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二、短文改错(对应学生用书第157页)2019全国ⅠIbecameinterestinginplayingfootballthankstoasmallaccident.OneafternoonwhereIwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.Suddenlyfootballfelljustinfrontofmebutalmosthitme.Istoppedtheballandkickedithardlybacktotheplayground.Toeveryone’ssurprising,theballwentintothenet.Allthefootballplayerontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,saythatIhadatalentforfootball.Fromnowon,Istartedtoplaymyfootballwithclassmatesafterschool.Iamagoodplayernow.答案:Ibecameinplayingfootballthankstoasmallaccident.OneafternoonIwasinprimaryschool,Iwaswalkingbytheschoolplayground.Suddenlyfootballfelljustinfrontofmealmosthitme.Istoppedtheballandkickeditbacktotheplayground.Toeveryone’s,theballwentintothenet.Allthefootballontheplaygroundcheeredloudly,thatIhadatalentforfootball.Fromon,Istartedtoplaymyfootballwithclassmatesafterschool.Iamagoodplayernow.剖析:becomeinterestedin变得对……感兴趣。oneafternoon是表示时间的名词,后面的定语从句应用when引导。此处是泛指“一个足球”,应用不定冠词a。“一个足球正好落在我面前”与“差点儿打到我”之间是顺承关系,故用并列连词and。此处表示“用力把足球踢回操场”,应用hard(adv.用力地)。toone’ssurprise令某人惊讶的是。根据前面的all可知,player应用复数形式players。分析句子结构可知,cheered是谓语动词,say前没有并列连词and等,所以say只能用非谓语动词形式;主语与say之间是主动关系,故用现在分词短语作状语。文章讲述的是过去发生的事情,应该用fromthenon,意为“从那时起”。playfootball踢足球。2019全国ⅡSinceIwasakid,I’veconsidereddifferentjobIwouldliketodo.First,Iwantedtobeafireman,whoseuniformlookedsocoolly.Then,whenIwasinthefivegrade,IwantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEnglishteachertoomuch.WhenIstudiedchemistryhighschool,Ireconsideredmygoalordecidedtobeadoctor.Theyweretworeasonsforthedecision.OnewasthatIwasamazingatthefactthatasickpersoncouldfeelmuchmorebetterafterseeingadoctor.AndtheotheristhatIwantedtohelppeopleinneed.答案:SinceIwasakid,I’veconsidereddifferentIwouldliketodo.First,Iwantedtobeafireman,whoseuniformlookedso.Then,whenIwasinthegrade,IwantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEnglishteachermuch.WhenIstudiedchemistryhighschool,Ireconsideredmygoaldecidedtobeadoctor.weretworeasonsforthedecision.OnewasthatIwasatthefactthatasickpersoncouldfeelmuchmorebetterafterseeingadoctor.AndtheotherthatIwantedtohelppeopleinneed.剖析:形容词different(不同的)后跟名词的复数形式。连系动词look后跟形容词作表语。“上五年级”有两种表达方式:inthefifth/5thgrade或inGrade5/Five。toomuch表示“太多”,而very/somuch表示“非常”,此处表示“我非常喜欢我的英语老师”。固定搭配:in/athighschool在高中。reconsidered和decided这两个动作为并列关系,故or改为and。此处是Therebe句型。amazed吃惊的,惊讶的;amazing令人吃惊的,令人惊讶的。-ed形容词说明人的感受,意为“感到……的”,-ing形容词描述人或事物本身具有的特征,意为“令人……的”,此处说明主语I的感受,故用-ed形式的形容词。本句中better本身已经是比较级,前面只需要much来修饰,表示程度,more在本句中多余。由文章整体行文都是过去时态及上文的Onewas可知,此处也是叙述过去发生的事情,故用一般过去时。2019全国ⅢI’vehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistoopensacafe.Thoughitmayappearsimple,itrequiredalotofideasandefforts.WhatIwantisnotjustanordinarilycafebutaveryspecialone.Iwantmycafehaveaspecialthemesuchaslike“TangDynasty”.Inthecafe,customerswillenjoyyourselvesinthehistoricalenvironmentwhatiscreatedforthem.IfIsucceedinmanageone,Iwillopenmore.Iwishtohaveachainofcafesinmanydifferentcity.Eachofmycafeswillhaveadifferentthemeandanuniquestyle.答案:I’vehadmanydreamssinceIwasachild.Nowmydreamistoacafe.Thoughitmayappearsimple,italotofideasandefforts.WhatIwantisnotjustancafebutaveryspecialone.Iwantmycafehaveaspecialthemesuchaslike“TangDynasty”.Inthecafe,customerswillenjoyinthehistoricalenvironmentiscreatedforthem.IfIsucceedinone,Iwillopenmore.Iwishtohaveachainofcafesinmanydifferent.Eachofmycafeswillhaveadifferentthemeanduniquestyle.剖析:to是不定式符号,后跟动词原形。不定式短语toopenacafe在句中作表语。此处讲述的是一般情况,故用一般现在时。此处用形容词ordinary修饰名词cafe。wantsb./sth.todosth.希望某人/某物做某事。suchas例如,是固定搭配。此处like多余,故去掉。此处指代主语customers,要用themselves。先行词是thehistoricalenvironment,定语从句中缺少主语,故用that或which。what可以引导宾语从句、表语从句等,但不可以引导定语从句。succeedindoingsth.成功做某事。many修饰可数名词复数。unique是读音以辅音音素开头的单词,其前用a,不用an。2018全国ⅠDuringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisitmygrandparents.Ifindabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivinginasmallhousewithdogs,ducks,andanotheranimals.LastwinterwhenIwenthereagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensofchicken.Theyalsohadasmallpondwhichtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotbysellthefish.Ifelthappilythattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,butheagreed.答案:Duringmylastwinterholiday,Iwenttocountrysidewithmyfathertovisitmygrandparents.Iabigchangethere.ThefirsttimeIwentthere,theywerelivinginasmallhousewithdogs,ducks,andanimals.LastwinterwhenIwentagain,theyhadabigseparatehousetoraisedozensof.Theyalsohadasmallpondtheyraisedfish.Mygrandpasaidlastsummertheyearnedquitealotbythefish.Ifeltthattheirlifehadimproved.Attheendofourtrip,ItoldmyfatherthatIplannedtoreturnforeverytwoyears,heagreed.剖析:gotothecountryside表示“去乡下”,是固定搭配。文章讲述的是过去发生的事,故用一般过去时。another意为“另一个”,修饰可数名词单数;此处表示“其他的”动物,应用other。去乡下看望爷爷奶奶,应该是“远指”而非“近指”,故用there。dozensof许多,修饰可数名词复数。此处chicken为可数名词,意为“鸡”。pond是表示地点的名词,后面的定语从句主、谓、宾成分齐全,故用where或“介词+which”引导定语从句;表达“在池塘里”用介词in。by是介词,后接动词时要用其-ing形式。feel此处是连系动词,后接形容词作表语。everytwoyears意为“每隔两年”,是时间状语,可独立使用,不需要介词。“每两年回乡下的爷爷奶奶家一次”与“他同意”是顺承关系,故用并列连词and。2018全国ⅡWhenIwaslittle,Friday’snightwasourfamilygamenight.Aftersupper,wewouldplaycardgamesofallsortinthesittingroom.As