高考英语求助信公开课课件

Howtowritealetterforhelp?Lead-inWhatdidHarryPottersaywhenheaskedforhelp?Beforewriting:假定你是李华。请你给笔友Peter写封信，告诉他你叔叔李明将去他所在城市开会，询问他是否可以接机。信中需涉及如下内容：1.航班号：CA9852.到达：8月6日上午11:303.李明的外貌特征4.李华托李明带了一副Peter想要的中国画给他注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯;3.开头语和结束语已为你写好。DearPeter,Howareyoudoing?____________________________________________________________________________________________Lookingforwardtoyourreply.YoursLiHua•1.我是李华。•2.我写信告诉你……•3.我叔叔李明将去你的城市开会。•4.你能否去接机?•5.航班号是CA985(flightnumber)•6.他8月6日上午11：30到。•7.李明的外貌特征•8.我已经让叔叔带了你想要的中国画给你。(Chinesepainting)attendameetingpicksbupattheairport1.IamLiHua.2.I’mwritingtotellyouthat…3.MyuncleLiMingisgoingto/willgotoyourcitytoattendaconference.4.Canyougotomeetmyuncleattheairport?5.Hewillarriveat11:30amAugust6.6.TheflightnumberisCA985.8.IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant.请注意时态及人称和数的统一Whilewriting①Para1：Purpose:askingforhelp②Para2：Body:situation③Para3：Conclusion:expressyourhopeandappreciation1.Paragraph：2.Linkingwordsorsentences:3.Politeness:并列:besides,inaddition,what’smore…转折:However,Onthecontrary,but…顺序:Firstofall,First/Second/Finally…Politeness:1.Sendmethebook.2.Couldyoupleasesendmethebook?3.Ihopeyoucansendmethebookassoonaspossible.4.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldsendmethebook.5.Youshouldsendmethebook.7.Iwonderifyoucouldsendmethebook.8.Wouldyoudomeafavortosendmethebook?(IamLiHua.)I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingto/willgotoyourcitytoattendaconference.Wouldyoudomeafavortopickupmyuncleattheairport?Hewillarriveat11:30amAugust6andhisflightnumberisCA985.Heistallandhehaslonghair.Bytheway,IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.polishthepassage•1.complexsentences(attributiveclause,adverbialclause,nonfiniteverbandsoon)•e.g.IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant.•2.advancedvocabulary•e.g.:wantbefondof•3.inventsomerealisticandreasonableinformation:askyourselfsomequestionsaccordingtothepassage•e.g.HowtomakePeterfindmyuncleeasily?Iwillsendyouthepictureofmyuncle.Myunclewillweararedhatthatday.Attention:It’sunnecessarytowritetoomuch.Ifyoucan’tmakeitreasonableandrealistic,don’twriteitdown.Checkyourpassage:①检查单词拼写、时态语态、名词单复数、标点符号等。②检查要点是否遗漏。③检查句子结构是否正确。④估计字数是否符合要求。Post-writingHowtowriteagoodletterforhelp?Summary四个步骤Step1Identifyoverallrequirementsandlistthekeypoints（审题列要点）Step2FormapassageStep3.Polishthepassage（成文润色）Conclusion:Step4.Checkthepassage•三段法模式①第一段：Purpose:Askingforhelp②第二段：Body:Situation③第三段：Conclusion:Expressyourappreciationandhope常用句型：1.写作目的：I’mwritingtotellyouthat…2.求助的句型：Iwonderifyoucould…Ifitisconvenienttoyou,wouldyouplease…?Wouldyoudomeafavorto…?3.表达期待或谢意。Lookingforwardto(receiving)yourearlyreply.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.(IamLiHua.)I’mwritingtotellyouthatmyuncleLiMingisgoingto/willgotoyourcitytoattendaconference.Wouldyoudomeafavortopickupmyuncleattheairport?Hewillarriveat11:30amAugust6andhisflightnumberisCA985.Heistallandhehaslonghair.Bytheway,IhaveaskedmyuncletobringyoutheChinesepainting(that/which)youwant.Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldhelpme.HomeworkPolishyourcompositionafterclassandshareitwithyourdeskmate.Goodbye!Thanks!