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1.Ourgovernmentisaimingtobuildan“harmonioussociety”.1.an改为a2.Ithinkitiseverycitizen’sdutytoworkhardlytoachievethisgoal.2.hardly改为hard3.Firstly,weshouldloveourgreatmotherland,oursocietyorourschool.3.or改为and4.Secondly,weshouldberespectandloveourparents.4.删掉be5.Weshouldtrustourfellowstudentsandhelpeveryother.5.every改为each6.LeiFengsetagoodexampleforustolearnfromhim.6.删掉him7.Tobuildourcountryintoapowerfulsocialistcountry,“LeiFengSpirit”stillnecessary.7.still前面加is8.Becausehewasonlyasoldier,hemanagedtosaveaconsiderableamountofmoneyandgaveitawaytopoorpeople.8.Because改为Although/Though/While9.Whateverhewasaskedtodoandnomatterhowdifficultthetaskwas,healwaystrieshisbest.9.tries改为tried10.LeiFengdiedover30yearsbefore.10.before改为ago1.Therefore,let’staketheresponsibilitytobuildupalowcarboncitybyridingbicycles.因此，让我们负起责任来通过骑自行车建设一个低碳城市。2.WecallonallthestudentsofSeniorThreetogiveawayourusedbooks.我们号召所有高三学生来捐赠旧书。3.Iamstronglyfortheactivitybecauseitisverymeaningfulandhelpful.我强烈赞同这个活动，因为它很有意义，很有帮助。4.Ihopemybehaviorwillmakeadifference.我希望我的行为可以起到作用。5.Ashighschoolstudents,it’sourdutytotelleveryonearoundustosavewater.作为高中生，告诉身边的每一个人节约用水是我们的责任。6.Let’sstartrightnowandsparenoefforttodoalittleeveryday,everyhourandeveryminute.让我们从现在开始每天努力一点点，抓紧每一天、每一小时、每一分钟。【2011江西卷改编：骑自行车倡议】假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Let’sRideBicycles”的英语演讲比赛。请撰写一份演讲稿，主要内容包括：1．目前汽车带来的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2．骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利健康等。参考词汇：低碳生活low-carbonlife；节能energysaving满分佳作（一）Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuaformXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let’sRideBicycles”.①Asisknowntoall,withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards,carshavebecomeapopularmeansoftransport,bringinggreatconveniencetoourlife.However,theyhavealsocausedsomeproblemssuchasairpollutionandtrafficjams.Howcanwesolvetheproblemsthen?②AsfarasI’mconcerned,ridingbicyclesisagoodsolution.③Foronething,bicyclesdon’tneedanypetrolandtheyareenergy-saving.Therefore,theyareenvironmentallyfriendlybecausetheywon’tgiveoffwastegas.④Foranother,ridingbicyclesisagoodwayforustoexercise,whichisbeneficialtoourhealth.⑤Therefore,let’staketheresponsibilitytobuildupalowcarboncitybyridingbicycles.Comeonandjoinus!Thankyou!满分赏析①Asisknowntoall(众所周知)和withtheimprovementofpeople’slivingstandards(随着人们生活水平的改善)这两个表达用来引出现象，显示了语言实力；且有means作“方式”意思，是高级词汇；bringing现在分词作伴随状语；整句话显得有档次。②用AsfarasI’mconcerned(依我之见)引出自己的观点，这是必备的表达观点的套语。③两个观点用到了foronething,foranother来连接，使篇章连贯；且energy-saving,environmentallyfriendly,giveoffwastegas等描述环保的相关词汇体现了作者深厚的语言功底。④本句运用到了which引导的定语从句，which指代前面整句话的事情。⑤最后两句是加强呼吁，let’staketheresponsibilityto…和Comeonandjoinus!十分值得学习模仿。满分佳作（二）Goodmorning,everyone,IamLiHuafromXingguangMiddleSchool.Thetopicofmyspeechis“Let’sRideBicycles”.①Asourlivingstandardshaveimproved,carshaveincreasinglybecomeavailabletoordinaryfamilies.Buttoomanycarsontheroadmaycausemanyproblems.Foronething,wastegascomingfromcarshasbeenabigthreattotheenvironment.②What’smore,whilecarshavebroughtconveniencetous,theymayalsocausetrafficjams.③Inthiscase,moreandmorepeoplehavebeguntotakeupbicyclesasanalternativewaytogetaround.Ononehand,asanenergy-savingmeansoftransportation,theydon’tcauseanypollutiontotheenvironment.Besides,ridingbicyclesisagoodformofexerciseandcancontributetowhatwecalllow-carbonlife.④Therefore,let’sridebicycles,forthebenefitoftheenvironmentaswellasourownhealth.Thankyou!满分赏析①Asourlivingstandardshaveimproved用于引出一种现象，这一说法在中英文中一样常用；available属于中高难度的词汇，体现出水平。②本句的while是“尽管”的意思，引出让步状语从句。③analternativeway(另外一种可选择的方式)，alternative是较难词汇，能给评卷老师好印象。④最后一句加强呼吁，简单的一句let’sridebicycles就能起到这个作用。holdthewrongidea持有错误的观点donateblood献血doharmto对……有害asmallamountof少量的makeaquickadjustment做出快速调整patient病人survive活下来；生存haveabetterunderstandingof有更好的理解medicalknowledge医学知识setagoodexampleforsb.为某人树立好榜样holdaseriesofactivities举办一系列的活动【模拟真题：提倡无偿献血】作文原题假如你是育才中学学生会主席李华，针对目前一些地方血库纷纷告急的情况，请参照以下提示，用英文写一份倡议书，提倡无偿献血（donatebloodforfree）。要点提示：1.社会上对献血的错误认识；2.指出献血的意义；3.开展相关活动。参考词汇：血库bloodbankBoysandgirls,Recentlysomebloodbanksacrossthecountryarereportedtobeinshortsupplyofblood.Somepeopleholdthewrongideathatdonatingblooddoesharmtothedonor’shealth.Butthetruthisthatwhenasmallamountofbloodistakenout,thebodywillmakeaquickadjustmenttoworknormally.Asweknow,donatingbloodisofgreatimportance.Bloodisimportanttopatients,withoutwhichmanycan’tsurvive.Amongyoungpeoplelikeus,donatingbloodisasocialresponsibility.Weseniorhighschoolstudents,whohaveabetterunderstandingofmedicalknowledge,shouldsetagoodexampleforotherpeople.Fromnowon,ourschoolwillholdaseriesofactivitiestoexplainthebenefitsofdonatingblood.Donatenowandsavealife!TheStudents’Unioncallonsb.todosth.号召某人做某事giveaway捐献；捐赠lowergrade低年级beintendedto为……准备的promotefriendship促进友谊encourageeconomy鼓励节约behighlypraisedbysb.被某人高度赞扬bestronglyfor强烈赞成【2007福建卷改编：活动报道】假设你是李华，福建省某中学高三学生，请你根据以下学生会倡议书的内容给某英文报社写一封信，叙述拟开展活动的内容并发表自己的看法。参考词汇：增进promote；鼓励节约encourageeconomyDeareditor,IamastudentofSeniorThreeinamiddleschoolinFujianProvince....Yourssincerely,LiHua【2007福建卷改编：活动报道】Deareditor,IamastudentofSeniorThreeinamiddleschoolinFujianProvince.Inorderthatwecanmakethebestoflearningmaterials,theStudents’Unionofours