高考英语写作辅导

高考英语写作辅导1.原因表达法owingtothankstobecauseofduetoonaccountof2．例词分析cover(Unit９AHelpingHand)*Thisallowance,however,isonlyenoughtocoverthemostfoundamentalneedssuchasfoodandclothing.Exercise:---Will$200______thecostofthedamage?---I’mafraidnot.Ineedatleast100moredollars.A.resembleB.includeC.coverD.affordcover:(ofmoney)beenoughforsth•1.优秀学生，精,泛结合，学习词汇,理解语法。泛读是扩展词汇最有效的方法之一2.在检测题中滚动学习词汇：词形转换、词语释意和辨析、英汉互译、选词填空、书面表达等。代词•Jimsoldmostofhisthings.Hehashardly_____leftinthehouse.•A.anythingB.everything•C.nothingD.somethinghardlyanything=almostnothing区分度很好的试题：１.Somepeoplewastealotoffood_____othersintheworldhaven’tenoughtoeat.A.afterB.whenC.asD.while•英语书面表达高考作文分类提示议论文•说明文•应用文记叙文•写作高分标准：１）覆盖所有内容要点（及格标准）；２）没有语法错误或少量的语法错误是因为尝试应用了较高级的语法结构和词汇３）有效地使用了过渡连词，使全文结构紧凑。•写作:仔细审题，找出内容要点,•高分作文评分标准的第一个要求就是“覆盖了所有的内容要点”，因此找点是写好短文的第一步。同时，也要审好人称、时态和文体。记叙文写作•3.记叙文常包含三个主要部分，开头段(beginning)：交代时间、地点、人物、事件等(when,where,whoandhow)；主体段(body)：讲述故事的情节(what)结尾段(ending)：故事结局是对全文进行归纳、总结，或思想提升．•北京市十一学校学生习作：•StoryofaTree•Oncetherewasafamilylivinginacabinunderahugetree.Therearemanystrongwindsintheareawheretheylived.However,thehugetree,whichalmostcoveredthewholeroof,seemedtobeaprotectionofthelittlecabin.Itwasasunnyday,John,thehostofthecabin,cameoutwithanaxeandstartedtocutdownthehugetreeinordertobuildanothercabinforthemselves.Thetreewhichusedtobethickandbushywascutintopartsimmediately,somefortheframeandothersfortheroof.Withthehelpofhiswife,Johnfinallyfinishedhisjob.There,aprettywoodencabinstoodstraightneartheoldone.•Afewdayslater,whiletheJohnswereworkinginthefield,astrongwindsuddenlyattackedtheircabins.Withouttheprotectionofthehugetree,theoldcabinwasblowndownatonce.ThesamewentfortheotheroneassoonasaterribleroarwentintoJohn’sears.Theyweresoterrifiedthattheyscreamedandcried.However，thetrunk,whichwasleftbesidethetwocabinswasstillstandingstraight.Therearegreatchangesthathavehappenedhere.Thereisanewclassroombuildingononesideoftheroad.Thereusedtobeaplaygroundontheothersideoftheroadbefore.Butthereisabiglibrarynow.Thereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazinesinthelibrary.Thereisanewplaygroundinthefrontoftheschool.Therearemanytreesinandaroundtheschool….•…Quiteafewchangeshavetakenplacehere.Ononesideoftheroadthereisanewclassroombuilding.Ontheotherside,wheretheplaygroundusedtobe,nowstandsanothernewbuilding—ourlibrary.Initthereareallkindsofbooks,newspapersandmagazines.Theplaygroundisnowinfrontoftheschool.Wehavealsoplantedalotoftreesinandaroundtheschool.Ihopeyou’llcomeandseeitforyourselfsomeday.某城市街头雕塑本文的写作特点：•1）由表及里，挖掘主题，•Afterobservingthesculpturecarefully,Icansee…•Fromthesculpture,Icansee…•2）立意积极，理由充分。•立意角度:Ithinkthesculpturewantstotellusthatweshouldmakeagoodcombinationofthetwocultures.•3）自圆其说，符合逻辑。•能根据自己的理解，阐明主题。开放作文Thepictureaboveshowsamanwithoutears.Ithinkearsareimportantforustohear.Withoutearscan’tcommunicatewithothersandcouldn’tgetanyadvice.问题•没有涉及图的内容。•说明部分逻辑不清。议论与说明脱节。•没有展开议论，内容欠丰富。Aswecanseefromthepicture.Anoldmanhasabignoseandhishairissolongthatcoverhisear.Sohecouldn’thearsound.Hemustbetoopoortocuthishair.IfIwereyou,Iwouldearnmoneyandcutmyhairatonce.Ascanbeseeninthepicture,thereisanoldlady.Butturnthepictureupsidedown,itturnsouttobeayoungprincess.Whatafantasticpicture!Sokeepanoptimisticmoodtoeverything,you’llfindsomethingbetterandwonderful.Forexample,ifyoufailedinanexam,don’tbesoupset.Trytothinkaboutitfromanotherdirection.Thisfailurewillremindyouinnextexamsothatyouwon’tmakethesamemistake.Sotrytobeanoptimisticpersonandthinkthingsfromdifferentviews.Thenyou’llfindthatimpossibleisnothing.(13分)开放作文（15分）•TheChinesegovernmentisconsideringcarryingoutanewpublicholidayplanthatcancelsMayDay---goldenweekholidayandaddsthreetraditionalfestivals----Tomb-SweepingDay,Dragon-BoatFestivalandtheMid-AutumnFestival.Doyouagreetotheplan?Stateatleasttworeasons.•人称：第一、第三人称•时态：一般现在时•文体：说明文•要点：１．赞同或反对该计划；•２．两个理由；３．结论开放作文学生的开放思维•1.observe/celebratemorefestivals•2.inheritthetraditoin/culture•3.removethepressureoftransportation•4.berefreshedandmoreenergeticaftertheshortbreaks•5.usetimewiselyIdoagreetotheplan.Ithinkthatwithmoretraditionalfestivalsaddedtothepublicholidayslist,theawarenessofChinesetraditionalculturewillberaised,especiallyamongtheyounggeneration,whoknowsmuchaboutChristmasDaybutlittleaboutDragon-BoatFestivalandsoon.Besides,thepolicywillhelpmanykindsofindustrydevelop,whichisrelatedtosomeserviceforbetterenjoymentduringthenewpublicfestivals.Andmaybeitwillbringmorechancesofre-employmenttomanylaid-offworkers.SoIagreetotheplan.