新东方内部初中提高班作文讲解[1]

中考英语写作语法和句型•初中写作中的常见错误1、结构错误•Therehassomedifferentideasabout…•Therearesomedifferentideasabout…•正：Therebe…2.误用句型结构•误：Whenamiddleschoolstudent,hisparentswereverystrictwithhim.正：Whenhewasamiddleschoolstudent,hisparentswereverystrictwithhim.3.符号错误•Therearemanyboybandsaroundtheworld.SuchasSuperJuniorM,FeiLunHai,Flowerandsoon.正：Therearemanyboybandsaroundtheworld,suchas,SuperJuniorM,FeiLunHai,Flowerandsoon.4.缺少动词我累了。——I'mtired.•误IhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.•正IamhappyIcancometoBeijingZoo.••误Theapplescheap.I'lltakesome.•正Theapplesarecheap.I'lltakesome.5.缺少介词、冠词等•误Becauseheavyrainwecan'tholdthesportsmeeting.•正Becauseoftheheavyrainwecan'tholdthesportsmeeting.6.代词的误用•误ImotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentforIfather.•正MymotherandIwenttotheshoptobuyapresentformyfather.7.句子不完整•误Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege.Forexample,myfriendinhighschool.•（这段文章的第二句话没有动词，他不能独立构成一个句子。这是一个非常常见的错误，修改的方法是将两个句子连接起来。）•正Manystudentshaveahardtimepassingalltheteststogetintocollege,forexample,myfriendinhighschool.8.前后不一致所谓不一致，包括数的不一致、时态不一致及代词不一致、主谓不一致等。•误Whenonehaveknowledge,hecandowhathewanttodo.（人一旦有了知识，他就能想干什么就干什么。）•剖析：one是单数第三人称，因而本句的have应改为has;同理，want应改为wants。本句是典型的主谓不一致。•正Whenonehasknowledge,hecandowhathewants（todo）9.时态、人称和数的搭配错误•误WhenIgettothestationthetrainleave.•正WhenIgottothestationthetrainhadleft.10.词性误用．•Weallknowthatfailisthemotherofsucceed.Weallknowthatfailureisthemotherofsuccess.•success•successful•successfully•succeed•Hegotsuccess.•Hewassuccessful.•Hediditsuccessfully.•Hesucceeded.•Makeourcitygreenerisimportant.Makingourcitygreenerisimportant.•人们可以通过因特网获得信息。•PeoplecanbytheInternettogetinformation.PeoplecangetinformationthroughtheInternet.11．词语赘用•词语赘用就是在文章中使用了多余的字（uselesswords），或用了大词（bigwords），雅词（elegantwords），形成了废话（deadword），使文章组织不严密，内容模糊不清。•IPhoneisabrand-new,cool,modern,entertaining,smarthightech.•2-3个形容词足矣！切记用and连接。•PeoplewhoareinBeijingareworkinghardforthe2008Olympics.PeopleinBeijingareworkinghardforthe2008Olympics.•查字典•lookupadictionary看词性看例句12.文化差异•百里挑一•oneinahundredoneinathousand•黄头发•yellowhairblond•白头发•whitehairgreyhairWhite-collarBlackteaBrownsugarGreenhouseBluemood白领红茶红糖温室忧郁的情绪•具雷人版本语雷版•IcallLioldbig.toyear25.•Myhomefourmouthpeople:papa,mama,IandDD.•Pleasecometoeatandsleepwithme.•Fromseeyouoneeye,Iloveyou.•Youreyesclose,Idie;Youreyesopen,Icomebackalive.