概要写作-gene-technology

说明文概要写作以GeneTechnology一文为例1.判断文章体裁2.深入了解文章内容和结构3.概要写作（连词成句，连句成章）文体判断记叙文说明文议论文5W1H现象+原因+结果问题+解决办法对象+功能+利好论点+论据（结论）说明文分类：（1）描写事物的性质和功能。即：对象+性质、功能+好处Thewriterintroducetheideaofaballoonrobot,especiallyhowithelpstoguidepeopletotheirdestinationwithoutbeingconnectedtotheInternet,fromwhichweknowitmaybecomepopularinthefuture.（2）针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。即：问题+解决办法Thepassagetellsushowtobeagoodfriend,includinglisteningmoretofriends,offeringhelpwhennecessary,stayingwiththemandmakingplanstogether.（3）介绍某种现象及其原因和结果。即：现象+原因+结果Theauthortalksaboutthepopularityofadvisements,becausetheycanbringconveniencetopeoplebutthenegativeeffectsshouldn’tbeignored.Paragraph1Amongallthefastgrowingscienceandtechnology,theresearchofhumangenes,orbiologicalengineeringaspeoplecallit,isdrawingmoreandmoreattentionnow.Sometimes,itisahottopicdiscussedbypeople.总写：基因技术研究受到人们的广泛关注。Thegreatestthingthatgenetechnologycandoistocureseriousdiseasesthatdoctorsatpresentcanalmostdonothingwith,suchascancerandheartdisease.Everyyear,millionsofpeoplearemurderedbythesetwokillers.Andtodate,doctorshavenotfoundaneffectivewaytocurethem.Butifgenetechnologyisapplied,notonlythesetwodiseasescanbecuredcompletely,bringinghappinessandmorelivingdaystothepatients,butalsothegreatamountofmoneyspendoncuringtheirdiseasescanbesaved,andthereforeitbenefitstheeconomyaswell.Inaddition,humanlifecanbeprolonged.(延长)Paragraph2分述：基因技术的好处Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtomorehealthyandcleverchildren.Somefamilies,withtheEnglishimperialfamilybeingagoodexample,havehereditary(遗传的)disease.Thismeanstheirchildrenwillforsurehavethefamilydisease,whichisagreattroubleforthesefamilies.Inthepast,doctorscoulddonothingabouthereditarydiseases.Butgenetechnologycansolvethisproblemperfectly.Thescientistsjustneedtofindthewronggeneandcorrectit,andahealthychildwillbeborn.Paragraph3分述：基因技术的好处Somepeopleareworryingthatthegenetechnologycanbeusedtocreatehumanbeingsinlargequantities.Inthepastfewyears,thescientistshavesucceededincloningasheep;thereforethesepeoplepredictthathumanbabieswouldsoonbecloned.ButIbelieveclonedbabieswillnotcomeoutinlargequantities,formostcouplesintheworldcanhavebabiesintheverynormalway.Ofcourse,thegovernmentmusttakecaretocontrolgenetechnology.Paragraph4分述：基因技术可能带来的隐患第一段：基因技术研究受到人们的广泛关注第二三段：基因技术的好处第四段：基因技术可能带来的隐患文章结构现象+好处+隐患Thearticleliststhe________of_______________.概括总结整篇文章Thearticletalksabout….Thepassagedealswith….benefitsgenetechnologyTheresearchofhumangenesis…..Thegreatestthingthatgenetechnologycandoistocureseriousdiseasesthatdoctorsatpresentcanalmostdonothingwith…..Genetechnologycanhelppeopletogivebirthtomorehealthyandcleverchildren.……thegovernmentmusttakecaretocontrolgenetechnology复现率高的词Para1.直接提取Amongallthefastgrowingscienceandtechnology，theresearchofhumangenes,orbiologicalengineeringaspeoplecallit,isdrawingmoreandmoreattentionnow.Sometimes,itisahottopicdiscussedbypeople.原文整合后Genetechnologyisnowahottopic.Para2.间接整合Thegreatestthingthatgenetechnologycandoistocureseriousdiseasesthatdoctorsatpresentcanalmostdonothingwith,suchascancerandheartdisease.Everyyear,millionsofpeoplearemurderedbythesetwokillers.Andtodate,doctorshavenotfoundaneffectivewaytocurethem.Butifgenetechnologyisapplied,notonlythesetwodiseasescanbecuredcompletely,bringinghappinessandmorelivingdaystothepatients,butalsothegreatamountofmoneyspendoncuringtheirdiseasescanbesaved,andthereforeitbenefitstheeconomyaswell.Inaddition,humanlifecanbeprolonged.(延长)Withgenetechnology,peopleareabletodefeatincurablediseasessuchascancerandheartdisease,whichnotonlyprolongslifebutalsopromoteseconomy..Para2.间接整合Genetechnologycancurediseasesthatdoctorscandonothingwith,suchascancerandheartdiseases.incurableItnotonlyprolongslifebutalsopromoteseconomy.句子内部整合方法词连接语法结构连接句型连接语法结构连接句型连接genetechnologyhereditarydiseasehealthychildren方法对象目的人们可以用基因技术来避免遗传性疾病从而生出健康的孩子。inordertosothat…conquerdefeatavoidGenetechnologyhelpstoavoidhereditarydiseasesothathealthychildrenwillbeborn.Withgenetechnology,peopleareabletodefeathereditarydiseaseinordertogivebirthtohealthychildren.Para3.找关键词，扩充成句Para4.找关键句，同义词替换，改写句子Somepeopleareworryingthatthegenetechnologycanbeusedtocreatehumanbeingsinlargequantities.Itmakespeopleanxiousthatgenetechnologymayleadtothecloningoftwomanypeople.原句改写后连句成章增加连接词采用篇章结构采用连接句用于篇章的连接词逻辑关系连接词表转折yet;but;while;however;nevertheless;whereas;although;though;despitethefactthat;inspiteof;onthecontrary;ontheotherhand;evenso;incontrast;instead;unlike;differentfrom;unfortunately...表因果therefore;so;asaresult/consequence;consequently;hence;thus;accordingly;inthisway;becauseof;dueto;thanksto;owingto...表递进what'smore;what'sworse;worsestill;besides;inaddition;moreover;also;furthermore;notonly...butalso;too...to表总结inshort;inbrief;briefly;tosumup;onthewhole;inconclusion;inaword...其他副词hopefully;sadly;(un)fortunately;surprisingly...3.Withgenetechnology,humanbeingsareabletodefeatsuchincurablediseasesascancerandheartdiseasesothatnotonlyislifeprolongedbutalsoeconomyispromoted.4.Genetechnologycanbeusedtoavoidhereditarydiseasesothathealthychildrenwillbeborn.1.Genetechnologyisnowahottopic