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ContinuationWritingSuggestedproceduresforcontinuationwriting:1.Thoroughreading2.Creativeplotting3.Swiftdrafting4.Carefulpolishing5.Neatcopying读后续写策略：内容&语言语言：准确，丰富，细腻、生动动作、人物、心理活动、环境等细节描写。Hesatinfrontofthem,dressedinaplain,ill-fittingsuit,nevermoving,hisdustyfacemaskinghisage.Hekeptchewingtheinsideofhislipalot,frozenintocompletesilence.ReadingWritingWriting:扩句tomakethesentencemoreinformative,specificandvividThesealperformed.1.---Thesealgotoutofwater,movedacrossthedeck,andmadesoundsattheaudience.2.---Thesealsleapedoutofthewater,slidacrossthedeckandbarkedattheaudience.4.---Theblack,sleeksealleapedeagerlyoutoftheglisteningwater,slidquicklyacrossapolished,woodendeck,andbarkednoisilyatthestunnedaudience.3.---Thesealsleapedeagerlyoutofthewater,slidquicklyacrossthedeck,andbarkednoisilyattheaudience.Amansavedup.1.加介词短语（表时间；地点）:AyoungmaninTeheransavedupforyears.2.加动词不定式短语（表目的）：AyoungmaninTeheransavedupforyearstobuyarealbed.3.加过去分词短语（表原因）：Tiredofsleepingonthefloor,ayoungmaninTeheransavedupforyearstobuyarealbed.Hebecameanownerofabed.1.加形容词:Hebecameaproudownerofabed.2.加介词短语（时间）：Forthefirsttimeinhislife,hebecametheproudownerofabed..3.加定语从句：Forthefirsttimeinhislife,hebecametheproudownerofabedwhichhadspringsandmattressThemandidn’twakeup.1.加时间主语从句:Themandidn’twakeupuntilthebedhadstrucktheground.Themanwasunhurt.1.加副词:Themanwasmiraculouslyunhurt.2.加让步状语从句：Althoughthebedwassmashedintopieces,themanwasmiraculouslyunhurt.Themanpickedupthemattress.1.加副词:Themansadlypickedupthemattress.2.加并列谓语动词短语：Themansadlypickedupthemattressandcarrieditintohishouse.3.加现在分词短语（表伴随状语)：Glancingatthebitsofwoodandmetal,themansadlypickedupthemattressandcarrieditintohishouse.4.加定语从句：Glancingatthebitsofwoodandmetalthatlayaroundhim,themansadlypickedupthemattressandcarrieditintohishouse.Challengeyourself1.Wewon.2.Thechildrenswimintheriver.3.Iwentintothekitchen.4.Thecityhasbeenrebuilt.5.Jennysatinacafe.Thankstoourgreateffortsandamazingteamwork,weeventuallywonthefootballgamewitha2-1homevictoryagainsttheTiger.Wewon.Wewonthefootballgame.句子主干：扩充成份：1.thankstoourgreateffortsandamazingteamwork介词短语作原因状语2.eventually副词作状语3.witha2-1homevictoryagainsttheTiger介词短语作伴随状语Atabeautifuldusk,thechildrenledbytheirnativeleader,G.DragonswamintheDevilRiver,aterrifyingplacewherenobodydaredtoapproach.Thechildrenswimintheriver.ThechildrenswamintheDevilRiver.句子主干：扩充成份：1.atabeautifuldusk介词短语作时间状语2.ledbytheirnaïveleader过去分词作定语3.aterrifyingplacewhichnobodydaredtoapproach作theDevilRiver的同位语4.terrifying现在分词作形容词修饰名词place5.wherenobodydaredtoapproach定语从句作定语Hearinghiswife’sscream,hejumpedoutofthebathtubimmediatelyandhurriedtothekitchenanxiously,onlytofindthatthemeathiswifehadbeencookingwasburnt.Iwenttothekitchen.Hejumpedoutofthebathtubandhurriedtothekitchen.句子主干：扩充成份：1.hearinghiswife’sscream现在分词表伴随2.immediately,anxiously副词修饰动词3.hiswifehadbeencooking定语从句4.onlytofind…动词不定式短语作状语Standingonthetopofthemountain,theoldmanoverlookedthebrand-newcitywithmixedfeelingsbecausetherebuiltcityisnotfamiliartohimanymore,butmeanwhilehewashappyforthedevelopmentofthehishometown.Thecityhasbeenrebuilt.Theoldmanoverlookedthebrand-newcity.句子主干：扩充成份：1.standingonthetopofthemountain现在分词短语作伴随状语2.withmixedfeelings介词短语作伴随状语3.becausetherebuiltcityisnotfamiliartohimanymore,butmeanwhilehewashappyforthedevelopmentofthehishometown原因状语从句Jennysatpensivelyintheemptycafé,sippingthebitter-tastingcoffeeandwaitingforsomeonewhomightneverturnup.Jennysatinacafé.Jennysatpensivelyinthe(empty)café句子主干：扩充成份：1.sippingthe(bitter-tasting)coffeeandwaitingforsomeone现在分词作伴随状语2.whomightneverturnup定语从句修饰someone