大学英语四级写作点评

大学英语四级写作点评四级写作评分标准14分----切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。11分----切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，担有少量语言错误。8分----基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。5分----基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。2分----条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。0分----白卷，或作文与题目毫不相关，或只是孤立的词而无法表达思想。大学英语四级考试作文评分原则采取总体评分，就文章的总体印象给分及奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。应试策略时间分配：合理支配时间允许时间审题拟纲动笔写通读修改305205草拟提纲：建立文章的框架结构---中心思想(topicsentence)和支持要点(subtopicsentences)，以及可能涉及的一些细节。如有可能标明层次，如：I.II.III...,1.2.3...等。由于考试时间有限，提纲不必面面俱到。提纲有助更好地决定素材的取舍，有效控制文章的思路，避免由于思路不清、写一句想一句所造成的时间耗费。应试技巧1.审题：不可偏题跑题。仔细审题，理解题眼。绝不能带着模糊的概念想当然写作。2.观点：观点要明朗，直切主题。切忌兜圈子和罗嗦重复，切忌与主题不相关或关系较远的话。不求观点标新立异，只要观点阐述明了。3.篇章：选择合理段落结构，详略得当。内容发展充分，论据相对具体。切忌理论空话。注意过度语的使用。4.句子追求句型的多样性，而非句子过长、过复杂。主从句关系明确，连接准确恰当。句子之间过渡流畅，选好连接方式。句子写作基本无语法错误。5.选词选择用法有把握的词（80%familiar），适当使用短语。留心同义词、反义词的替换（交替使用）。常见套语句型PracticeSupergirlsSeizeAudiences’Heart样卷14分档(Interview)大学英语四级考试写作套句模板大学英语四级写作预测及范文四级写作常用经典句型2009年6月、12月四级写作真题及范文Homework（CrazeforCivilServiceExaminations）Extraknowledge:写作“四步定位法”大学英语四级写作的“四步三法”我去找他，他不在，我就给他留了张便条。•Iwenttofindhim.Hewasnotathome.Ileftanoteforhim.•Iwenttofindhim,buthewasnotathome.Therefore,Ileftanoteforhim.不入虎穴，焉得虎子。Ifonedoesnotenterthetiger'sden,howcanhegetatiger‘scub?聪明一世，糊涂一时。Smartasarule,butthistimeafool.•besides,moreover,what’smore,furthermore,inaddition1.增补•likewise,similarly,inthesameway常(同样地，相似地),exactlyas+从句(正如)2.比较（comparison）•but,however,nevertheless(但是)•incontrast,onthecontrary,while（相反，而……）3.转折，对比（contrast）•because,for,since+从句•becauseof,thanksto,dueto+名词4.因果•asaresult,therefore,so(所以)•aboveall(最重要的是),•infact,asamatteroffact,actually(事实上),•undoubtedly,(毫无疑问地)surely(当然)5.强调因为•although,though+从句•inspiteof/despite+名词6.让步•afterall(毕竟)•forexample,forinstance,suchas,like,say,（例如）•takesb/sthasanexample(以…为例)•inotherwords,thatis(换言之)7.举例子,解释虽然•tosumup,toconclude,allinall(总的来说)•inaword,inshort,(简而言之)8.总结•so,therefore,asaresult(of),consequently•otherwise(否则)9.推断•first(ly),second(ly),third(ly)…10.逻辑•tobeginwith(首先),aboveall(最重要的是)，firstandforemost•besides,moreover,inaddition,furthermore,what’smore(而且)•finally,lastbutnotleast,(最后)IstheCETBand4Necessary?RecentlytherehasbeenaheateddiscussionaboutwhetherthenationalCollegeEnglishTestBand4isnecessaryornot.Somepeopleareinfavorofit.theyholdthatitisaneffectivewaytourgestudentstoattachmoreimportancetoEnglishsoastoraisethelevelofEnglishinourcountry.theythinkthatitmaymotivatetheteacherstoimprovetheirteaching.Tobeginwith,Besides,,othersholdanoppositeopinion.Theymaintainthatthiskindoftestdoesnothelptoimprovethestudents’actualabilityinmasteringthelanguage,butonlyleadtotheiracquiring(获得)sometechniquestodealwiththetest.,itonlymakeslearningandteachingtest-oriented.,itonlyhelpstoproducestudentswithhighscoresbutlowabilities.HoweverMoreover/What’sworseAsaresultCEThassomenegativeaspects,IstillthinkCETisverynecessary.CETBand4,theoverallEnglishlevelofcollegestudentshasbeengreatlyraised.,studentsnowlearntostressthecomprehensivelearningskills.Ibelievethetestwillcontinuetospur（鞭策）studentstopushtheirEnglishtoahigherlevelsoastobemorecompetitiveinthenewcentury.AlthoughThankstoFurthermoreTosumup/Allinall,PracticeSupergirlsSeizeAudiences’Heart1“超级女生”节目取得了巨大的成功。2分析这一现象出现的原因。3你对“超级女生”节目的看法。UsefulWordsandExpressions:娱乐节目entertainmentprogram专业评审professionaljudgment公众投票publicvoteSupergirlsSeizeAudiences’HeartInrecentyears,thewholecountryhasbeenexcitedbyanewtypeofTVentertainmentprogram:selectingpopularstarsfromordinarypeople.Amongtheprograms,“Supergirls”isthemostpopularone.Severalreasonscontributetothesuccessof“Supergirls”.Firstofall,thisprogramadoptsabrand-newmechanismtoselectcontestants.Unliketraditionalsingingcompetitionwhereprofessionaljudgesmakethefinaldecision,TVaudienceof“Supergirls”canvotethroughtelephonecallsortextmessagestodeterminewhichcontestantsshouldbeeliminatedorstay.Inaddition,mostoftheparticipantsof“Supergirls”areyoungandfullofvitality,makingtheprogramrelaxingandentertaining.AndtheextraordinarypopularityofthefinalchampionsattractsmoreandmoreladiestoshowthemselvesonTVanddemonstratetheirsingingtalentswiththehopeofbecoming“NewStars”.AlthoughIamnotinterestedinparticipatingthisso-called“productionofstarsofcommonpeople”,Ibearnobiasagainstit.Frommypointofview,popularentertainmentshouldbediverseaslongasitisunderproperorientation.样卷14分档Now,whenapersonishuntingforajob,therewillalwaysbeajobinterviewandIthinkthejobinterviewhasalotofadvantages.Theinterviewerandtheintervieweecanknowabouteachotherthroughit.Firsttheinterviewercantellsomethingaboutthejobtotheintervieweesuchasthewage,theworkconditionsandsomethingelsewhichisrelevanttothejob.Thentheintervieweecandecidewhetherthejobisreallysuitableforhim.Second,Ithinkthejobinterviewisagoodchancefortheinterviewee,because,hecanimpresstheinterviewerbygoodbehavior.Hecanshowbothhisabilityandhisconfidence.Thentheinterviewercanfigureoutwhetherheistherightpersonforthejob.Inaword,Ithinktheinterviewwilldogoodtoboththeinterviewerandtheinterviewee.Bytheinterview,theintervieweecanfindasuitablejobandtheinterviewercanfindasuitablepersonifbothoft