Cet-4-Writing概述+开头

四级作文评分方法:总体评分法(GlobalScoring)阅卷老师就总的印象给出奖励分(RewardScores)而非按语言点的错误数目扣分.Everystudentincollegewantstoachievehighmarksintheiracademicstudy.Obviously,nooneincollegedoesn’twanttoachievehighmarksin…Example:评分标准:14分—切题.表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好,无语言错误.11分---切题.表达思想清楚,文字连贯,无语言错误.8分---基本切题.有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯,但有个别语言错误.5分---基本切题.表达思想不够清楚,连贯性差,语言错误较多.2分---条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误.写作复习:模写优秀文章背诵实用句型活学活用词汇句型学习写作技巧一分耕耘,一分收获Directions:Forthispart,yourareallowed30minutestowriteacompositiononthetopicTryingtoBeAGoodUniversityStudent.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsandyoushouldbaseyourcompositionontheoutline(giveninChinese)below．Example:１.做合格大学生的必要性２.做合格大学生的必备条件（可以从德智体方面谈）３.我计划这样做议论文说明文描述文*议论文写作特点要有论点和论据，而且往往从正反两面来论述。第一段的写作思路是：做合格大学生，会怎么样（从正面论述）；不能做到合格大学生，会怎么样（从反面论述）；所以我们要做合格的大学生（结论）。*说明文写作特点从几方面或几条来说明一个问题(某一机器的说明书一样通过1、2、3说明它的用途)第二段的写作思路是：我们从三个方面（德智体）来说明做合格大学生的必要性。*描述文写作特点以“人”为中心描述一个“做”的过程。跟上两段相比，本段的主语多为人称代词。它要与第二段相呼应进行描述。第三段的写作思路是：１.议论体的主题句２.说明体的主题句３.描述体主题句Itisverynecessarytobeagooduniversitystudent.Therearethreeaspectsofnecessitiestobeagooduniversitystudent.WhatIwilldointhefutureisthefollowing.GoodHealth１.Importanceofgoodhealth２.Waystokeepfit３.Myownpractice１.Itisveryimportanttohavegoodhealth.（将名词importance变成形容词important）２.Therearefourwaystokeepfitforme.（用therebe句型）３.Myownpracticesarethefollowing.（采用原词）para.1(3sentences)sentence1从正面论述sentence2从反面论述sentence3小结para.2(6sentences)sentence1sentence2sentence3sentence4sentence5sentence6德智体Example:1.Itisverynecessarytobeagooduniversitystudent.2.Therearethreeaspectsofnecessitiestobeagooduniversitystudent.3.WhatIwilldointhefutureisthefollowing.para.3(3sentences)sentence1德怎么做sentence2智怎么做sentence3体怎么做四级作文开头的写法：现象法观点法引用法对立法数据法问题法1.现象法Example:关于如何解决年轻人社会责任感不强的问题的文章开头Inrecentyears,thereisanincreasingnumberofpeople,especiallytheyoung,whopaylittleattentiontothesocialresponsibility.Accordingtoasurvey,mostpeoplethinkyoungstersarebecomingmoreselfishandlesswarm-heartedandtheirconcernisconnectedmorewiththeirpersonalhappinessoverthatofthesociety.Exercise:如何在建设中保护环境如何减轻中小学生负担Theproblemofprotectingenvironmentinthecourseofeconomicdevelopmenthasnowbeeninthelimelight(众人注意的中心).Nowthereisagrowingconcernovertheheavyburden,bothacademicandpsychological,ourchildrenhavetobear.套用句型：1.Recentlytheproblemof…hasdrawnpublicattention.….arouseworldwideattention.2.Recentlytheissueof…hasbeenbroughttopublicattention.…hasbeenbroughtintofocus.…hasbeeninthelimelight.2.观点法Example:经济对人们思想意识影响Nowpeopleingrowingnumbersarecomingtoholdtheideathattheeconomyhasbiginfluenceonpeople’smind.1.Nowpeopleinincreasingnumbersarebeginningtoacceptthat…2.…peopleinsignificantnumbersarecomingtobeawarethat…3.Nowpeoplebecomeincreasinglyaware/consciousoftheimportanceof......套用句型：３．引用法１.“Knowledgeispower.”suchistheremarkmadebyBacon.Thisremarkhasbeensharedbymoreandmorepeople.２.“Educationisnotcompletewithgraduation.”SuchistheopinionofagreatAmericanphilosopher.Nowmoreandmorepeoplesharehisopinion.３．Inourowndaysweareusedtohearingsuchtraditionalcomplainsasthis.......套用句型Thereisanoldsayingwhichgoeslikethis…Afamousmanonceremarked…Itissaidthat…对立法:先引出其他人的不同看法,然后提出自己的看法或者偏向于某一看法,适用于有争议性的主题.[1].Whenaskedabout.....,thevast/overwhelmingmajorityofpeoplesaythat.......ButIthink/viewabitdifferently.[2].Whenitcomesto....,somepeoplebelievethat.......Othersargue/claimthattheopposite/reverseistrue.Thereisprobablysometruthinbotharguements/statements,but(Itendtotheformer/latter...)[3].Now,itiscommonly/generally/widelybelieved/held/acknowledgedthat....Theyclaim/believe/arguethat...ButIwonder/doubtwhether.....４对立法exercise大学生是否可以找兼职工作５数据法电视对儿童的影响Inrecentyears,withthedevelopmentofscienceandtechnology,80percentofallhomesinChinahavesatelliteTV,offeringasmanyas50channels.Ithasgreatimpactonchildren.Exercise:年轻人喜欢丁克家庭Withinrecentyears,thetendencyofboomingupofDINKfamilyhasbecomemoreandmoreobvious.Itisestimatedthatabout35percentofmarriedcouplesarereluctanttohaveababy.Accordingtoasurvey,..Itisestimatedthat…Thesurveyconductedby…indicatesthat…6问题法青少年犯罪Whyisthereagrowingnumberofjuveniledelinquencyinsociety?Opinionsvarywidely.一、~~~the+~est+名词+(that)+主词+haveever+seen(known/heard/had/read,etc)HelenisthemostbeautifulgirlthatIhaveeverseen.二、Nothingis+~~~erthanto+VNothingis+more+形容词+thanto+VNothingismoreimportantthantoreceiveeducation.加分句型三、~~~cannotemphasizetheimportanceof~~~toomuch.（再怎么强调...的重要性也不为过。）Wecannotemphasizetheimportanceofprotectingoureyestoomuch.四、Thereisnodenyingthat+S+V...（不可否认的...）Thereisnodenyingthatthequalitiesofourlivinghavegonefrombadtoworse.不可否认的，我们的生活品质已经每况愈下。五、Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat+句子~~（全世界都知道...）Itisuniversallyacknowledgedthattreesareindispensabletous.六、Thereisnodoubtthat+句子~~（毫无疑问的...）Thereisnodoubtthatoureducationalsystemleavessomethingtobedesired.毫无疑问的我们的教育制度令人不满意。七、Anadvantageof~~~isthat+句子（...的优点是...）Anadvantageofusingthesolarenergyisthatitwon’tcreate(produce)anypollution.使用太阳能的优点是它不会制造任何污染。八、Thereasonwhy+句子~~~isthat+句子（...的原因是...）Thereasonwhywehavetogrowtreesisthattheycanprovideuswithfreshair九、So+形容词+be+主词+that+句子（如此...以致于...）Soprec