavegotintothethehabitofsmoking,Ihavebeenveryworried.Yousee,notonlysmokingwastesyourtimeandmoney,butitisalsoharmfultoyouhealthphysicallyandmentally,soIbelieveyoushouldstopsmokingimmediately.Herearesomesuggestionsforyou.•First,chooseadaywhenyouarerelaxedtothrowawayallyourcigarettesandmakealistofallthebenefitsyoucangetfromstoppingsmoking.Then,rereadthebenefitswhenyouwanttosmokeagain.Finally,dosomesportseverydayandyouaresuretosucceed.•Ihopemysuggestionsareusefultoyou,andyouwillmakeitsoon.•Yourssincerely,•LiHuaHomework1.Polishyourwriting1.2.Trytofinishwriting2.sentencepatterns套用句型A.stateyourpurpose1.I’msorrytolearnthat…soI'mwritingtogiveyousomesuggetions.2.I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformyadviceon...3.Knowingthatyou...,I'dliketosharesomesuggestionswithyou.B.giveyouradvice1.Trustyourself.Don'tworry.2.It'shelpful/importantto...3.Itwouldbeagoodideato...4.should/besupposedtodosth.C.expressyourhope1.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldtakemyadviceintoconsideration/account.Lookingforwardtoyourimprovementsoon.2.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionshelpful.3.I'msureifyoutakemyadvice,youwillmakegreatprogress.Firstly,…/Secondly,…/Thirdly,…Firstofall,…/Besides,…/Inaddition,…/What’smore,…/Furthermore,…/Finally,…/Lastbutnotleast,…Foronething,…/Foranother,…表示多个建议，可以用上：