•Youreyescloseandopenagainand•again,Idieagainandagain.•1.Wehavecomputerclassoneweekatime.•Ihavecomputerclassonceaweek.•英语中表达频率次数时:一次once,两次twice从三次开始用threetimes...•2.Gointomyschool,youcanseemanyflowers.•Goingintomyschool,youcanseemanyflowers.•这里使用动名词going做主语,go这个动作由后面的you发出.•3.Therehave100books.•Thereare100books.•表示某个地方有什么,一般使用Therebe的存在句型.•4.Istudythereveryhappy.•Istudythereveryhappily.•Study是个动词,表示动作的程度要使用副词,不可以用形容词happy.•5.Iusuallyswimmingthere.•Iusuallyswimthere.•-ing结尾的动名词不可以单独做句子的谓语.•6.Iforgetsaidthis,ourschoolwallbesidehasmanytrees.•Bytheway,therearemanyflowersbesideourschoolwall.•这个句子的表达和语法上都有问题.如果单从中文意思来看,大家都明白他在说什么,但是要是让外教来批改,估计他会无尽的苦恼了.所以我们在不失句子原意的基础上,使用正确的语法.该句子的表达应该为:•7.Severalhoursafter,hewassurprised.•Severalhourslater,hewassurprised.•使用after时,不能放在时间表达语的后面.•8.Hehadtoaskedtheotherone.•Hehadtoasktheotherone.•“Havetodosomething”是固定用法,不定式后用动词原形.•9.Hethoughthespeakwell.•Hethoughthespokewell.•这个句子属于语法时态的不一致.•10.Mr.LiiscomefromBeijing.•Mr.LiisfromBeijing.•一个英语句子中不能有两个谓语动词.•11.Hewasveryhardly.HelikesstudyingChinese.•Hestudiesveryhard..HelikesstudyingChinese.•首先要区分hard和hardly.虽然两个都可以做副词,但在意思上有很大的区别.Heworksveryhard.他工作很努力Hehardlyworks.他几乎不工作.这个两个表达相差很大.其次,be动词后面不能使用副词.•12.Thisfilmisverygood-looking.•Thisfilmisveryinteresting.•这是一个完全中文式的英语句子.good-looking一般用来形容人物的.•13.Itisverygoodtofamilylook.•Itisfitforfamilytoenjoy.•又是一个中文式的句子•14.Ithinkwecan’tliveInternet.•Ithinkwecan’trelyonInternet.•学生想要表达的是不要过分依赖因特网.•15.Peopleusethenettosendthemailshasthemostpeople.•Mostpeopleusethenettosendthemails.•这是一个要表达比例的英语句子.学生在这里做了一个中文句子的”强行”翻译.•16.Ihaveafuturedream.•Ihaveadreamaboutfuture.•Future在这里不可以直接修饰dream.•17.Itcanhelpmetowalkonmyliferoad.•Itcanhelpmetowalkonmylife’sjourney.•“人生路”中的“路”是抽象的含义，不可用“road”来表达。•18.Ithinkeverythingmustbechangealot.•Ithinkeverythingkeepsonchanging.•不细心看这个句子,我完全不了解他想表达什么.但从上下文来推测,我想他想表达世事在变化的意思.•19.IjustwonderwhatdoesmyfuturelikeandwhatshouldIdo.•IjustwonderwhatmyfuturelikesandwhatIshoulddo.•宾语从句要使用正常语序.•20.ButIsingingnotverywell.•ButIdon’tsingverywell.•动名词不可以单独做谓语动词使用.一般现在时的句子表否定,如果是实意动词需要有do来帮忙.•21.Tom’smumdidn’tcarehim.•Tom’smumdidn’tcareabouthim.•Care是个不及物的动词，不可以直接加宾语。•22.Almoststudentsusethecomputernotstudy.•Mostofthestudentsusethecomputernottostudy.•一个句子中间只能有一个谓语动词。•23.Sendmailismostofpeopleliketodointhenet.•Mostofpeoplelikesendingmailintheinternet.•这是一个中文式表达的句子。•24.WhenIwasverysmall.•WhenIwasalittlechild.•Small用来形容人的体型和物品体积。这里要表达的“小孩子”的意思。