2016高考英语一轮复习：写作素养培养第5讲课件(共26张)

走向高考·英语路漫漫其修远兮吾将上下而求索人教版(课标卷地区)·高考总复习写作素能培养第三部分第五讲写好非谓语动词，提升写作档次第三部分众所周知，作文中出现过多的简单句会让人觉得单调乏味，句子与句子之间的关系显得松散；而文章中过多地出现复合句又显得累赘，读起来费劲。恰当地运用非谓语动词对简单句和复合句进行转换，不仅句型多样，句子活泼，而且读起来结构紧凑，言简意明。一、运用非谓语动词转换简单句1．我为那事感到非常遗憾，开始考虑做些什么来帮一下。Ifeelquitesorryforthat.Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.→Feelingquitesorryforthat，Ibegintothinkaboutwhattodotohelp.(现在分词作状语)2．另一方面，我将帮着建立英语角，提供给我们学生一个练习英语口语的平台。Ontheotherhand，IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishcorner.IwillprovideusstudentsaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.→Ontheotherhand，IwillhelpsetuptheEnglishcorner，providingusstudentsaplatformtopracticeouroralEnglish.(现在分词作状语)3．这儿的人都喜欢汤姆写的那本小说。Allthepeopleherelikethenovel.ItiswrittenbyTom.→AllthepeopleherelikethenovelwrittenbyTom.(过去分词作定语)4．我们应该多讲英语。我们认为这是很重要的。WeshouldspeakmoreEnglish.Wethinkitisveryimportant.→WethinkitveryimportanttospeakmoreEnglish.(it作形式宾语，不定式作真正宾语)5．我们应该如何提高我们的英语口语水平？这是个问题。HowshouldweimproveourspokenEnglish？Itisaquestion.→HowtoimproveourspokenEnglishisaquestion.(不定式短语作主语)→ThequestionishowtoimproveourspokenEnglish.(不定式短语作表语)运用非谓语动词转换简单句1．Weweretouchedbytheteacher'swords.Wedecidedtoworkhard._________________________________________________2．Ididn'treceiveherletter.Ihadtowriteagain._________________________________________________3．Theboycametoschoollateagain.Thismadetheteacherveryangry._________________________________________________4．Theboysweremakingthemostoftime.Theywantedtofinishtheworkearlier._________________________________________________5．Isawanoldgranny.Shelayontheground.Iwentovertohelpher._________________________________________________答案：1.Touchedbytheteacher'swords，wedecidedtoworkhard.2．Nothavingreceivedherletter，Ihadtowriteagain.3．Theboy'scomingtoschoollateagainmadetheteacherveryangry.4．Theboysweremakingthemostoftime(soas)tofinishtheworkearlier.5．Seeinganoldgrannylyingontheground，Iwentovertohelpher.二、运用非谓语动词转换复合句1．惊诧于他们的熟练程度，我决心要像他们一样好。BecauseIwasamazedathowskillfultheywere，Ideterminedtobejustasgood.→Amazedathowskillfultheywere，Ideterminedtobejustasgood.(过去分词作状语)2．看到一辆车朝她而来，我伸出手把她拉了回来。WhenIsawacarrunningtowardsher，Ireachedmyhandoutandpulledherback.→Seeingacarrunningtowardsher，Ireachedmyhandoutandpulledherback.(现在分词作状语)3．练习了接近两个月篮球后，我们强烈渴望获得一场胜利。Afterwehadpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths，westronglydesiredtobethewinner.→Havingpracticedplayingbasketballforalmosttwomonths，westronglydesiredtobethewinner.(现在分词作状语)4．这里曾有一家化肥厂，位于城市的南边。它每天释放出大量有毒气体，污染环境。Therewasalargefactory，whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas，whichpollutedtheenvironment.→Therewasalargefactory，whichproducedfertilizer.Everydayitgaveoutalotofpoisonousgas，pollutingtheenvironment.名师点拨“原句”中分别由which引导两个定语从句，重复且单调，将第二个定语从句转换为现在分词短语作状语后，不仅表达多样，而且言简意明。5．由于老师的帮助，我的英语进步很大。因为我的英语进步很大，我确信我能考上更好的大学。Becausemyteacherhelpsme，myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved，I'msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.→Withmyteacherhelpingme，myEnglishhasgreatlyimproved.BecausemyEnglishhasgreatlyimproved，I'msureIwillgotoabetteruniversity.名师点拨“原句”两处重复出现由because引导的从句，读起来很别扭。换用“with＋现在分词的复合结构”后，读起来给人的感觉大不一样。Ⅰ.运用非谓语动词转换复合句1．Assoonastheysawafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse，theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.→______________________，theyrushedintoittosavethemwithouthesitation.2．Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothinkthatitispossiblethattheycanmasterone.→Wethinkitisnecessarythatmiddleschoolstudentsshouldlearnaforeignlanguageandwealsothink__________________.3．Itookpartinthemeeting，whichwasheldinBeijinglastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive，whichwashostedbyamanagerwhocametoourcompanyyesterday.→Itookpartinthemeeting_____________lastFriday.Itwasveryinstructive，whichwashostedbyamanager____________.4．Motherwenttoworkinahurry，andshedidn'thavebreakfast.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedaysandcamebackhomeverylate.→Motherwenttoworkinahurry________________.Shewasasbusyasabeethesedays，_______________________.答案：1.Onseeingafewpeoplestillintheburninghouse2．itpossibleforthemtomasterone3．heldinBeijing；comingtoourcompanyyesterday4．withouthavingbreakfast；comingbackhomeverylateⅡ.运用非谓语动词转换短文(根据一般表达写出该短文的高级表达)1．北京市有大量的出租车司机，他们每天全心全意地为乘客服务，为北京市的交通发挥着重要作用。他们起早贪黑，赚钱养家糊口。有一次，我下车时不小心把手机忘在了车上，但当我和司机同志联系上之后，他立即开车把手机送到了我家门口，让我感动不已。一般表达：TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing.Theyservepassengersheartandsoul.TheyplayanimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Theymakesomemoney.Theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday，IleftmycellphoneinthetaxiItook.Igotintouchwiththedriver.Hedrovetomyhomeandgaveitbacktome.Iwasveryexcited.高级表达：______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案：TherearealargenumberoftaxidriversinBeijing，servingpassengersheartandsoulandplayinganimportantpartinthetrafficofBeijing.Inordertomakesomemoneytosupporttheirfamilies，theyworkfromdawntillnight.Oneday，Igotoutofthetaxiinahurrywithmycellphone