非谓语动词结合写作

Non-finiteVerbsinwriting非谓语动词在写作中的应用OurSpringOutingNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.Torelaxourselves,ourclasshadameetingtodiscusswheretogoforourspringouting.Havingabarbecueisourchoice.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Weclimbedthemountain,talkingandlaughing.Whenwearrived,webegantobarbecue.Havinghadabigdinner,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthebeautifulview.Weweretiredbuthappy.Whatdoyouthinkofit?•2011年浙江省高考考试说明(写作)•考生应能•(1)清楚、连贯地传递信息，表达意思；•(2)有效应用所学语言知识。OurSpringOutingNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.Torelaxourselves,ourclasshadameetingtodiscusswheretogoforourspringouting.Havingabarbecueisourchoice.Thenextday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning.Weclimbedthemountain,talkingandlaughing.Whenwearrived,webegantobarbecue.Havinghadabigdinner,weenjoyedthewarmsunshineandthebeautifulview.Weweretiredbuthappy.•1.Makingourcitygreeneriseveryone’sduty.•2.Thegovernmentisdeterminedtocontinuethegreenprogram.•3.Ifindmyhometownchangedsomuch.•4.Havingfreshair,treescanreduceairpollution.•5.Everyefforttomaketheprogrammakesadifference.5.定语2.宾语4.状语3.宾补1.主语找出非谓语动词，并判断成分1.Lookingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.3.—Whichteamisgoodatcooking?—Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook.Correction写作中非谓语动词常见的错误1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致Lookingfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.Lookedfromthetopofmountain,thecityisbeautiful.写作中非谓语动词常见的错误2、用动词短语充当主语、表语和宾语2.Inmyopinion,climbmountainisanenjoyablething.Inmyopinion,climbingmountainisanenjoyablething.写作中非谓语动词常见的错误3、主动、被动含义混淆Ateamcallingitselfthesuppercook.3.—Whichteamisgoodatcooking?—Ateamcalleditselfthesuppercook.Ateamcalledthesuppercook.1.①Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.②Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.2.①Agirlclimbedsohardthatshelosthertemper.②Shecomplainedaboutthelongwalk.3.①Themonitorhassetagoodexampleforus.②Therefore,themonitordeservesthehonorandweshouldlearnfromher.Connection①Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivities.②Wewanttomakeourselvesmorehealthy.Itishightimewetookpartinsomeactivitiestomakeourselvesmorehealthy.+目的状语①Wangqiclimbedsohardthatshelosthertemper.②Shecomplainedaboutthelongwalk.Wangqigotsoangrythatshelosthertemper,complainingaboutthelongwalk.伴随状语+①Themonitorhassetagoodexampleforus.②Therefore,themonitordeservesthehonorandweshouldlearnfromher.Havingsetagoodexampleforus,themonitordeservesthehonorandweshouldlearnfromher.原因状语+高考临近，保持良好的心态有助于减轻焦虑，还能增强克服困难的勇气。Step1：拆分成几个简单句(中文)①高考临近。②保持良好的心态很重要。③它有助于减轻焦虑（relax）和勇敢地克服困难。Step2：分别翻译这几个简单句①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Step3：合并句子WithNationalCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudetorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①NationalCollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence1:Step3：合并句子WithCollegeEntranceExaminationcoming,itisimportanttohavearightattitudewhichhelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.①CollegeEntranceExaminationiscoming.②Itisimportanttohavearightattitude.③Ithelpsustorelaxandovercomedifficultiesbravely.Sentence2:Tip:Trytousedifferentwaystoexpress.建议有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。（2011高考模拟）要求：1.用2-3句话表达表格内容2.2-3句话要有连贯性Havingatry建议有足够的睡眠是必要的。原因1.它能有效的改善我们的课堂学习。2.保持健康的身体是进一步学习及工作的基础。HavingatryItisnecessarytohaveenoughsleep.Havingenoughsleepisnecessary.Itwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Keepinghealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.ToKeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Passage：Havingenoughsleepisnecessary,becauseitwillbeaneffectivewaytoimproveourlearningintheclass.Moreover,tokeephealthyisthebaseforourfurtherstudyandwork.Tip:Neverignoretheconjunction.1.beggar,lie,sleep2.Mr.Li,hurry,paynoattentionto3.stickout，tripover(绊倒),angry…Writing2.MrLihurriedhome,payingnoattentiontoabeggar.1.Thebeggarlayontheground,sleeping.3.Suddenly,thebeggarstuckouthislegs,trippingoverMrLi,whichmadehimveryangry.MakeanendingExchangeanddiscussyourpartner’scomposition,followingthecriteria.Criteria（标准）Content（内容）Language（语言）Coherence（连贯）PairworkAbeggarOneday,hurryinghome,Mr.Lipaidnoattentiontothebeggarwholayontheground,sleeping.Suddenly,thebeggarstuckouthislegs,trippingMr.Liover,whichmadehimveryangry.Realizingthebeggarwasadisabledperson,Mr.Libegantosearchforsomemoneyinhispockettogivehim.Hetookouta100-yuannote,whichwassuddenlyblownintotheairbythewind.Seeingthis,thebeggarjumpedquicklytorunafterthenote,makingMr.Lisosurprisedthathestoodtherewithhismouthopen.Rewritethecompositionandhanditin.Homework