大学英语四级辅导-作文部分

大学英语四级辅导作文部分录目写作要求趋势分析写作结构评分标准题材分类写作模板范文学习写作要求达到《教学要求》中的一般要求，即：•能完成一般性写作任务。•能描述个人经历、观感、情感和发生的事件等。•能写常见的应用文。•能在半小时内就一般性话题或提纲写出不少于120词的短文。•内容基本完整，中心思想明确，用词恰当，语意连贯。•能掌握基本的写作技能。评分标准切题形式内容—段落、字数、文体、格式表达清楚、条理清晰主题观点明确，有头有尾，论证说明安排有主次，有轻重。文字通顺，连贯性较好基本无语言错误考查学生对和的掌握和运用，要求文章句子内部与句子之间通顺连贯，不突兀语法拼写评分标准条理不清，思绪紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误。2基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重语言错误。5基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多。8切题，表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。11切题，表达思想清楚，文字清楚连贯，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。14趋势分析2017.6advertisementonyourcampuswebsitetosellacomputer2016.12tofindajobortostartabusiness2015.12Nevergoouttheretoseewhathappens,goouttheretomakesomethinghappen.2015.6应用文议论文-原因解释型趋势分析2014.12Acoursethathasimpressedyoumostincollege.2014.6Supposeaforeignfriendofyoursiscomingtovisityourhometown,whatisthemostinterestingplaceyouwouldliketotakehim/hertoseeandwhy?2013.122013.6议论文-原因解释型议论文-原因解释型议论文-利弊分析型议论文-图片描述型趋势分析2012.122012.61.许多商品都存在过度包装的现象2.出现这种现象的原因及其带来的后果3.为了改变这种状况，我认为……onexcessivepackaging议论文-图表作文议论文-提纲题材分类议论文应用文记叙文对比选择型原因解释型利弊分析型问题解决型写作结构主题段扩展段终结段主题句（第1句）扩展句（1-2句）终结句（引出下文）1（主题句+扩展句）2（主题句+扩展句）3（主题句+扩展句）主题句（第1句）扩展句终结句（最后一句）过渡词过渡词KeytoSuccessInsuchacompatitivesociety,everyonehasastrongdesiretobesuccessful.Buthowtoacheivesuccess?Inmyopinion,therearethreemainkeys-aclearobjective,strongwillpoweranddiligence.First,itisveryimportanttosetagoalbeforeyoustart.Noonecanbesuccessfulwithoutagoalinhismind.Besides,youneedastrongwillpowertokeepyougoahead.Therealwaysaretoughstonesineveryroadtosuccess.Whetheryoucangothroughitdependsonwhetheryouarepersistentenough.Lastbutnotleast,everyonewhowanttosucceedshouldbediligent.Thereisanoldsaying“Nopains,nogains.”Mostsuccesspeopleowetheirsuccesstohardworking,suchasEinstein.Inconclusion,ifwewanttobesuccessful,wehavetomasterthethreemiankeysmentionedabove.Thereisnoshortcuttosuccess.Thethreekeyswillassureyoutorealizeyourdream.主题句扩展句终结句主题句扩展句主题句扩展句主题句扩展句扩展句主题句终结句写作模板1.讨论观点类文章：Nowadays,thereisagrowingconcernoversuchaphenomenonthat.Differentpeoplehavedifferentviewson_____.Somepeoplethinkthat_____,othersarguethat__________.AsfarasIamconcerned,Iagreewiththeopinionthat___________.Foronething,Ifirmlybelievethat___________.Foranother,_____________.Justthinkof________.Takingallthesefactorsintoconsideration(Formwhathasbeendiscussedabove),wemaysafelycometotheconclusionthat______.Onlyif_______canwe_______,justasthesayinggoes,________________.2.提出问题类作文：Itisquitenaturalfor________toponderoverthequestionofwhetherto_______________.Many_________willchoosenotto______________,generallyforthreereasons.Ontheonehand,___________.Ontheotherhand,______________.Mostimportantly,__________.Nevertheless,oherpeopleadoptacompletelydifferentview,thinkingthat_____________.Moreover,(此外)theyfurtherarguethat___________.Fromwhatwehavediscussedabove,wecandrawtheconclusionthatthequestionquitedependsonpersonalchoice.Inmyowneyes,________.3.评论反驳类作文Untilrecentlymostpeopleholdhostileattitudestowards_______.Somepeopleviewitas_____________whileothersconsiderit____________.Recentresearch,however,showsthat___________isofgreatbenefitinmanyrespects._________,scientiststellus,_____________.Surprisinglyenougu,____________also_______.Themostremarkablethingabout_______isthat_______.Nowwecandrawtheconclusionthat_______.Istronglyadvocatethatweshouldmakegooduseofitto_________.4.解决办法类作文IftheChinesepeopleevenwanttoimprovetheirlifequality,theproblemof__________hastobesolved.Withmoreandmorepeople_______,thisproblemisbecomingmoreandmoreseriousintermsofscaleandscope.Firstofall,_________.What’smore,__________.Onlywhenallthepeoplestoppursuingpersonalinterestsatthepriceof________canwehopetoputanendtothisunfavorablesituation.The_________isofgreatimportancetoeverymemberofoursociety.Aslongasthegovernment,societyandindividualsmakejointefforts,asoundsolutionisnotfaraway.5.分析原因类作文Duringthelastdecade,therehasbeenasteadyriseinthenumberof_________.Indetail,________.Threereasons,inmymind,accountforthissocialphenomenon.Firstandforemost,__________.Moreover,_________.Inaddition,___________.Asaresult,__________.Personally,Ifirmlybelievethattheproblemderivesfrom__________.Thus,ifthegovernmentmakerelevantpoliciesandtakerelevantmeasureto__________,theproblemcanbereadilysolvedin__________.6.图表类作文Whatisshowninthechart/graph/diagram/tableaboveindicatesthatinrecentyears,moreandmorepeoplepayattentionto_________.Thenumberofthosewho_________hasincreased________,andfurthermore,____________.Therearetwofactorsresponsibleforthechanges.Inthefirstplace,_________.Moreover,__________.Yet,itisnoticeablethat__________.Fromtheanalysis,wecansafelydrawtheconclusionthat__________.Itispossiblethatinthefuture,thetendencywill__________.范文学习Directions：Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowriteanadvertisementonyourcampuswebsitetosellacomputeryouusedatcollege.Youradvertisementmayincludeitsbrand,specifications/features,conditionandprice,andyourcontactinformation.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbutnomorethan180words.(2017)ComputerforSaleAsIamabouttograduateandleavethecampus,Iamgoingtosellmypersonallaptopatalowprice.ItisaLenovoThinkPadthatIboughtinJune,2015.Itisno