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NiceToMeetYou!陈玉伟WayneCoursedescription•NewConceptEnglishⅢ•BusinessEnglishWritingRecommendedreadingmaterials•TheMostBeautifulPosesed.HenryDavidThoreau•e.g.Augusthasnosuchadvantage.Itcomeswhenweremembernothingbutclearskies,greenfields,andsweet-smellingflowers-whentherecollectionofsnow,andice,andbleakwinds,ahsfadesfromourmindsascompletelyastheyhavedisappearedformtheearth-andyetwhatapleasanttimeitis!---HenryDavidThoreau“TheSunshineinLife”•八月没有这样的优势。它来的时候，我们只记得明朗的天空，绿绿的田野，还有芳香四溢的花朵——记忆中的冰雪，寒风都已完全消失，仿佛它们在地球上了无踪迹——然而八月是多么愉快的季节啊！•SamuelUllman“Youth”•Youthisnotentirelyatimeoflife;itisastateofmind;itisnotamatterofrosycheeks,redlipsandsuppleknees;itisatemperofthewill,aqualityoftheimagination,avigoroftheemotions;itisthefreshnessofthedeepspringsoflife.•青春不是年华，而是一种心态；不是玫瑰般的脸庞，红润的嘴唇和敏捷的双腿，而是坚韧的意志，丰富的想象力，以及无穷的激情；青春是生命深处的一股清泉。•Youthmeansthetemperamentalpredominanceofcourageovertimidity,oftheappearanceofadvantagesovertheloveofease.Thisoftenexistsinamanofsixtymorethaninaboyoftwenty.Nobodygrowsoldbymerelylivinginanumberofyears.Wegrowoldbydesertingourideals.•青春意味着勇气战胜怯懦，青春意味着冒险摒弃安逸。拥有此品质的人之中，六十岁的老人往往多于二十岁的年轻人。没有人只因年龄的增长而年老，人往往因为放弃梦想而衰老。•Yearsmaywrinkletheskin,buttogiveupenthusiasmwrinklesthesoul.Worry,doubt,self-distrust,fearanddespair---thesebowtheheartandturnthespiritbacktodust.•岁月可使肌肤长满皱纹，但放弃激情可使心灵布满灰尘。焦虑、疑惑、猜疑、恐惧和沮丧都会挫伤心灵，磨损意志。•ChickenSoupfortheSoulJackCanfieldandMarkVictorHansen•“ALifeWorthSaving”•“ItTakesCourage”•“BeYourself”“IDon'tDespairAboutKidsToday”“TheFlower”•PrideandPrejudiceJaneAustin•MobyDickHermanMelville•Time•Reader’sDigest•USAweekend•EconomicsRequirements•CompositionwritingafterclassOnecompositionover400wordswillbehandedineachmonth.•CompositionwritinginclassAnexercise-bookinclassisrequiredforclasswritingineachclass.•Reciting5articlesofNCE3CheckinclassarbitrarilyClassrules•Noabsentees•Nolatecomers•Nonoises•Notelephones•NobreakfastWhatiswriting?•Writingistherepresentationoflanguageinatextualmediumthroughtheuseofasetofsignsorsymbols(knownasawritingsystem).•Writingisanorganizedpassagethatismadeupofacompleteandcontinuoussetofsequentialsentences,whichisconstitutedofproperwordsandphraseswithacertainrules.Grammar,convention,etc..Typesofwriting•Function:•Formal---document,businesswriting,etc..•Informal---note,letter,etc..•Content:•Description•Narration•Explanation/Exposition•Argument/PersuasionHowtowrite?•Effective•Informative•Meaningful•Beeffectivemeansthearticleshouldclearlystatethepurposeofthewriter;•Beinformativemeansthatthearticleshouldprovidethereaderswithenoughinformationinordertopersuadeorconvincethereader;•Bemeaningfulmeansthatthearticleshouldstatesomethingthatdeservesthereadertothinkorthearticleputforwardsomeproblemsandgiveanefficientandpracticalsolution.HowtoimproveEnglishwriting?•Morereading•Morelistening•Morespeaking•MorewritingWritingskills•Words•Sentences•Passages•TextWords•Problems：•Weakflexibility:expensive---notcheap•Cliché:like---enjoy,prefer,lovecannotdo---failtodo,unabletodo•Translation:need---askfor,requires,demandsmake---enable,enhance,enlargeStrategies•Frequently-usedwordsinsteadofrarely-usedwordsFor:decrease,remove,stop,pause,home,houseAgainst:abate,cessation,habitation•ConcisewordsandphrasesinsteadofsentencesFor:for,if,after,graduationAgainst:forthepurposeof,intheeventthat,aftershehadgraduatedFor:Shelookedatmeandwassurprised.ShelookedatmeinsurpriseAgainst:SinceIcouldn’tfinishthework,Iaskedforherhelp.Unabletofinishthework,Iaskedforherhelp.For:Heshuthimselfupreadinganddidnotknowwhatwashappeningoutside.Against:Heshuthimselfupreading,unawareofwhatwashappeningoutside.•Concretewordsinsteadofabstractwordse.g.Chinaisabigcountry.IthasalargepopulationandChinesepeopleareverygood.Revised:Chinaisalargecountrywithanareaofover9.6millionsquarekilometersandapopulationofabout1.3billion.AndChinesepeopleareverykind/generous/warm-hearted/honest/friendly/selfless/amiable.•Variety•Trytousesynonymsandantonymse.g.首要的：crucial,prima,utmost,essential,fundamental,primary原始的：crude,primitive,original总之：inthelarge,allinall,inaword,inshort发展：evolve,develop,improve有助于：makefor,contributeto,beofgreatassistance,help不同的：distinct,different,notthesame,variousSentences•Varysentencestructuree.g.“粗心驾驶易引起车祸”a.Trafficaccidentsareinvitedbycarelessdriving.b.Carelessdrivinginvitestrafficaccidents.c.Todrivecarelesslyistoinvitetrafficaccidents.•Integratelongandshortsentencese.g.1.Thereisonepositiveresultoftherisingcrimerate.Thishasbeenthegrowthofneighborhoodcrimepreventionprograms.Theseprogramsreallywork.Theyteachcitizenstopatroltheirneighborhoods.Theyteachcitizenstoworkwiththepolice.Theyhavedramaticallyreducedcrimeincitiesandtownsacrossthecountry.Theideaiscatchingon.Revised:Onepositiveresultoftherisingcrimeratehasbeenthegrowthofneighborhoodcrimepreventionprograms.Theseprogramsreallywork.Byteachingcitizenstoworkwiththepolice,Theyhavedramaticallyreducedcrimeincitiesandtownsacrossthecountry.Theideaiscatchingon.PassagesTopicsentenceDevelopingsentenceTransitionalcomplexsentenceConcludingsentenceTopicsentence•T